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Locard’s Exchange Principle
Late night poem.
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I was going to say that it
Posted on Thu, 23 Jul 2020
I was going to say that it would be good to see the tattoo, but took it from the arm reference in the poem that it might be difficult, the soft arm twist part of the poem was really good too.
Read full commentPosted in Soft water, sweet
I like the idea of sea walls
Posted on Thu, 23 Jul 2020
I like the idea of sea walls and shaping the tides connected to the moment, and the anxiety of who knows what the future will hold.
Read full commentPosted in The Moment
This made my chest ache in
Posted on Tue, 21 Jul 2020
This made my chest ache in recognition. The ache of sadness or guilt for me that I have felt before has something to do with the acceptance part of it, somehow, or acceptance because of a sense of the inescapable, don't know if that makes sense....
Read full commentPosted in Recital
I like this - wondering where
Posted on Sun, 19 Jul 2020
I like this - wondering where the breeze has been, what it brings, I like how it encompasses a lot in few words.
Read full commentPosted in breezy
What a lovely thing and a
Posted on Mon, 20 Jul 2020
What a lovely thing and a lovely poem about it. :)
Read full commentPosted in "Anna's Blanket"
I like this. Poor tadpole.
Posted on Thu, 16 Jul 2020
I like this. Poor tadpole. One gulp and you're gone.
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Love the sipping of Western
Posted on Mon, 13 Jul 2020
Love the sipping of Western civilisation and the crosshairs of the afternoon. Nicely written exchange before the bell.
Read full commentPosted in Work Lunchbreak Flash, Alfresco at The Colonial Cafe
Some gorgeous lines in this,
Posted on Mon, 13 Jul 2020
Some gorgeous lines in this, lovely imagery, very sensory, much enjoyed.
Read full commentPosted in Meredith's Sweet-Aired Eden
Beautiful, Di. Lovely imagery
Posted on Fri, 10 Jul 2020
Beautiful, Di. Lovely imagery and loved the ant punctuation and lovelorn grasshoppers too.
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Oh, it already does. Botres,
Posted on Sun, 05 Jul 2020
Oh, it already does. Botres, son of Eumelus tastes some of a ram's brain that was intended as part of an offering to Apollo. Father is enraged, kills son, Apollo, merciful, brings him back to life, but as a bee eater. Just too minor a tale for...
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