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Another day, another wren. However, it is Wren Day so I think I should be forgiven.

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435 of my comments have received 464 Great Feedback votes

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As mentioned above, I like

Posted on Tue, 05 Nov 2019

As mentioned above, I like how you've woven the details and stresses of moving and sadnesses with the initial shocks in the house and bonfire night. Glad it had a happy ending. :)

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Posted in New Beginnings

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I like that you have included

Posted on Thu, 31 Oct 2019

I like that you have included that we don't require them to have permits and welcome them. If only we could apply this to all migrants. I love birds so enjoyed your visiting geese. :)

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Posted in Geese

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Your poems are always so

Posted on Thu, 31 Oct 2019

Your poems are always so sensory. 

'a dashing sky scatter

of black stars swirl' 

'rain-sound wings'

Very lovely. :)

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Posted in starlings

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Great observations and

Posted on Fri, 01 Nov 2019

Great observations and cleverly written with humour and pathos. Black leather waistcoat, oof, no. Enjoyed reading. :)

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Posted in With a Blue Jug in Her Hand

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Another lovely

Posted on Fri, 01 Nov 2019

Another lovely autobiographical piece to read. I love how you sequentially share all the important details that gently reveal the twists and turns of what happened both in terms of events and how you felt, it makes these so interesting and...

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Posted in The Last Man in my Life

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Ha. CZJ shops in Asda not

Posted on Mon, 21 Oct 2019

Ha. CZJ shops in Asda not Morrison's. That'll be why. 

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Posted in Last Mango in Morrison's

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This is brilliant. 

Posted on Thu, 24 Oct 2019

This is brilliant. 

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Posted in Birthday Song

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I'm having such a bad day

Posted on Thu, 24 Oct 2019

I'm having such a bad day hence my maudlin offering (which has reminded me of the perils of impulsive posting on the internet), however, it has made me smile that you have posted a much more succinct poem about uncertainty which cleverly leaves a...

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Posted in Uncertainties

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This was so good, I went back

Posted on Thu, 24 Oct 2019

This was so good, I went back to read all the preceding ones. Completely riveting. I think it's the detail and honesty in them. Thank you for sharing them, they make great reading. :)

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Posted in Al in Minneapolis

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Beautiful, Di, full of

Posted on Mon, 07 Oct 2019

Beautiful, Di, full of richness and colour. :)

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Posted in appeal

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