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This was so good, I went back
Posted on Thu, 24 Oct 2019
This was so good, I went back to read all the preceding ones. Completely riveting. I think it's the detail and honesty in them. Thank you for sharing them, they make great reading. :)
Read full commentPosted in Al in Minneapolis
Beautiful, Di, full of
Posted on Mon, 07 Oct 2019
Beautiful, Di, full of richness and colour. :)
Read full commentPosted in appeal
This is unsettling to me and
Posted on Sun, 13 Oct 2019
This is unsettling to me and comforting at the same time. So well captured.
Read full commentPosted in Strange Light
Amazing poem. :)
Posted on Thu, 03 Oct 2019
Amazing poem. :)
Read full commentPosted in American Diaspora
So beautiful. I love this. '
Posted on Tue, 24 Sep 2019
So beautiful. I love this. ' swollen seconds full of sun.' and ' joined dots, clotting to a mass of dark.' Inspired lines. Very clever idea too of them as full stops.
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Breath-taking imagery. Quite
Posted on Sun, 15 Sep 2019
Breath-taking imagery. Quite stunning. :)
Read full commentPosted in wings, late summer
Lovely, really like the
Posted on Thu, 29 Aug 2019
Lovely, really like the cyclical element to this. Owls are magnificent. :)
Read full commentPosted in With Obsidian Eyes
Jenny, I love your jellyfish
Posted on Thu, 22 Aug 2019
Jenny, I love your jellyfish - terrifying! Your description of it is beautifully done ‘ghostly, Seraph angel’ and works well with the story. They are such alien creatures. I guess we can both thank the jellyfish for being such weird and wonderful...
Read full commentPosted in Strange Happenings
This is a great poem, so many
Posted on Wed, 21 Aug 2019
This is a great poem, so many brilliant lines, loved, ‘vertigo gives fear to stumble’ amongst pretty much all the rest. :)
Read full commentPosted in Sweet Thing
This is really good. I think
Posted on Tue, 20 Aug 2019
This is really good. I think it encapsulates the issues / dilemmas of antidepressants really well for those who take them. I like how you’ve managed to include the routine submission to taking them too. It’s a sad poem, but an experience that is...
Read full commentPosted in anti depressants
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