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This is excellent. A perfect

Posted on Sat, 22 Feb 2020

This is excellent. A perfect poem for the picture. Love the use of rot and rancid and putrid, really conjured up the stink of it all. And the picture is amazing too. :)

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Posted in September 15th 2008

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I like the idea of this. I

Posted on Fri, 21 Feb 2020

I like the idea of this. I like the repetition and I like the stark lines. :) 

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Posted in I've forgotten

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Oh god. Imagine the

Posted on Thu, 20 Feb 2020

Oh god. Imagine the disappointment. Just a poem. Not a boob in sight. 

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Posted in Looking at Klimt’s Frieze for Beethoven

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So sad, sorry for you and

Posted on Thu, 20 Feb 2020

So sad, sorry for you and Frankie. It's a very precious thing, the love between us and our pets. 

 

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Posted in To my Best Friend...(Frankie)

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You're right, now I'm

Posted on Wed, 19 Feb 2020

You're right, now I'm imagining Boris trying to explain Pluto and Charon to Trump through role play:
 

'But it's my turn to be Pluto, Boris.' 

'Just ferry the dead souls to me, Donald',

Just goes to show too how...

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Posted in Pluto’s ode to Charon

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Ha. Oh dear. I feel like I

Posted on Wed, 19 Feb 2020

Ha. Oh dear. I feel like I made you work for it. Pluto is pretty special in its own icy way, isn't it, poor unplaneted thing that it is. I think we should definitely send T and B - Team TB as explorers in a Wallace and Gromit style rocket. Who...

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Posted in Pluto’s ode to Charon

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I'd like to say I'd had none,

Posted on Mon, 17 Feb 2020

I'd like to say I'd had none, being a lady, just a vivid imagination, so that's all I will say. :) In a way, mudskippers are so charming that it seems insulting to have cast them in a poem about one night stands, but they're not very romantic,...

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Posted in One Night Stand

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Love the nursed fireflies and

Posted on Wed, 12 Feb 2020

Love the nursed fireflies and that they are just yours. Very comforting piece. :)

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Posted in Jar of Lights

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Yes, this is great. Books are

Posted on Wed, 12 Feb 2020

Yes, this is great. Books are insulation and love the other things you have woven in: conversations as prayers for example, and the equality of a library. Lovely. :)

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Posted in Refuge

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Gorgeous Di. 'Tying time

Posted on Tue, 04 Feb 2020

Gorgeous Di. 'Tying time together'! What a beautiful line.

Have retweeted it because I have a Twitter account even though I have no idea what I am doing! :) Lovely poem. So much promise of Spring. :)

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Posted in Present

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