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Rewrite of something I was happy with then suddenly very unhappy with. I think now this means I'm just confused.

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115 of my comments have received 119 Great Feedback votes

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Another lovely

Posted on Fri, 01 Nov 2019

Another lovely autobiographical piece to read. I love how you sequentially share all the important details that gently reveal the twists and turns of what happened both in terms of events and how you felt, it makes these so interesting and...

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Posted in The Last Man in my Life

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This is brilliant. 

Posted on Thu, 24 Oct 2019

This is brilliant. 

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Posted in Birthday Song

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I'm having such a bad day

Posted on Thu, 24 Oct 2019

I'm having such a bad day hence my maudlin offering (which has reminded me of the perils of impulsive posting on the internet), however, it has made me smile that you have posted a much more succinct poem about uncertainty which cleverly leaves a...

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Posted in Uncertainties

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This was so good, I went back

Posted on Thu, 24 Oct 2019

This was so good, I went back to read all the preceding ones. Completely riveting. I think it's the detail and honesty in them. Thank you for sharing them, they make great reading. :)

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Posted in Al in Minneapolis

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This is unsettling to me and

Posted on Sun, 13 Oct 2019

This is unsettling to me and comforting at the same time. So well captured. 

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Posted in Strange Light

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Amazing poem. :)

Posted on Thu, 03 Oct 2019

Amazing poem. :)

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Posted in American Diaspora

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Lovely, really like the

Posted on Thu, 29 Aug 2019

Lovely, really like the cyclical element to this. Owls are magnificent. :)

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Posted in With Obsidian Eyes

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It is very beautiful indeed.

Posted on Mon, 26 Aug 2019

It is very beautiful indeed. :)

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Posted in Harpocrates

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Jenny, I love your jellyfish

Posted on Thu, 22 Aug 2019

Jenny, I love your jellyfish - terrifying! Your description of it is beautifully done ‘ghostly, Seraph angel’ and works well with the story. They are such alien creatures. I guess we can both thank the jellyfish for being such weird and wonderful...

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Posted in Strange Happenings

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This is a great poem, so many

Posted on Wed, 21 Aug 2019

This is a great poem, so many brilliant lines, loved, ‘vertigo gives fear to stumble’ amongst pretty much all the rest. :)

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Posted in Sweet Thing

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