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My stories have been read 28684 times and 124 of my stories have been cherry picked.
85 of my 931 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 87 votes

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85 of my comments have received 87 Great Feedback votes

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Brilliant rant. I think next

Posted on Wed, 25 Mar 2020

Brilliant rant. I think next time anyone has something to rant about, we should send you bullet points of the general issues and you can form it into a witty and biting rant for us. I'd pay. :)

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Posted in Just Put Me In The Fridge

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A chipolata between two

Posted on Mon, 10 Feb 2020

A chipolata between two Bratwursts. Fabulous. I loved the dog too. I liked the story enough to type my comment twice as I am on a train, made great train reading though. Now concerned about what's going to happen to the rest of those gloves...

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Posted in The Aquarium. Part 1. I’m Confessin’

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Wonderful Di, I love how this

Posted on Sat, 28 Mar 2020

Wonderful Di, I love how this ripples and rumbles to your hope at the end. Love the fanfares of dock leaves from dark mud, love all of it. :) 

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Posted in virus

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Ha. Oh dear! Not very

Posted on Wed, 25 Mar 2020

Ha. Oh dear! Not very lucrative afterall. It definitely is skillful to tell a story in just a few words, especially only 50. I would never manage, for one thing, I use far too many words to say anything at all and I'm a word hoarder too, I'd...

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Posted in Three is a Crowd

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Hi Rhiannon, thank you for

Posted on Thu, 26 Mar 2020

Hi Rhiannon, thank you for reading it. I'm glad you liked my wooded description which I take as a compliment as you write very lovely poems about the natural world. I see what you mean from your perspective about God, but of course, that is your...

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Posted in Pool in the Woods

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Mmmmm. Yeah, I'd stick to

Posted on Mon, 23 Mar 2020

Mmmmm. Yeah, I'd stick to writing if I was you, I don't think you're going to be headhunted for advertising the armed forces any time soon, unless you significantly change your ways. :)

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Posted in Sven Goes to War. Part 7. Pictures of You.

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Oh good, it sounds like you

Posted on Fri, 20 Mar 2020

Oh good, it sounds like you managed to get a longer sleep at last and ate a meal. Yes, I hope that people don't forget about all of the lessons they might have learnt when this passes too. And of course, you are in everyone's thoughts, you are so...

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Posted in First Cut

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Sometimes I am so excited

Posted on Sun, 22 Mar 2020

Sometimes I am so excited that you have put up a new part that I save it for when I think I'll need it, but it couldn't wait. Or maybe I just needed to read it now. I love your Saltburn. I loved all of it, but clever how Stanley disappears into...

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Posted in Sven Goes to War. Part 6. Dress You Up

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This is excellent and amusing

Posted on Wed, 18 Mar 2020

This is excellent and amusing . I think we need as much amusement as we can get at the moment. Rachel x

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Posted in Blood Relations

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Brilliantly written and very

Posted on Tue, 17 Mar 2020

Brilliantly written and very funny. I love all of it, but most especially the fishermen (I have written a very serious poem today about fishermen, and not at all the kind of fishermen that buy copies of Nude Women in Combat), the recorder, the...

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Posted in Sven Goes to War. Part 3. I Want to Break Free

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