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Ewan Lawrie
The picture is me signing copies of my novel, Gibbous House at Unbound Books HQ in Islington by the canal.
Both Moffat novels are available here
Excellent.
Posted on Wed, 17 Mar 2021
Very fine. Whimsical, I agree.
You have a missing apostrophe at line 5 in "Willows favourite".
Always best to keep the fantastic rooted in the everyday. You do that well here.
Well done.
Posted in "Willow's Tail"
There will be
Posted on Mon, 10 Feb 2020
...but as you know I'm writing Moffat III at the moment (12,000 words and counting). I always have a vanity project going, whilst I'm writing a novel. It helps to dive off into something else completely unrelated. Usually, The Picture Ranch or...
Read full commentPosted in Powerhousing II
Ah well,
Posted on Wed, 18 Dec 2019
don't we know? "This is John, he...we used to know each other." Joan is about 19, John has been away for 20 years.
Read full commentYes, I know people don't like holes, but I do like clues, rather than telling everything.
Anyway, glad you liked it...
Posted in A Polka Dot Dress
One thing you will
Posted on Thu, 06 Jul 2017
find by doing this, is that your description in any prose you do write will be tighter, more compact, more effective, it's something I was told would happen if I wrote more poetry. I'm not completely sure it has for me, but it will for you....
Read full commentPosted in Tail-end
It's the mothballs
Posted on Tue, 10 Jan 2017
I remember, and the faint smell of Lion pee and Turkish Delight.... hahaha. I do not know anyone who has never explored their parents' wardrobe. When I was 8, my dad's wardrobe had hundreds of football programmes from the 40's and 50's; Rangers...
Read full commentPosted in Grimms5
Congratulations, this is our Story of the Week 17 Mar 2023
Posted on Fri, 17 Mar 2023
A great story, well done.
Read full commentPosted in Red Bicycle 21-22
Glad that was the thinking
Posted on Fri, 17 Mar 2023
behind the villainous Molloch, just one extra 'l' or a smart suit is enough to hide a monster in plain sight.
Well done.
Read full commentPosted in Red Bicycle 21-22
Not so
Posted on Tue, 14 Mar 2023
sure our chums across the pond aren't half-way down that primrose path after the repeal of Roe vs Wade.
Fine poem Rachel.
Read full commentPosted in Newes From The Dead
Touches of Poe
Posted on Mon, 13 Sep 2004
and M R James - no bad thing. If you'd posted this today under a different name, I wouldn't have pegged it for your work.
Anyway, I liked it, and so I'm going to bang a couple of big fat cherries on it.
Read full commentI quite often do a...
Posted in A Requiem For One Man's Life
Very good
Posted on Thu, 16 Feb 2023
vivid and clear images.
Read full commentPosted in Persephone's first day
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