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Jellyfish

By onemorething on Fri, 16 Aug 2019

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Crematorium

By onemorething on Thu, 15 Aug 2019

Not for the easily offended.

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Ice Age

By onemorething on Wed, 14 Aug 2019

With some articles inserted.

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Distance of the Moon

By onemorething on Tue, 13 Aug 2019

With some articles inserted.

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These are very sweet and nice

Posted on Mon, 19 Aug 2019

These are very sweet and nice to hear you reading them. You have captured childish states well with these, I think. :)

Posted in KidsSpeak

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Oh I didn’t know about the

Posted on Fri, 16 Aug 2019

Oh I didn’t know about the invasion. That definitely sounds a bit scary. They can gather in numbers can’t they. A plot of jellyfish. Glad you enjoyed, thanks for your comment. :)

Posted in Jellyfish

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This is very lovely. I like

Posted on Wed, 14 Aug 2019

This is very lovely. I like your use of emphasis, but all wonderful.

Posted in prairie river flowing

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Rhiannon, these are so good.

Posted on Mon, 12 Aug 2019

Rhiannon, these are so good. I have been popping back to read them in turn. Though I enjoyed hearing your Welsh accent too - which is poetic in itself, I think. April and December are my favourites - perhaps for what they describe as much as your...

Posted in Through the year month by month

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Such an interesting piece of

Posted on Tue, 13 Aug 2019

Such an interesting piece of writing about memory. Enjoyed it very much. Made me think of synapses as light or stars. Lovely.

Posted in Remembering

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So beautiful. I enjoyed every

Posted on Fri, 02 Aug 2019

So beautiful. I enjoyed every bit of this poem, but the opening lines alone are wonderful. And you know what’s so lasting about poems like this, for me, is the next time I come across kelp I will remember this.

Posted in Kelp

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Love these, incredibly well

Posted on Fri, 02 Aug 2019

Love these, incredibly well written, hilarious and clever - a perfect combination.

Posted in Put That In Your Pipe

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Aha, so this is the lost ID

Posted on Thu, 01 Aug 2019

Aha, so this is the lost ID poem! It's very good indeed and as Rhiannon says above, neatly done. Also I missed passports on my long list of things that would have my name on! (I might edit to see if I can squeeze passports in!) I remember this...

Posted in Stateless in New York

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Love the metaphors. Love the

Posted on Wed, 31 Jul 2019

Love the metaphors. Love the words as water and petals. So good.

Posted in Promise

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Ha! I had not thought of that

Posted on Tue, 30 Jul 2019

Ha! I had not thought of that! Though even if rich I don’t think I would want to perpetually migrate to stay in spring and summer endlessly. And yes, I have a name, of course, but am choosing to avoid it for innocuous and kind reasons to myself...