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Oh good, it sounds like you

Posted on Fri, 20 Mar 2020

Oh good, it sounds like you managed to get a longer sleep at last and ate a meal. Yes, I hope that people don't forget about all of the lessons they might have learnt when this passes too. And of course, you are in everyone's thoughts, you are so...

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Posted in First Cut

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Sometimes I am so excited

Posted on Sun, 22 Mar 2020

Sometimes I am so excited that you have put up a new part that I save it for when I think I'll need it, but it couldn't wait. Or maybe I just needed to read it now. I love your Saltburn. I loved all of it, but clever how Stanley disappears into...

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Posted in Sven Goes to War. Part 6. Dress You Up

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This is excellent and amusing

Posted on Wed, 18 Mar 2020

This is excellent and amusing . I think we need as much amusement as we can get at the moment. Rachel x

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Posted in Blood Relations

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Brilliantly written and very

Posted on Tue, 17 Mar 2020

Brilliantly written and very funny. I love all of it, but most especially the fishermen (I have written a very serious poem today about fishermen, and not at all the kind of fishermen that buy copies of Nude Women in Combat), the recorder, the...

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Posted in Sven Goes to War. Part 3. I Want to Break Free

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If Delicious Gifts existed I

Posted on Sun, 15 Mar 2020

If Delicious Gifts existed I would be a regular customer. I would also call 0800-GUMSHOE. I am also planning a holiday in Saltburn on Sea and it better be like visiting one of your stories. I have some serious worries about his future too. :)

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Posted in Sven Goes to War. Part 2. Private Life.

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Thank you. Am very happy that

Posted on Sat, 14 Mar 2020

Thank you. Am very happy that you liked it. No, you haven't, but you appear to be giving that a try now and I have buckled, so here you go. I find this mildly terrifying so I might hastily delete and retreat, and am not sure my dulcet tones are...

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Posted in Meditation

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I think you should get on

Posted on Thu, 12 Mar 2020

I think you should get on with it then seeing as there are members of the paying public waiting. Ok. We're not paying, but we are waiting and I'm sure that counts for something. :)

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Posted in Sven Goes to War. Part 1. Warriors of the Wasteland

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I think this is wonderful. :)

Posted on Tue, 10 Mar 2020

I think this is wonderful. :)

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Posted in Imagine if we Didn't Feel Pain

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I like the fact that it's

Posted on Sat, 07 Mar 2020

I like the fact that it's clear that it is you doing all the watching by the end of the poem.

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Posted in A very scary character

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I like the vulnerability that

Posted on Mon, 02 Mar 2020

I like the vulnerability that weaves through this. It's a really neatly written piece of nostalgia because it works its way back from a present trigger. A good reminder of why we should all #be kind. Is it wrong too that I especially like the...

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Posted in On the Spectrum

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