Makis

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The Axe

By Makis on Tue, 31 Mar 2026

When the axe entered the forest, the trees whispered, 'that handle used to be one of us'.

Non-fiction

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Penny's Pass The Story - Part Five

By Makis on Wed, 25 Mar 2026

Deputy Marindina takes the initiative.

Crime

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The Factory Gate

By Makis on Tue, 24 Mar 2026

All she had to do now, was get out of there!

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Making Dough

By Makis on Thu, 19 Mar 2026

'As a scientist, Wilkinson knew that if he were ever to break wind in the echo chamber, he would never hear the end of it.' 'That's not bad at all,...

Unclassified

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Very competently done a.j.w.

Posted on Tue, 31 Mar 2026

Very competently done w.w.j Your contribution really picks up the pace and makes great progress.

Posted in Penny's Pass The Story - Part 8.

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This is great writing Celtic.

Posted on Wed, 01 Apr 2026

This is great writing Celtic. A sort of down to earth Glasgow Mickey Spillane style that won't let you go until the end. A unique voice. I'm a fan.

Posted in The McCann Case.

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This is just what was needed

Posted on Mon, 30 Mar 2026

This is just what was needed to begin pulling the story into focus. Well written SoulFire.

Posted in Penny’s Pass the Parcel - Part 7

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Hi Turlough. I've just read

Posted on Fri, 27 Mar 2026

Hi Turlough. I've just read this while chewing my morning toast accompanied by a nice chunk of Camembert, and it set me thinking about the US and its relationship with the rest of the world. Rather alarmingly, under this president, the US seems...

Posted in Here's to You, Lady Liberty

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Thank you GlosKat. There were

Posted on Wed, 25 Mar 2026

Thank you GlosKat. There were so many conflicting pieces of information when I read it through as a story that I decided to write it this way to pull some of the major threads together so that writer six has a clearer path forward. Good luck...

Posted in Penny's Pass The Story - Part Five

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This is intriguing writing.

Posted on Tue, 10 Mar 2026

This is intriguing writing. Micky Spillane painting an Edward Hopper picture. Economy of word portraying an image without emotion or real explanation.

Posted in III. The Body Box - Part Two

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Intriguing story marindina,

Posted on Tue, 10 Mar 2026

Intriguing story marindina, keeping the reader alert and interested. Good writing!

A cross between Harry Potter and Spiderman so far and hopefully more to come.

Posted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (13)

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A great little piece this as

Posted on Wed, 04 Mar 2026

A great little piece this as it tells such a complex and agonising story in such a compact way. Well done.

Posted in Legless

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Thank you Frances, you're

Posted on Thu, 05 Mar 2026

Thank you Frances, you're very kind. I'm pleased it made you laugh because it made me laugh too, while I was writing it..can you believe that...laughing at your own stuff? You're right in pointing out it's not easy, but I'm not sure about skill....

Posted in Teeth Tales: Ernie's Terrible Teething

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What an awful experience you

Posted on Wed, 04 Mar 2026

What an awful experience you've been through Jenny, let's hope the test results are favourable. I had a similar experience some years ago and know exactly how harrowing it can be, especially when in the hands of a huge NHS machine struggling to...