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January
Inspired by a kind comment about writing.
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The Provinces of Sea Swallows
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Anthill
Morning rewrite of a weirder version of this.
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Well, I'm being generous to
Posted on Tue, 21 Jan 2020
Well, I'm being generous to myself really, more like 25 years. I was rounding down. Yes, history and Latin, a robust combination...Latin taught by a heavily bearded Irishman with a passion for the Romans, which is understandable. :)
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Read full commentPosted in The Provinces of Sea Swallows
I like this very much Luigi.
Posted on Sat, 11 Jan 2020
I like this very much Luigi. As a fellow cat lover, I feel I should point out that you have probably underestimated him - I'm sure he read the papers regularly when you weren't looking. I know that my cat has surprising political views from his...
Read full commentPosted in King of the Road
Oh no! Sorry to hear about
Posted on Sat, 11 Jan 2020
Oh no! Sorry to hear about the clouds where you are! It was so gigantic here that I had to suppress a howl at it. Yes, a poor troubled species, we are indeed. Thanks for reading my lunar offering. :)
Read full commentPosted in Wolf moon
Funny and surreal and sad.
Posted on Sat, 04 Jan 2020
Funny and surreal and sad. The jigsaw on a bed makes me feel uneasy...it might only be four pieces, but this is not an appropriate surface to do a jigsaw on... :) It reminded me a little of the film The Night of the Hunter in how your story ends...
Read full commentPosted in Meltdown part 1. In which Saltburn-by-the-Sea is not mentioned.
Beautifully written poem. :)
Posted on Thu, 02 Jan 2020
Beautifully written poem. :)
Read full commentPosted in New Year’s Eve at the Meiji Shrine, Tokyo.
I liked it the first time
Posted on Thu, 02 Jan 2020
I liked it the first time around as well as this version. Is the last word different now? That first stanza, in particular, is beautiful. :)
Read full commentPosted in comfort and joy (another go at this)
Thank you! It was a bit of an
Posted on Sat, 28 Dec 2019
Thank you! It was a bit of an odd take on the IP, and found myself unable to strong-arm a wren into this either. :)
Read full commentPosted in Decagon
Wonderful poem full of
Posted on Fri, 20 Dec 2019
Wonderful poem full of startling images. :)
Read full commentPosted in woods, late
Great. Loved the repetition
Posted on Tue, 12 Nov 2019
Great. Loved the repetition of super noodles too, made me laugh, but lots of sadnesses in this too. :)
Read full commentPosted in Shrinkage
I really like the matter-of
Posted on Mon, 04 Nov 2019
I really like the matter-of-factness of this when you can sense the depth beneath the words. I think it's a clever and affecting poem. :)
Read full commentPosted in Trying to Remember What It Was Like
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