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Between the fangs and lorries
Posted on Mon, 08 Nov 2021
Between the fangs and lorries, the sleaze and raw sewage...when is a metaphor not a metaphor? This tale is the only thing that can make me smile about its subject matter and is Pick of the Day. Do share on Facebook and Twitter.
Read full commentPosted in A Lorry Load of Sleaze
Good to read another one of
Posted on Mon, 08 Nov 2021
Good to read another one of these, enjoyed the shower of sh*t. My only quibble is that I'm not sure any Queen of the Undead would stoop as low as the Home Secretary. :)
Read full commentPosted in A Lorry Load of Sleaze
This is our Pick of the Day.
Posted on Sat, 06 Nov 2021
This is our Pick of the Day. Ongoing fabulous writing. I wanted to change your picture to tulips, but have restrained myself.
Read full commentPosted in The Long and Spectacular Life of Agnes Magnusdottir 23
A snapshot of revenge.
Posted on Sat, 06 Nov 2021
A snapshot of revenge. Cleverly done. :)
Read full commentPosted in Reckoning
This continues to be
Posted on Tue, 02 Nov 2021
This continues to be brilliant. It's very quirkily funny - the last line is perfect. This story, as a whole, always impresses upon me what an accomplished and skilful writer you are. And I think all your stories are great. That was a bit gushing...
Read full commentPosted in The Corrupted Voice
Lovely sibilance, perfect
Posted on Thu, 28 Oct 2021
Lovely sibilance, perfect reading for me as the rain patters against the window. Great poem, great last line. x
Read full commentPosted in Before Rhythm of Hours Change the Beat
Yes, wondering what happens
Posted on Wed, 27 Oct 2021
Yes, wondering what happens and where next...you never know with a crow.
Read full commentPosted in The Black Crow of Purgatory (Part 1 of 3)
Very clever and skilfully
Posted on Tue, 12 Oct 2021
Very clever and skilfully done. Loved this. It's our Pick of the Day. Do share on social media if you subscribe to such things.
Read full commentPosted in The Senile Neurologist
Hi insert, I'm glad you liked
Posted on Sun, 10 Oct 2021
Hi insert, I'm glad you liked it. Thank you! No, it's not a typo - 'raddled, ruddled, reddled' are all words used for the reddening using ochre. I used reddled because it appealed to me sound-wise. I did worry that people would assume that it...
Read full commentPosted in My Body Belongs to the Earth
This lovely poem of velvet
Posted on Thu, 30 Sep 2021
This lovely poem of velvet darkness and whiskery barbels is Pick of the Day. Some gorgeously evocative lines. I love the thought of their 'cool-eyed glances'. (I hope you don't mind, Jenny, I changed the image as the one you used had watermarks....
Read full commentPosted in Stone Loach
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