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My stories have been read 1138 times
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What if we are on our own?
Fading stars are welcome here, wounded planets, cratered moons, bring your ice and angry peaks, show me hidden oceans, bring your damage and dark...
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Therapy (rewrite)
Have rewritten. Am happy and completely unfazed by any criticism- if it doesn’t work, parts don’t work, are clunky, jar, make no sense etc then would...
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A Humpback Whale
The Humpback whale sings to shadowy neighbours as she navigates the Gerlache Strait, no wait for any fateful collision, she, unearthly, calls for...
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If I had an MRI
If I had an MRI you’d see a blue van parked in a country lane, humdrum beneath an arch of trees and the green and hushed susurration of their leaves...
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Preferable to indifference
Anxiety thrusts in skirmishes, but a battle charge of fear follows, crashing defences without mercy, please, these tidal tears are not an accusation...
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Oh, such a sad tale. I love
Posted on Wed, 17 Jul 2019
Oh, such a sad tale. I love all the additional information, pronunciation and translation etc too.
Read full commentPosted in The Story of Beddgelert (in Snowdonia)
As an arachnophobe I found
Posted on Thu, 11 Jul 2019
As an arachnophobe I found this chilling, but very good too! Some great lines.
Read full commentPosted in Catcher Of The Fly
This has so many sublime
Posted on Wed, 03 Jul 2019
This has so many sublime lines, imagery and metaphor. Such an excellent piece of writing.
Read full commentPosted in A Man Riding the Tube Train
Clever and very well done.
Posted on Tue, 02 Jul 2019
Clever and very well done.
Read full commentPosted in The Waits Land
It is a stunning poem. Have
Posted on Sat, 29 Jun 2019
It is a stunning poem. Have come back to read it several times.
Read full commentPosted in Everyone remembers everything eventually
Which is why I say
Posted on Wed, 28 May 2008
Which is why I say personally. I am reluctant at times to make criticisms as it seems so subjective. I'm not very good at criticising anyway as I have no idea about the technical side of things or the language to use to articulate what I want to...Read full commentPosted in Abstract