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I did post this last Saturday for the Inspiration Point, but then took it down after about ten minutes as I felt uncomfortable with some of it. So I have chopped some parts and extended others.

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508 of my comments have received 552 Great Feedback votes

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Perfect! Will look forward to

Posted on Wed, 18 Nov 2020

Perfect! Will look forward to the dancing frogs and rainy instalment in the chronicles of Saltburn. I think you should have exotic birds too. Perhaps an influx of them that terrifies the gulls. 

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Posted in Monsoon

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I enjoyed this, and Part 1.

Posted on Wed, 18 Nov 2020

I enjoyed this, and Part 1. Is there a Part 2? I couldn't find it. (Also as a Devon-born, cider-swilling pedant, I wonder if you mean Barnstaple rather than Barnstable? Or perhaps it's a fictional name.)

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Posted in Empire State (Part Three) - The Devil in Tintagel

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A very tranquil poem Jenny,

Posted on Tue, 17 Nov 2020

A very tranquil poem Jenny, and it made me think that your poems always convey a sense of peace and calm. Lovely. Rachel :)

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Posted in Aware Of Letting Go

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Yes they do! And it makes me

Posted on Mon, 02 Nov 2020

Yes they do! And it makes me love them all the more! I will definitely be attending the reading event, I loved it last time. Whether I pluck up the courage to read something is another matter, I have a couple of weeks to build bravery muscles...

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Posted in Screech

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Love the crinoline too and

Posted on Sat, 31 Oct 2020

Love the crinoline too and the connecting threads in this. This has hints of haunting, yet also reassuring. :)

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Posted in Shadows Of The Past

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A lovely start to a fairytale

Posted on Sat, 24 Oct 2020

A lovely start to a fairytale is our Pick of the Day. A very sweet story beginning here Jenny. 

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Posted in Behold The Faerie Realm

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Liked this Luigi, I worry

Posted on Fri, 23 Oct 2020

Liked this Luigi, I worry about all creatures who rely on snow and ice. Sweet little birds. x 

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Posted in The Glacier Bird

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I love the two together

Posted on Mon, 19 Oct 2020

I love the two together actually, I like the contrast and the use of language is a treat to read. I hugged a tree yesterday, much to my friend's horror - I wanted to see if it helped, it did a bit, though I could have done without the scorn!...

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Posted in pool, october

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I love how you've balanced

Posted on Fri, 09 Oct 2020

I love how you've balanced darkness with a sense of kindness and hope. It's Pick of the Day. Do feel free to change the image if you're not happy with it. 

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Posted in Gatorland

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A very romantic poem. Enjoyed

Posted on Thu, 01 Oct 2020

A very romantic poem. Enjoyed reading it, Jenny. It's nice to think of you as a chiffchaff. Rachel :)

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Posted in After Dark

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