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Anoetic
This is not a word from the dictionary of obscure sorrows. To save anyone looking it up (if needed) as I realise there is a danger of becoming irritating despite Luigi’s point that it inspires curiousity, it means a feeling that cannot be represented in thought or the unthinkable.
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Kenopsia
This is another word from the Dictionary of Obscure Sorrows, but written for the Inspiration Point.
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The Courtship of Lapwings
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Bonfire of Olive Branches
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So lovely. Some very
Posted on Sun, 28 Jul 2019
So lovely. Some very beautiful lines.
Read full commentPosted in grass/july
Thanks David. Just the
Posted on Fri, 26 Jul 2019
Thanks David. Just the thought of Boris Johnson gives me a shudder. It would be nice to think though, wouldn’t it, that we could all embrace more of our humanity. Thanks for reading my poem and leaving such a thoughtful comment.
Read full commentPosted in I am not a statistic
This has so many sublime
Posted on Wed, 03 Jul 2019
This has so many sublime lines, imagery and metaphor. Such an excellent piece of writing.
Read full commentPosted in A Man Riding the Tube Train
Clever and very well done.
Posted on Tue, 02 Jul 2019
Clever and very well done.
Read full commentPosted in The Waits Land
It is a stunning poem. Have
Posted on Sat, 29 Jun 2019
It is a stunning poem. Have come back to read it several times.
Read full commentPosted in Everyone remembers everything eventually
I liked this, could picture
Posted on Mon, 21 Jul 2008
I liked this, could picture it. It had a surreal quality that I appreciated. Re getting them off, ho ho ...I have received instruction in this twice so should remember and you need to "/cite" except "" should be <> to close italics and same...Read full commentPosted in The Universal Backlot Wedding
Which is why I say
Posted on Wed, 28 May 2008
Which is why I say personally. I am reluctant at times to make criticisms as it seems so subjective. I'm not very good at criticising anyway as I have no idea about the technical side of things or the language to use to articulate what I want to...Read full commentPosted in Abstract
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