People said the eclipse would be partial. Nothing dramatic. Nothing like the total ones he had seen on television, viewed from foreign deserts or mountaintops. There would just be a dimming. A bite taken out of the sun. Enough to make the morning feel strange, perhaps. But not enough to stop him going about his day.
Thank you. I like writing non
Posted on Mon, 25 Aug 2025
Thank you. I like writing non linear narratives - and this one is a bit of a merry go round in itself.
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Hi there.
Posted on Fri, 20 May 2016
Hi there.
I enjoyed the short, impressionistic strokes of your poem. It felt immersive and claustrophobic.
However, I hope you won't mind a newbie's observation that the third section 'moist' does not appear to flow thematically...
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