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Wind in Trees by Water
A little cheesy, but wanted to explain to someone why my walks were so important to me so I wrote it in high winds whilst walking yesterday.
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This perfectly evokes the
Posted on Mon, 27 Jul 2020
This perfectly evokes the imagination vs reality of these kinds of encounters. Gave me a smile. I told someone the other day about a cyclist and I who wave to one another every morning. I got told I should get out more! Something romantic about...
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This is very lovely indeed.
Posted on Sat, 25 Jul 2020
This is very lovely indeed.
Read full commentPosted in Stars
I was going to say that it
Posted on Thu, 23 Jul 2020
I was going to say that it would be good to see the tattoo, but took it from the arm reference in the poem that it might be difficult, the soft arm twist part of the poem was really good too.
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I like the idea of sea walls
Posted on Thu, 23 Jul 2020
I like the idea of sea walls and shaping the tides connected to the moment, and the anxiety of who knows what the future will hold.
Read full commentPosted in The Moment
This made my chest ache in
Posted on Tue, 21 Jul 2020
This made my chest ache in recognition. The ache of sadness or guilt for me that I have felt before has something to do with the acceptance part of it, somehow, or acceptance because of a sense of the inescapable, don't know if that makes sense....
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I like this - wondering where
Posted on Sun, 19 Jul 2020
I like this - wondering where the breeze has been, what it brings, I like how it encompasses a lot in few words.
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What a lovely thing and a
Posted on Mon, 20 Jul 2020
What a lovely thing and a lovely poem about it. :)
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I like this. Poor tadpole.
Posted on Thu, 16 Jul 2020
I like this. Poor tadpole. One gulp and you're gone.
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Love the sipping of Western
Posted on Mon, 13 Jul 2020
Love the sipping of Western civilisation and the crosshairs of the afternoon. Nicely written exchange before the bell.
Read full commentPosted in Work Lunchbreak Flash, Alfresco at The Colonial Cafe
Some gorgeous lines in this,
Posted on Mon, 13 Jul 2020
Some gorgeous lines in this, lovely imagery, very sensory, much enjoyed.
Read full commentPosted in Meredith's Sweet-Aired Eden
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