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Brilliant rant. I think next
Posted on Wed, 25 Mar 2020
Brilliant rant. I think next time anyone has something to rant about, we should send you bullet points of the general issues and you can form it into a witty and biting rant for us. I'd pay. :)
A chipolata between two Bratwursts. Fabulous. I loved the dog too. I liked the story enough to type my comment twice as I am on a train, made great train reading though. Now concerned about what's going to happen to the rest of those gloves...
Ha. Oh dear! Not very lucrative afterall. It definitely is skillful to tell a story in just a few words, especially only 50. I would never manage, for one thing, I use far too many words to say anything at all and I'm a word hoarder too, I'd...
Hi Rhiannon, thank you for reading it. I'm glad you liked my wooded description which I take as a compliment as you write very lovely poems about the natural world. I see what you mean from your perspective about God, but of course, that is your...
Mmmmm. Yeah, I'd stick to writing if I was you, I don't think you're going to be headhunted for advertising the armed forces any time soon, unless you significantly change your ways. :)
Oh good, it sounds like you managed to get a longer sleep at last and ate a meal. Yes, I hope that people don't forget about all of the lessons they might have learnt when this passes too. And of course, you are in everyone's thoughts, you are so...
Sometimes I am so excited that you have put up a new part that I save it for when I think I'll need it, but it couldn't wait. Or maybe I just needed to read it now. I love your Saltburn. I loved all of it, but clever how Stanley disappears into...
Brilliantly written and very funny. I love all of it, but most especially the fishermen (I have written a very serious poem today about fishermen, and not at all the kind of fishermen that buy copies of Nude Women in Combat), the recorder, the...
If Delicious Gifts existed I would be a regular customer. I would also call 0800-GUMSHOE. I am also planning a holiday in Saltburn on Sea and it better be like visiting one of your stories. I have some serious worries about his future too. :)
Brilliant rant. I think next
Posted on Wed, 25 Mar 2020
Brilliant rant. I think next time anyone has something to rant about, we should send you bullet points of the general issues and you can form it into a witty and biting rant for us. I'd pay. :)
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A chipolata between two
Posted on Mon, 10 Feb 2020
A chipolata between two Bratwursts. Fabulous. I loved the dog too. I liked the story enough to type my comment twice as I am on a train, made great train reading though. Now concerned about what's going to happen to the rest of those gloves...
Read full commentPosted in The Aquarium. Part 1. I’m Confessin’
Ha. Oh dear! Not very
Posted on Wed, 25 Mar 2020
Ha. Oh dear! Not very lucrative afterall. It definitely is skillful to tell a story in just a few words, especially only 50. I would never manage, for one thing, I use far too many words to say anything at all and I'm a word hoarder too, I'd...
Read full commentPosted in Three is a Crowd
Hi Rhiannon, thank you for
Posted on Thu, 26 Mar 2020
Hi Rhiannon, thank you for reading it. I'm glad you liked my wooded description which I take as a compliment as you write very lovely poems about the natural world. I see what you mean from your perspective about God, but of course, that is your...
Read full commentPosted in Pool in the Woods
Mmmmm. Yeah, I'd stick to
Posted on Mon, 23 Mar 2020
Mmmmm. Yeah, I'd stick to writing if I was you, I don't think you're going to be headhunted for advertising the armed forces any time soon, unless you significantly change your ways. :)
Read full commentPosted in Sven Goes to War. Part 7. Pictures of You.
Oh good, it sounds like you
Posted on Fri, 20 Mar 2020
Oh good, it sounds like you managed to get a longer sleep at last and ate a meal. Yes, I hope that people don't forget about all of the lessons they might have learnt when this passes too. And of course, you are in everyone's thoughts, you are so...
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Sometimes I am so excited
Posted on Sun, 22 Mar 2020
Sometimes I am so excited that you have put up a new part that I save it for when I think I'll need it, but it couldn't wait. Or maybe I just needed to read it now. I love your Saltburn. I loved all of it, but clever how Stanley disappears into...
Read full commentPosted in Sven Goes to War. Part 6. Dress You Up
This is excellent and amusing
Posted on Wed, 18 Mar 2020
This is excellent and amusing . I think we need as much amusement as we can get at the moment. Rachel x
Read full commentPosted in Blood Relations
Brilliantly written and very
Posted on Tue, 17 Mar 2020
Brilliantly written and very funny. I love all of it, but most especially the fishermen (I have written a very serious poem today about fishermen, and not at all the kind of fishermen that buy copies of Nude Women in Combat), the recorder, the...
Read full commentPosted in Sven Goes to War. Part 3. I Want to Break Free
If Delicious Gifts existed I
Posted on Sun, 15 Mar 2020
If Delicious Gifts existed I would be a regular customer. I would also call 0800-GUMSHOE. I am also planning a holiday in Saltburn on Sea and it better be like visiting one of your stories. I have some serious worries about his future too. :)
Read full commentPosted in Sven Goes to War. Part 2. Private Life.
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