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History

By onemorething on Mon, 17 Feb 2020

Rewrite of something I was happy with then suddenly very unhappy with. I think now this means I'm just confused.

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One Night Stand

By onemorething on Mon, 17 Feb 2020

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Evening Star

By onemorething on Sun, 09 Feb 2020

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Worm Rose

By onemorething on Sat, 08 Feb 2020

I wrote a poem called Shallow Graves once. I have reused the title as I have lost the poem. I don't think it was very cheery. In Sweden, dandelions are called worm roses.

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I like this. Poor tadpole.

Posted on Thu, 16 Jul 2020

I like this. Poor tadpole. One gulp and you're gone.

Posted in Yikes

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Love the sipping of Western

Posted on Mon, 13 Jul 2020

Love the sipping of Western civilisation and the crosshairs of the afternoon. Nicely written exchange before the bell.

Posted in Work Lunchbreak Flash, Alfresco at The Colonial Cafe

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Beautiful, Di. Lovely imagery

Posted on Fri, 10 Jul 2020

Beautiful, Di. Lovely imagery and loved the ant punctuation and lovelorn grasshoppers too.

Posted in 10th july grasshopper

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Oh, it already does. Botres,

Posted on Sun, 05 Jul 2020

Oh, it already does. Botres, son of Eumelus tastes some of a ram's brain that was intended as part of an offering to Apollo. Father is enraged, kills son, Apollo, merciful, brings him back to life, but as a bee eater. Just too minor a tale for...

Posted in Bee eaters

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Thank you for making me laugh

Posted on Mon, 29 Jun 2020

Thank you for making me laugh on a Monday, not an easy feat. Rhymes are so nicely done too. Rachel x

Posted in The Cherry Orchard

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Thanks Drew! x Insect week,

Posted on Sun, 28 Jun 2020

Thanks Drew! x Insect week, who knew, I could have written about a number of ex-boyfriends, but opted for bluebottles.

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This is a very dreamy, misty,

Posted on Sun, 28 Jun 2020

This is a very dreamy, misty, floaty one, like a Monet painting indeed. Enjoyed the moony wistfulness of it. :)

Posted in the crescent of our strawberry moon

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Every line is beautiful. Love

Posted on Thu, 25 Jun 2020

Every line is beautiful. Love this, Di. :)

Posted in june 25th, woods after a hot day

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Very lovely Di, you have

Posted on Mon, 22 Jun 2020

Very lovely Di, you have captured all the different moments of a walk so well: wonder, excitement, sadness, light and shade. Rachel :)

Posted in june 20th

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A lot to take in, as

Posted on Sun, 14 Jun 2020

A lot to take in, as airyfairy said, but things that stand out straight away - the outsider does not yearn to be tolerated and inclusion is not the same as belonging. Rachel :)