Ewan

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I have 1924 stories published in 31 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1874546 times and 1230 of my stories have been cherry picked.
277 of my 3,347 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 297 votes

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Ewan Lawrie

The picture is me signing copies of my novel, Gibbous House at Unbound Books HQ in Islington by the canal.
Both Moffat novels are available here

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A Vicious Circle

When did centrism become such a bad thing? Why? Image is PD from PD Vectors.

TEST Please ignore

Let us put thewordstogether keep them apart s t r e w them on the page sdrawkcab meht etirw D R O P T H E M use them abuse them until we wrench...
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Don't Ask

So many people in the Armed Forces back in the day - before don't ask don't tell - were living a lie. I'm glad most of them are still friends.

The Esoteric Few

Whom Byron claimed one of his poems was written for. Not this one, because it's mine, but it's still for the esoteric few. Image author's own
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No-one Found

Nowadays we need closure. In the past, it might have been a long and lingering grief, we have forgotten what it is like not to know, which must make it even harder to bear. Image is PD, YAY!

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277 of my comments have received 297 Great Feedback votes

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Excellent.

Posted on Wed, 17 Mar 2021

Very fine. Whimsical, I agree.

You have a missing apostrophe at line 5 in "Willows favourite".

Always best to keep the fantastic rooted in the everyday. You do that well here.

Well done.

 

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Posted in "Willow's Tail"

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There will be

Posted on Mon, 10 Feb 2020

...but as you know I'm writing Moffat III at the moment (12,000 words and counting). I always have a vanity project going, whilst I'm writing a novel. It helps to dive off into something else completely unrelated. Usually, The Picture Ranch or...

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Posted in Powerhousing II

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Ah well,

Posted on Wed, 18 Dec 2019

don't we know? "This is John, he...we used to know each other." Joan is about 19, John has been away for 20 years.
Yes, I know people don't like holes, but I do like clues, rather than telling everything.
Anyway, glad you liked it...

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Posted in A Polka Dot Dress

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One thing you will

Posted on Thu, 06 Jul 2017

find by doing this, is that your description in any prose you do write will be tighter, more compact, more effective, it's something I was told would happen if I wrote more poetry. I'm not completely sure it has for me, but it will for you....

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Posted in Tail-end

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It's the mothballs

Posted on Tue, 10 Jan 2017

I remember, and the faint smell of Lion pee and Turkish Delight.... hahaha. I do not know anyone who has never explored their parents' wardrobe. When I was 8, my dad's wardrobe had hundreds of football programmes from the 40's and 50's; Rangers...

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Posted in Grimms5

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Congratulations, this is our Story of the Week 17 Mar 2023

Posted on Fri, 17 Mar 2023

A great story, well done.

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Posted in Red Bicycle 21-22

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Glad that was the thinking

Posted on Fri, 17 Mar 2023

behind the villainous Molloch, just one extra 'l' or a smart suit is enough to hide a monster in plain sight.

Well done.

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Posted in Red Bicycle 21-22

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Not so

Posted on Tue, 14 Mar 2023

sure our chums across the pond aren't half-way down that primrose path after the repeal of Roe vs Wade.

Fine poem Rachel.

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Posted in Newes From The Dead

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Touches of Poe

Posted on Mon, 13 Sep 2004

and M R James - no bad thing. If you'd posted this today under a different name, I wouldn't have pegged it for your work.

Anyway, I liked it, and so I'm going to bang a couple of big fat cherries on it.
I quite often do a...

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Posted in A Requiem For One Man's Life

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Very good

Posted on Thu, 16 Feb 2023

vivid and clear images.

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Posted in Persephone's first day

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