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Kingfisher

By onemorething on Sat, 27 Jun 2020

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Golden Ratio

By onemorething on Fri, 26 Jun 2020

Inspiration Point (work that responds to our weekly writing cue)

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Longest Day

By onemorething on Sat, 20 Jun 2020

A little light Saturday paganism.

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Grey Heron

By onemorething on Fri, 19 Jun 2020

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180 of my comments have received 190 Great Feedback votes

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I love the idea of the wind

Posted on Thu, 04 Jun 2020

I love the idea of the wind as a vagabond of change and the water of goodwill. Some lovely images. Rachel :)

Posted in Gliding Through Woods

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Such beautiful, grief-laden,

Posted on Sat, 30 May 2020

Such beautiful, grief-laden, weighty lines in your poem as well as images. And as well as being very erudite. I know very little about Lacan. I haven't processed the horror of what I think and feel about what happened to George Floyd yet. I found...

Posted in #BLM

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Ha ha. That's the perfect

Posted on Thu, 28 May 2020

Ha ha. That's the perfect solution, Luigi! I think I will take your advice and when people ask what the rattling noise is coming from them, I'll plead ignorance. Rachel x

Posted in Anger

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This is a sweet idea, I

Posted on Wed, 27 May 2020

This is a sweet idea, I suppose having just posted a poem about anger that listening to them would do me good! Rachel :)

Posted in Look For The Good

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There is a sad hollowing to

Posted on Thu, 28 May 2020

There is a sad hollowing to this and it's perfectly circled for me in the 'there, there'. Full of vulnerability, of subject and writer.

Posted in Lepidoptera

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I have really enjoyed your

Posted on Sun, 24 May 2020

I have really enjoyed your use of language in your latest poems. Nice images here too, as Jenny said. Rachel :)

Posted in The Ocean

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This must have been a very

Posted on Sat, 23 May 2020

This must have been a very hard job and not one that many could do, but I imagine you met a lot of people in their pain and helped them. The combination of listing and rhyme / half-rhyme work so well in this to give the sense of weightiness of...

Posted in By One's Own Hand

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So glad you enjoyed, Luigi. :

Posted on Thu, 21 May 2020

So glad you enjoyed, Luigi. :) I always revel a little when you use words like refined and elegant as I am neither refined nor elegant as a person, but I do enjoy the reflection of the compliment about my poem! Thanks for reading it. Rachel x

Posted in The Promise of Sunlight

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I love the personal elements

Posted on Wed, 13 May 2020

I love the personal elements of this that emphasise its sadness somehow. Very moving indeed and beautifully written.

Posted in Mila

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I agree, the philosophical

Posted on Tue, 12 May 2020

I agree, the philosophical drift of this from one thought leading to another and deepening made me feel sad and hopeful alternately. Love potential and experience, I wonder if it could be calculated like an equation for being. And yes,...