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Waka for Murasaki Shikibu

Since it is the start of Women's History Month I've attempted a waka (5,7,5,7,7) though I might have taken a bit of a liberty with the form.
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The Fox Hunt

This painting is by Wilmslow Homer (1893), fox frightening crows, crows frightening fox. I especially like that it's a coastal scene and the red berries, and the dark glower of crows.

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481 of my comments have received 517 Great Feedback votes

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This made my chest ache in

Posted on Tue, 21 Jul 2020

This made my chest ache in recognition. The ache of sadness or guilt for me that I have felt before has something to do with the acceptance part of it, somehow, or acceptance because of a sense of the inescapable, don't know if that makes sense....

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Posted in Recital

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I like this - wondering where

Posted on Sun, 19 Jul 2020

I like this - wondering where the breeze has been, what it brings, I like how it encompasses a lot in few words. 

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Posted in breezy

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What a lovely thing and a

Posted on Mon, 20 Jul 2020

What a lovely thing and a lovely poem about it. :)

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Posted in "Anna's Blanket"

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I like this. Poor tadpole.

Posted on Thu, 16 Jul 2020

I like this. Poor tadpole. One gulp and you're gone. 

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Posted in Yikes

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Love the sipping of Western

Posted on Mon, 13 Jul 2020

Love the sipping of Western civilisation and the crosshairs of the afternoon. Nicely written exchange before the bell. 

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Posted in Work Lunchbreak Flash, Alfresco at The Colonial Cafe

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Beautiful, Di. Lovely imagery

Posted on Fri, 10 Jul 2020

Beautiful, Di. Lovely imagery and loved the ant punctuation and lovelorn grasshoppers too. 

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Posted in 10th july grasshopper

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Oh, it already does. Botres,

Posted on Sun, 05 Jul 2020

Oh, it already does. Botres, son of Eumelus tastes some of a ram's brain that was intended as part of an offering to Apollo. Father is enraged, kills son, Apollo, merciful, brings him back to life, but as a bee eater. Just too minor a tale for...

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Posted in Bee eaters

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Thank you for making me laugh

Posted on Mon, 29 Jun 2020

Thank you for making me laugh on a Monday, not an easy feat. Rhymes are so nicely done too. Rachel x

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Posted in The Cherry Orchard

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Thanks Drew! x Insect week,

Posted on Sun, 28 Jun 2020

Thanks Drew! x Insect week, who knew, I could have written about a number of ex-boyfriends, but opted for bluebottles. 

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Posted in Bluebottle

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This is a very dreamy, misty,

Posted on Sun, 28 Jun 2020

This is a very dreamy, misty, floaty one, like a Monet painting indeed. Enjoyed the moony wistfulness of it. :)

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Posted in the crescent of our strawberry moon

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