Great stuff Harry, it brought back many memories...epecially the ones that led us into Thames Station! It reminded me of the nativity plays we used to perform every year and my best mate Jed who played the wise man bringing frankincense . He only...
Thank you for your kind comment Frances, this one was setting myself a challenge and turned out to be much more difficult to achieve than I anticipated.
Very competently done a.j.w.
Posted on Tue, 31 Mar 2026
Very competently done w.w.j Your contribution really picks up the pace and makes great progress.
Read full commentPosted in Penny's Pass The Story - Part 8.
Reading this was like
Posted on Thu, 23 Apr 2026
Reading this was like revisiting my own childhood Harry. Great stuff!
Read full commentPosted in Tom All Alone 14 (i)
Delightful Harry, just as I
Posted on Fri, 24 Apr 2026
Delightful Harry, just as I remember it way back in the day. A comforting little read.
Read full commentPosted in Tom All Alone 14 (iv)
Great stuff Harry, it brought
Posted on Thu, 23 Apr 2026
Great stuff Harry, it brought back many memories...epecially the ones that led us into Thames Station! It reminded me of the nativity plays we used to perform every year and my best mate Jed who played the wise man bringing frankincense . He only...
Read full commentPosted in Tom All Alone 14 (ii)
Intense and purposeful
Posted on Tue, 21 Apr 2026
Intense and purposeful writing that creates real tension. Thank you.
Read full commentPosted in Ridgeline - Part Fifteen: The Reckoning
Just what we're looking
Posted on Tue, 21 Apr 2026
Just what we're looking forward to Frances, on this side of the planet. Well done.
Read full commentPosted in The Constant Birth
Thank you for your kind
Posted on Tue, 14 Apr 2026
Thank you for your kind comment Frances, this one was setting myself a challenge and turned out to be much more difficult to achieve than I anticipated.
Read full commentPosted in Pride Before The Fall
A plaintive voice Frances.
Posted on Tue, 14 Apr 2026
A plaintive voice Frances. Very delicate.
Read full commentPosted in Refugee
This is great writing Celtic.
Posted on Wed, 01 Apr 2026
This is great writing Celtic. A sort of down to earth Glasgow Mickey Spillane style that won't let you go until the end. A unique voice. I'm a fan.
Read full commentPosted in The McCann Case.
This is just what was needed
Posted on Mon, 30 Mar 2026
This is just what was needed to begin pulling the story into focus. Well written SoulFire.
Read full commentPosted in Penny’s Pass the Parcel - Part 7
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