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The bare bones of trees

By onemorething on Sun, 29 Dec 2019

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Decagon

By onemorething on Sat, 28 Dec 2019

Image is from Wikipedia, not wikimedia commons, but I think it's ok as I don't think a shape is owned by anyone.

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Present

By onemorething on Thu, 26 Dec 2019

Another day, another wren. However, it is Wren Day so I think I should be forgiven.

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God rest ye merry, gentlemen

By onemorething on Sun, 22 Dec 2019

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I have really enjoyed your

Posted on Sun, 24 May 2020

I have really enjoyed your use of language in your latest poems. Nice images here too, as Jenny said. Rachel :)

Posted in The Ocean

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So glad you enjoyed, Luigi. :

Posted on Thu, 21 May 2020

So glad you enjoyed, Luigi. :) I always revel a little when you use words like refined and elegant as I am neither refined nor elegant as a person, but I do enjoy the reflection of the compliment about my poem! Thanks for reading it. Rachel x

Posted in The Promise of Sunlight

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I love the personal elements

Posted on Wed, 13 May 2020

I love the personal elements of this that emphasise its sadness somehow. Very moving indeed and beautifully written.

Posted in Mila

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Sounds very scary Jenny. I'm

Posted on Sun, 10 May 2020

Sounds very scary Jenny. I'm sure they can feel like they are terrorising an area when they do this. Rachel :)

Posted in Racing Madness

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Totally brilliant. Love it. :

Posted on Sun, 27 Oct 2019

Totally brilliant. Love it. :)

Posted in Seven Nights in the Flamingo Hotel

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Seeds of suspicion is such a

Posted on Sat, 09 May 2020

Seeds of suspicion is such a clever take on the IP. Great. Rachel x

Posted in Planting the Seed

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I want to read quirky stories

Posted on Sat, 09 May 2020

I want to read quirky stories with gay characters in them. As pointed out in the linked article, mainstream publishers are missing a trick. Also when I think about how important reading was (still is) to me as a child, mainstream publishers are...

Posted in Flamingo Dreams

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Startlingly brilliant and

Posted on Fri, 08 May 2020

Startlingly brilliant and very moving. Rachel :)

Posted in All the lost places

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Nothing wrong with magpies.

Posted on Tue, 05 May 2020

Nothing wrong with magpies. We are all magpies one way or another! I think it should be encouraged. Rachel x

Posted in A Literary Squirrel

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This is so lovely. Perfectly

Posted on Tue, 05 May 2020

This is so lovely. Perfectly conjured up the evolutionary going forward in time and backwards to memory. Loved it. Agreed - many beautiful words. Rachel :)