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Story | The Language of Dead Flowers | agnosticnun | 18 | 3 days 6 hours ago |
Story | Trees on the Arapuni Road | Philip Sidney | 24 | 4 days 7 hours ago |
Story | Night River | onemorething | 3 | 5 days 14 hours ago |
Story | Cycle Of Life | skinner_jennifer | 11 | 1 week 3 hours ago |
Story | thoughts in the small hours | Di_Hard | 11 | 1 week 1 day ago |
Story | Goodbye George | MJG | 1 | 1 week 3 days ago |
Story | Season of hope? | Parson Thru | 5 | 1 week 4 days ago |
Story | A Planet-ful of Diamonds | Ewan | 4 | 1 week 4 days ago |
Story | miranda | Nolan | 4 | 1 week 4 days ago |
Story | Mars | lavadis | 13 | 1 week 5 days ago |
Story | Quiver Tree | onemorething | 2 | 1 week 5 days ago |
Story | Dear Darkness | hoalarg1 | 14 | 2 weeks 1 day ago |
Story | Shrinkage | Mark Burrow | 4 | 2 weeks 1 day ago |
Story | Second thoughts | Parson Thru | 8 | 2 weeks 2 days ago |
Story | The Train On Platform 4 | forest_for_ever | 4 | 2 weeks 3 days ago |
Story | Lovers | rosaliekempthorne | 2 | 2 weeks 4 days ago |
Story | Diversion | Parson Thru | 14 | 2 weeks 4 days ago |
Story | An Obliging Treecreeper | Rhiannonw | 13 | 2 weeks 5 days ago |
Story | Graveyards | onemorething | 16 | 2 weeks 5 days ago |
Story | Repression | onemorething | 4 | 2 weeks 5 days ago |
Story | Frost: a Mystery Play | Melkur | 7 | 2 weeks 5 days ago |
Story | When the River Froze | agnosticnun | 3 | 2 weeks 5 days ago |
Story | All Them Monkeys, All Them Bears | Angusfolklore | 2 | 3 weeks 1 day ago |
Story | New Beginnings | skinner_jennifer | 16 | 3 weeks 5 days ago |
Story | The Last Man in my Life | jeand | 10 | 3 weeks 6 days ago |
Great. Loved the repetition
Posted on Tue, 12 Nov 2019
Great. Loved the repetition of super noodles too, made me laugh, but lots of sadnesses in this too. :)
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I really like the matter-of
Posted on Mon, 04 Nov 2019
I really like the matter-of-factness of this when you can sense the depth beneath the words. I think it's a clever and affecting poem. :)
Read full commentPosted in Trying to Remember What It Was Like
As mentioned above, I like
Posted on Tue, 05 Nov 2019
As mentioned above, I like how you've woven the details and stresses of moving and sadnesses with the initial shocks in the house and bonfire night. Glad it had a happy ending. :)
Read full commentPosted in New Beginnings
Hi Jenny, thank you! Atlantic
Posted on Fri, 01 Nov 2019
Hi Jenny, thank you! Atlantic salmon sometimes return to their nascent rivers 2-3 times, I think Pacific salmon are the salmon that only make one return if I remember correctly. Nevertheless, being a salmon is a short, tiring and risky business...
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I like that you have included
Posted on Thu, 31 Oct 2019
I like that you have included that we don't require them to have permits and welcome them. If only we could apply this to all migrants. I love birds so enjoyed your visiting geese. :)
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Great observations and
Posted on Fri, 01 Nov 2019
Great observations and cleverly written with humour and pathos. Black leather waistcoat, oof, no. Enjoyed reading. :)
Read full commentPosted in With a Blue Jug in Her Hand
Another lovely
Posted on Fri, 01 Nov 2019
Another lovely autobiographical piece to read. I love how you sequentially share all the important details that gently reveal the twists and turns of what happened both in terms of events and how you felt, it makes these so interesting and...
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This is brilliant.
Posted on Thu, 24 Oct 2019
This is brilliant.
Read full commentPosted in Birthday Song
I'm having such a bad day
Posted on Thu, 24 Oct 2019
I'm having such a bad day hence my maudlin offering (which has reminded me of the perils of impulsive posting on the internet), however, it has made me smile that you have posted a much more succinct poem about uncertainty which cleverly leaves a...
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This was so good, I went back
Posted on Thu, 24 Oct 2019
This was so good, I went back to read all the preceding ones. Completely riveting. I think it's the detail and honesty in them. Thank you for sharing them, they make great reading. :)
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