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I enjoyed this. A good read.

Posted on Fri, 31 Jul 2020

I enjoyed this. A good read. I got to the end of the paragraph before the JFK paragraph, but in a way I was cheating because I'd already read it once so I knew I had to read fast (and it's easier to kid yourself a second time that you're reading...

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Posted in Radar Readar Reader

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I like this Penny, and I

Posted on Sun, 02 Aug 2020

I like this Penny, and I think that is so true that we are each viewing the world through our own prisms of experience. Prisms is such a good way of framing it. I like the way too that you take this from the individual to all the billions of us...

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Posted in "Perception"

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I like the idea of marmalade,

Posted on Sat, 01 Aug 2020

I like the idea of marmalade, buttered toast and sunlight. I'm sure the willow is speaking in code too - trees talk to each other regularly. It's a pity we can't hear them. The willow as a veil / grieving is a lovely image too. Very nice thoughts...

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Posted in Time Was

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Thanks ld, glad you thought

Posted on Sat, 01 Aug 2020

Thanks ld, glad you thought so. Triboelectrical is not a word I made up, it is the word for static electricity which is shared, in this case, between bees and flowers. The bees build static in flight which leaves them positively charged, they are...

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Posted in Electric Bees

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Well, I have only David

Posted on Sat, 01 Aug 2020

Well, I have only David Attenborough to thank for this one. I saw a segment about bees and electrical signals and then looked it up and read a bit about it. Yes, you're right about smell. I wonder what chemical signals we miss as a result of...

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Posted in Electric Bees

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Lovely memories, Ed, full of

Posted on Fri, 31 Jul 2020

Lovely memories, Ed, full of sunshine. Love the tile too.

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Posted in Cherry Dreamin'

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This is great. You have a

Posted on Fri, 31 Jul 2020

This is great. You have a brilliant way of writing something so that it makes you smile as well as see the depth of it. I probably haven't explained that very well, but I know what I meant and it is a good thing. Also I'm going to memorise that...

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Posted in Minnesota Fats

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Thanks littleditty, am glad

Posted on Fri, 31 Jul 2020

Thanks littleditty, am glad you like my raptor pondering. Yes, just recycling. The buzzards / grouse situation is grotesque, so distressing. Yeah, humans indeed, all the mindlessly cruel stuff that we do is just inexcusable. Thanks for reading it...

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Posted in The Diplomacy of Vultures

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This is very lovely indeed. 

Posted on Sat, 25 Jul 2020

This is very lovely indeed. 

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Posted in Stars

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I was going to say that it

Posted on Thu, 23 Jul 2020

I was going to say that it would be good to see the tattoo, but took it from the arm reference in the poem that it might be difficult, the soft arm twist part of the poem was really good too. 

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