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Wolf moon
Very beautiful last night.
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There is hope here
This is not strictly what was requested for IP. I imagine it was more a 'fresh start' request than this, but I latched onto the word hope so I'm still claiming it meets the IP criteria...
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To the belly of an osprey
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You can’t cling to something once it has gone.
The photo is of a splendid fairy wren. I was doing a bit of reading about them and then read all the updates for this morning about the bushfires and found the koala videos very upsetting.
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This is a great poem, so many
Posted on Wed, 21 Aug 2019
This is a great poem, so many brilliant lines, loved, ‘vertigo gives fear to stumble’ amongst pretty much all the rest. :)
Read full commentPosted in Sweet Thing
This is really good. I think
Posted on Tue, 20 Aug 2019
This is really good. I think it encapsulates the issues / dilemmas of antidepressants really well for those who take them. I like how you’ve managed to include the routine submission to taking them too. It’s a sad poem, but an experience that is...
Read full commentPosted in anti depressants
I like the ideas, the use of
Posted on Tue, 20 Aug 2019
I like the ideas, the use of speech and the effort of your rhymes. You hint at the father being difficult, ‘taunting’, but don’t reveal enough perhaps here for me? I guess I think you could base it more on this? What are you trying to tell / say...
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These are very sweet and nice
Posted on Mon, 19 Aug 2019
These are very sweet and nice to hear you reading them. You have captured childish states well with these, I think. :)
Read full commentPosted in KidsSpeak
This is a lovely, delicate
Posted on Thu, 15 Aug 2019
This is a lovely, delicate poem. Like a leaf of a poem actually with its hint of darkness too. I loved, ‘breathe leaf breath’ and the threatening wind.
Read full commentPosted in airmail from the amazon (august 2018)
This is very lovely. I like
Posted on Wed, 14 Aug 2019
This is very lovely. I like your use of emphasis, but all wonderful.
Read full commentPosted in prairie river flowing
Rhiannon, these are so good.
Posted on Mon, 12 Aug 2019
Rhiannon, these are so good. I have been popping back to read them in turn. Though I enjoyed hearing your Welsh accent too - which is poetic in itself, I think. April and December are my favourites - perhaps for what they describe as much as your...
Read full commentPosted in Through the year month by month
Such an interesting piece of
Posted on Tue, 13 Aug 2019
Such an interesting piece of writing about memory. Enjoyed it very much. Made me think of synapses as light or stars. Lovely.
Read full commentPosted in Remembering
Aha, so this is the lost ID
Posted on Thu, 01 Aug 2019
Aha, so this is the lost ID poem! It's very good indeed and as Rhiannon says above, neatly done. Also I missed passports on my long list of things that would have my name on! (I might edit to see if I can squeeze passports in!) I remember this...
Read full commentPosted in Stateless in New York
So lovely. Some very
Posted on Sun, 28 Jul 2019
So lovely. Some very beautiful lines.
Read full commentPosted in grass/july
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