Lille Dante

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I have 39 stories published in one collection on the site.
My stories have been read 11437 times and 54 of my stories have been cherry picked.
2 of my 14 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 3 votes

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It must have been convincing.

Posted on Sun, 04 Feb 2018

It must have been convincing.

I was distracted by a couple of members of the audience looking at their phones during my performance.

Am I being that boring or self indulgent? I wondered.

Turned out they were Googling me and...

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Posted in 'The Wages of Sin', Unplugged

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Hi there.

Posted on Fri, 20 May 2016

Hi there.

I enjoyed the short, impressionistic strokes of your poem. It felt immersive and claustrophobic.

However, I hope you won't mind a newbie's observation that the third section 'moist' does not appear to flow thematically...

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Posted in The imperative (Poetry Monthly)