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Posted on Wed, 21 Feb 2018
to see some more of this.
There are a couple of things, I've noticed.
Do you need "uncharted" - as in unknown because it is not on the map - rather than unchartered (like an accountant, in the olden days)?
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Posted on Thu, 04 Jan 2018
You have done some research. However, the RPI changed its name in 1883, or rather reopened under another name that year.
"In September 1881, the Royal Polytechnic Institution closed, marking a transition to new ownership and a new era...Read full comment
Really liked this.
Posted on Wed, 08 Nov 2017
However, it needs a good "going at" for punctuation. Or you could not punctuate at all and leave everything in lower case, which might well suit the content. The problem is that some punctuation is worse (in terms of meaning) than none. One thing...Read full comment
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Posted on Wed, 18 Oct 2017
outstanding writing. As allusive (and perhaps elusive) as a long poem by Eliot. I'll be reading this over and over today picking out all the references.
You have a typo
"When at home, I read a book every day...