Lille Dante

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I have 26 stories published in one collection on the site.
My stories have been read 1724 times and 36 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1 of my 12 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1 vote

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Redemption Pass

Out of a haze of heat and dust, three horsemen rode across the prairie towards Redemption Pass... X-Files in the Wild West? No Part 2, this is it.
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Pick of the Month

The Blue Books Restored: Fragments 1A to 70 (part 4 of 4)

Diane cast her spell, like casting a boulder in a pool of Reality and causing it to ripple. The force of her will made manifest.
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The Blue Books Restored: Fragments 1A to 70 (part 3 of 4)

Real life lacks the structure of fiction. It is full of loose ends, of random events with no further significance, of dramatic turns from which no moral can be drawn. Yet sometimes, we perceive patterns in the raw chaos of existence. We insist that, somehow, it must all make sense.
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The Blue Books Restored: Fragments 1A to 70 (part 2 of 4)

I remembered the look on her face, the wide-eyed incredulity that would almost have been funny in any other context, as her fingers turned into butterflies and flew away.
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The Blue Books Restored: Fragments 1A to 70 (part 1 of 4)

Her name was ‘Diane’. A name I have preserved in my fiction for over thirty-five years. Whenever I wish to depict a fantasy woman, who is also all-too-human, I picture her.

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Hi there.

Posted on Fri, 20 May 2016

Hi there.

I enjoyed the short, impressionistic strokes of your poem. It felt immersive and claustrophobic.

However, I hope you won't mind a newbie's observation that the third section 'moist' does not appear to flow thematically...

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