onemorething

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I have 14 stories published in 0 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1138 times and 12 of my stories have been cherry picked.
6 of my 362 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 6 votes

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Cherry

What if we are on our own?

Fading stars are welcome here, wounded planets, cratered moons, bring your ice and angry peaks, show me hidden oceans, bring your damage and dark...
Cherry

Therapy (rewrite)

Have rewritten. Am happy and completely unfazed by any criticism- if it doesn’t work, parts don’t work, are clunky, jar, make no sense etc then would...
Cherry

A Humpback Whale

The Humpback whale sings to shadowy neighbours as she navigates the Gerlache Strait, no wait for any fateful collision, she, unearthly, calls for...

If I had an MRI

If I had an MRI you’d see a blue van parked in a country lane, humdrum beneath an arch of trees and the green and hushed susurration of their leaves...
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Preferable to indifference

Anxiety thrusts in skirmishes, but a battle charge of fear follows, crashing defences without mercy, please, these tidal tears are not an accusation...

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6 of my comments have received 6 Great Feedback votes

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Oh, such a sad tale. I love

Posted on Wed, 17 Jul 2019

Oh, such a sad tale. I love all the additional information, pronunciation and translation etc too.

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Posted in The Story of Beddgelert (in Snowdonia)

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As an arachnophobe I found

Posted on Thu, 11 Jul 2019

As an arachnophobe I found this chilling, but very good too! Some great lines. 

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Posted in Catcher Of The Fly

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This has so many sublime

Posted on Wed, 03 Jul 2019

This has so many sublime lines, imagery and metaphor. Such an excellent piece of writing. 

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Posted in A Man Riding the Tube Train

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Clever and very well done. 

Posted on Tue, 02 Jul 2019

Clever and very well done. 

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Posted in The Waits Land

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It is a stunning poem. Have

Posted on Sat, 29 Jun 2019

It is a stunning poem. Have come back to read it several times. 

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Posted in Everyone remembers everything eventually

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Which is why I say

Posted on Wed, 28 May 2008

Which is why I say personally. I am reluctant at times to make criticisms as it seems so subjective. I'm not very good at criticising anyway as I have no idea about the technical side of things or the language to use to articulate what I want to...Read full comment

Posted in Abstract