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I did post this last Saturday for the Inspiration Point, but then took it down after about ten minutes as I felt uncomfortable with some of it. So I have chopped some parts and extended others.
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Ha ha. That's the perfect
Posted on Thu, 28 May 2020
Ha ha. That's the perfect solution, Luigi! I think I will take your advice and when people ask what the rattling noise is coming from them, I'll plead ignorance. Rachel x
So glad you enjoyed, Luigi. :) I always revel a little when you use words like refined and elegant as I am neither refined nor elegant as a person, but I do enjoy the reflection of the compliment about my poem! Thanks for reading it. Rachel x
I agree, the philosophical drift of this from one thought leading to another and deepening made me feel sad and hopeful alternately. Love potential and experience, I wonder if it could be calculated like an equation for being. And yes,...
Ha ha. That's the perfect
Posted on Thu, 28 May 2020
Ha ha. That's the perfect solution, Luigi! I think I will take your advice and when people ask what the rattling noise is coming from them, I'll plead ignorance. Rachel x
Read full commentPosted in Anger
This is a sweet idea, I
Posted on Wed, 27 May 2020
This is a sweet idea, I suppose having just posted a poem about anger that listening to them would do me good! Rachel :)
Read full commentPosted in Look For The Good
There is a sad hollowing to
Posted on Thu, 28 May 2020
There is a sad hollowing to this and it's perfectly circled for me in the 'there, there'. Full of vulnerability, of subject and writer.
Read full commentPosted in Lepidoptera
I have really enjoyed your
Posted on Sun, 24 May 2020
I have really enjoyed your use of language in your latest poems. Nice images here too, as Jenny said. Rachel :)
Read full commentPosted in The Ocean
So glad you enjoyed, Luigi. :
Posted on Thu, 21 May 2020
So glad you enjoyed, Luigi. :) I always revel a little when you use words like refined and elegant as I am neither refined nor elegant as a person, but I do enjoy the reflection of the compliment about my poem! Thanks for reading it. Rachel x
Read full commentPosted in The Promise of Sunlight
I love the personal elements
Posted on Wed, 13 May 2020
I love the personal elements of this that emphasise its sadness somehow. Very moving indeed and beautifully written.
Read full commentPosted in Mila
I agree, the philosophical
Posted on Tue, 12 May 2020
I agree, the philosophical drift of this from one thought leading to another and deepening made me feel sad and hopeful alternately. Love potential and experience, I wonder if it could be calculated like an equation for being. And yes,...
Read full commentPosted in Out of body rambling
Sounds very scary Jenny. I'm
Posted on Sun, 10 May 2020
Sounds very scary Jenny. I'm sure they can feel like they are terrorising an area when they do this. Rachel :)
Read full commentPosted in Racing Madness
Totally brilliant. Love it. :
Posted on Sun, 27 Oct 2019
Totally brilliant. Love it. :)
Read full commentPosted in Seven Nights in the Flamingo Hotel
Seeds of suspicion is such a
Posted on Sat, 09 May 2020
Seeds of suspicion is such a clever take on the IP. Great. Rachel x
Read full commentPosted in Planting the Seed
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