Ewan

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I have 1294 stories published in 22 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 870551 times and 635 of my stories have been cherry picked.
45 of my 2,108 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 46 votes

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Ewan Lawrie

The picture is me signing copies of my novel, Gibbous House at Unbound Books HQ in Islington by the canal.

My stories

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Pavement Diamonds

Not about much... photo free of copyright issues. (I asked the estate agent).
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Gods And Men

Pretentious rubbish? Probably. Image would have been a screenshot from BBC Parliament posted on line by the Daily Mirror, but hey... this is from Flicker... no copyright issues.
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so many incontinent words

"performance peace be upon you" image author's own
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Message III (Kaspazar's Request)

"No! It can't be!" Image is in the Public Domain source Wikipedia Commons.
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Message II (BMK phone home)

Arrival in DC Image released into the public domain by USN. Source Wikipedia Commons

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45 of my comments have received 46 Great Feedback votes

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One thing you will

Posted on Thu, 06 Jul 2017

find by doing this, is that your description in any prose you do write will be tighter, more compact, more effective, it's something I was told would happen if I wrote more poetry. I'm not completely sure it has for me, but it will for you....

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Posted in Tail-end

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It's the mothballs

Posted on Tue, 10 Jan 2017

I remember, and the faint smell of Lion pee and Turkish Delight.... hahaha. I do not know anyone who has never explored their parents' wardrobe. When I was 8, my dad's wardrobe had hundreds of football programmes from the 40's and 50's; Rangers...

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Posted in Grimms5

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Well said,

Posted on Thu, 18 Jan 2018

a man who is tyred of writing is tyred of life, I always say. Anyone who writes who doesn't suffer from Imposter Syndrome is a very odd fish,I reckon.

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Posted in The fraud

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This interesting piece,

Posted on Mon, 15 Jan 2018

for trying something different, for looking different, for being different, is our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day. Why not share or retweet it if you like it too.

Image source is...

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Posted in DREAMING

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Clearly

Posted on Thu, 04 Jan 2018

You have done some research. However, the RPI changed its name in 1883, or rather reopened under another name that year. 

"In September 1881, the Royal Polytechnic Institution closed, marking a transition to new ownership and a new era...

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Posted in The Second World War: PART 1 - Roger Farrier - Dunkirk (1940) #2

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Woof! Woof!

Posted on Tue, 26 Dec 2017

Gold digger alert! We men are such fools, I imagine Donald believes Melania finds him irresistible, (just like Ivana and Marla did too).

Interesting piece.

best

Ewan

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Posted in Narcissistic

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This

Posted on Mon, 18 Dec 2017

is definitely the area to mine for your writing. Convincing; it certainly had me in the classroom (probably in a disappearing seat).
Upbeat and uplifting and at this time of year, why not?

Best

Ewan

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Posted in Ralph and Big Dave

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It's

Posted on Tue, 12 Dec 2017

the old barth/bath thing. Do NOT change it.

I'm only not sure about the last line:

Dah      dah      da  da-DUM (PAUSE) da da-dum, da da  DUM

whose ways    we  pre-FER   (")         to for-...

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Posted in Goodwill to all

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Thank

Posted on Thu, 23 Nov 2017

you for the roses.
This is artfully done. For me it would be even better if you didn't give the answer to the riddle in the poem itself.
Lovely imagery and phrase-making.

Best

Ewan

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Posted in My Lady Of Damask

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Really liked this.

Posted on Wed, 08 Nov 2017

However, it needs a good "going at" for punctuation. Or you could not punctuate at all and leave everything in lower case, which might well suit the content. The problem is that some punctuation is worse (in terms of meaning) than none. One thing...

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Posted in City Breath

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