Ewan
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Ewan Lawrie
The picture is me signing copies of my novel, Gibbous House at Unbound Books HQ in Islington by the canal.
My stories
Ink
No lings, just the ink... Picture source is Max Pixel, Licence CC0
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Crocodile Dundee's Tears
Overt, not-mysterious, obvious... ho hum... I played team sports until my 40s, I loved it, but...
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- 99 reads
Davy Jones's Locker
It's not about pirates, but you'll work it out... Weren't we all the wonder kid, in our day? Image source is Rossographer on geography.ie Licence is Creative Commons
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Seaboys
A fragment... that's all. Image from pixabay.com, licence CC0, image creator Myriam.
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Gorda and the Beans
Written some time ago for the A.R.C.H newsletter, see link at foot of story... Image "British Baked Beans": source is Flicker.com, photographer is William Jones
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Good
Posted on Wed, 21 Feb 2018
to see some more of this.
There are a couple of things, I've noticed.
Do you need "uncharted" - as in unknown because it is not on the map - rather than unchartered (like an accountant, in the olden days)?
"...
Read full commentPosted in Jack Mutant - Which Way is Down? (part twelve)
I know,
Posted on Thu, 15 Feb 2018
it's hard to judge what to use, isn't it? I think it's the Puritan roots of the Mayflower arrivals......
Read full commentPosted in Pins (1)
This interesting piece,
Posted on Mon, 15 Jan 2018
for trying something different, for looking different, for being different, is our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day. Why not share or retweet it if you like it too.
Image source is...
Read full commentPosted in DREAMING
Clearly
Posted on Thu, 04 Jan 2018
You have done some research. However, the RPI changed its name in 1883, or rather reopened under another name that year.
"In September 1881, the Royal Polytechnic Institution closed, marking a transition to new ownership and a new era...
Read full commentPosted in The Second World War: PART 1 - Roger Farrier - Dunkirk (1940) #2
Woof! Woof!
Posted on Tue, 26 Dec 2017
Gold digger alert! We men are such fools, I imagine Donald believes Melania finds him irresistible, (just like Ivana and Marla did too).
Interesting piece.
best
Ewan
Read full commentPosted in Narcissistic
This
Posted on Mon, 18 Dec 2017
is definitely the area to mine for your writing. Convincing; it certainly had me in the classroom (probably in a disappearing seat).
Upbeat and uplifting and at this time of year, why not?
Best
Ewan
Read full commentPosted in Ralph and Big Dave
Thank
Posted on Thu, 23 Nov 2017
you for the roses.
This is artfully done. For me it would be even better if you didn't give the answer to the riddle in the poem itself.
Lovely imagery and phrase-making.
Best
Ewan
Read full commentPosted in My Lady Of Damask
Really liked this.
Posted on Wed, 08 Nov 2017
However, it needs a good "going at" for punctuation. Or you could not punctuate at all and leave everything in lower case, which might well suit the content. The problem is that some punctuation is worse (in terms of meaning) than none. One thing...
Read full commentPosted in City Breath
I see
Posted on Thu, 26 Oct 2017
what Jack means.
"beyond make-do-and-mend"
or even
"beyond make-do-and-mending"
I like this.
Best
Ewan
Read full commentPosted in Broken
Truly
Posted on Wed, 18 Oct 2017
outstanding writing. As allusive (and perhaps elusive) as a long poem by Eliot. I'll be reading this over and over today picking out all the references.
You have a typo
Read full comment"When at home, I read a book every day...
Posted in The Black Book Restored: Fragments 1A to 33 (second half)
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