Makis

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I have 58 stories published in 0 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 42172 times and 73 of my stories have been cherry picked.
60 of my 259 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 64 votes

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Tom Emery

Now retired from a career in teaching, I live in Scarborough, where I spend my days reading, writing, travelling and playing the piano, but not necesserily in that order.

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The Factory Gate

All she had to do now, was get out of there!
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Cherry

Making Dough

'As a scientist, Wilkinson knew that if he were ever to break wind in the echo chamber, he would never hear the end of it.' 'That's not bad at all,...
Cherry

The Curious Spanner

A chilhood story about a mysterious spanner and unintended consequences.
Cherry

Teeth Tales: Brian's Mayans

A sorry tale about Brian and his obsession with Mayan tooth decoration.
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Cherry

Teeth Tales: Ernie's Terrible Teething

A gripping tale about baby Ernie's teething problems getting completely out of control.
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60 of my comments have received 64 Great Feedback votes

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I enjoyed this tale marandina

Posted on Fri, 27 Feb 2026

I enjoyed this tale marandina, with scarey creatures and a nicely building tension. Your description of the Negev make it sound a bit daunting though. Sounds a bit like Cleethorpes when the tide's out, with weird people promising huge dividends...

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Posted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (12)

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Thanks Harry, I was inspired

Posted on Thu, 26 Feb 2026

Thanks Harry, I was inspired to write the piece after hearing someone sitting near me while waiting for my annual mot at the local surgery. He was about my age and moaning about the wait...ten minutes at most. I told him if it weren't for the...

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Posted in Thanks Clem!...Sorry about The Queue

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Fabulous Harry. The best

Posted on Wed, 25 Feb 2026

Fabulous Harry. The best piece I've read for a long, long time. Just up my street.

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Posted in 5. Secondhand Prose

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Excellent Jane. Clearly

Posted on Fri, 20 Feb 2026

Excellent Jane. Clearly heartfelt and personal.

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Posted in His Running Top

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I enjoyed this story,

Posted on Mon, 09 Feb 2026

I enjoyed this story, fluently written, but I'm left wanting to know why she was at the station with a car and chauffeur waiting and how they knew which hotel he was staying at in Edinburgh. 

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Posted in Michael

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Many thanks Ewan and

Posted on Mon, 09 Feb 2026

Many thanks Ewan and apologies for the confusion over the image issue. Perhaps it will be resolved one day soon.

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Posted in Relatively Speaking

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According to The AI site that

Posted on Mon, 09 Feb 2026

According to The AI site that created the image for me, copyright only applies to human creation and not computer generated images. I did check before using the image which was a bespoke creation for this piece and therefore not a copy of any...

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Posted in Relatively Speaking

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Good work Dougie. I think if

Posted on Thu, 05 Feb 2026

Good work Dougie. I think if we switched off all social media the world would slip back in time thirty or so years and leave us all feeling the better for it. Fountain pens, thank you letters and steam trains is about as far as I want to go.

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Posted in Noises Off

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Well, as they say, what ever

Posted on Sun, 18 Jan 2026

Well, as they say, what ever it is you're doing...keep doing it Harry.

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Posted in 3. An Expedition To The Pole (ii)

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This is brilliant writing

Posted on Sun, 18 Jan 2026

This is brilliant writing Harry, fluent and natural. It flows from your mind straight into mine completely unhindered by process. Well done!

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Posted in 3. An Expedition To The Pole (ii)

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