Lille Dante

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I have 111 stories published in 3 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 108727 times and 154 of my stories have been cherry picked.
12 of my 59 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 13 votes

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The First and Last Patriots

Eleanor Shaw stepped off the coach at Amesbury just after six o’clock. The sky was a flat, colourless sheet, the kind of backdrop that made...
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Blæc Sunne

People said the eclipse would be partial. Nothing dramatic. Nothing like the total ones he had seen on television, viewed from foreign deserts or mountaintops. There would just be a dimming. A bite taken out of the sun. Enough to make the morning feel strange, perhaps. But not enough to stop him going about his day.
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Magpie 5, 6 & 7

5: Silver 6: Gold 7: Secret
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Magpie 3 & 4

3: Girl 4: Boy

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12 of my comments have received 13 Great Feedback votes

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Thank you. I like writing non

Posted on Mon, 25 Aug 2025

Thank you. I like writing non linear narratives - and this one is a bit of a merry go round in itself.

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Hi there.

Posted on Fri, 20 May 2016

Hi there.

I enjoyed the short, impressionistic strokes of your poem. It felt immersive and claustrophobic.

However, I hope you won't mind a newbie's observation that the third section 'moist' does not appear to flow thematically...

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Posted in The imperative (Poetry Monthly)

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