Lille Dante

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I have 99 stories published in 3 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 76954 times and 138 of my stories have been cherry picked.
10 of my 56 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 11 votes

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"Oh Mein Papa"

Eddie Calvert: 8 th January to 11 th March 1954
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Parting Gift (Parts 9 + 10)

Parts 9 + 10 of 10.
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Parting Gift (Parts 7 + 8)

Parts 7 + 8 of 10.
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Parting Gift (Parts 5 + 6)

Parts 5 + 6 of 10.
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Parting Gift (Parts 3 +4)

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10 of my comments have received 11 Great Feedback votes

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It must have been convincing.

Posted on Sun, 04 Feb 2018

It must have been convincing.

I was distracted by a couple of members of the audience looking at their phones during my performance.

Am I being that boring or self indulgent? I wondered.

Turned out they were Googling me and...

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Posted in 'The Wages of Sin', Unplugged

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Jukeboxes in pubs started to

Posted on Mon, 04 May 2026

Jukeboxes in pubs started to appear in the 1950s, but only in establishments that wanted a 'modern' image and to attract a younger clientele. (In a later decade, the Greyhound even had a disco that I used to frequent.) However, during this period...

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Posted in "Answer Me"

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Broke my own rule!

Posted on Sat, 02 May 2026

Broke my own rule!

Deleted all but the first quote which surely qualifies as fair use.

(Don't confuse it with the song made famous by Hendrix, it's not the same one.)

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Posted in "Hey Joe!"

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The nurse has checked with

Posted on Sat, 28 Mar 2026

The nurse has checked with her metal comb...

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Posted in "I Believe"

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This is the first part of a

Posted on Fri, 13 Mar 2026

This is the first part of a long-term series I've been planning for years. Each story will be a self contained vignette. With minor exceptions, there will be no repeating characters or narrative through-line. It is a combination of memory,...

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Posted in "Here In My Heart"

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'Ten years since Live Aid'

Posted on Tue, 10 Mar 2026

'Ten years since Live Aid'

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Posted in Electric Grace

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The timeline is a bit fluid

Posted on Tue, 03 Mar 2026

The timeline is a bit fluid but that's not a bad guesstimate. Part 1 was post-glam pub rock about 1975, part 2 obviously 1976-7. This part alludes to Jon Foxx's Ultravox and Gary Numan's Tubeway Army, so post punk and pre new wave. Danny seems to...

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Posted in More Roche Five Than Pain

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This was actually supposed to

Posted on Wed, 25 Feb 2026

This was actually supposed to have been a violent political thriller but Google took exception to my parameters when I was researching how an ordinary person would obtain a weapon and plan an assassination. (I'm probably flagged on a government...

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Posted in The Last Step

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Thank you. I like writing non

Posted on Mon, 25 Aug 2025

Thank you. I like writing non linear narratives - and this one is a bit of a merry go round in itself.

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Posted in The Boy With The Telescope

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Hi there.

Posted on Fri, 20 May 2016

Hi there.

I enjoyed the short, impressionistic strokes of your poem. It felt immersive and claustrophobic.

However, I hope you won't mind a newbie's observation that the third section 'moist' does not appear to flow thematically...

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Posted in The imperative (Poetry Monthly)