Ewan

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I have 1855 stories published in 30 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1706460 times and 1157 of my stories have been cherry picked.
244 of my 3,217 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 263 votes

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Ewan Lawrie

The picture is me signing copies of my novel, Gibbous House at Unbound Books HQ in Islington by the canal.
Both Moffat novels are available here

My stories

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This Circus Must Leave Town

Why did anyone think this buffoon would ever change?
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Cherry

The Picture Ranch 62

What is going on? That makes Fisher, you and me who don't know... Licence CC-SA 3.0 Photographer Lars-Göran Lindgren, Sweden
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Cherry

The Picture Ranch 61

Short and sour, like a bad cocktail.
Cherry

Time Crystals

Recipe: Ingredients 1 x Magazine article with click-baity title 1 x Completely unrelated memory 1 x obligatory Schroedinger's Cat Reference Method Free write. Break up the lines, arrange them on paper or screen in as allegorical a scheme of shapes as possible. Half-bake only on Regulo 3 and a quarter until it starts to smell bad. Image created by author from PD elements at canva.com
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Cherry

The Picture Ranch 60

60? Who'd a thunk it? Me neither. This is now just short of novella size according to my Atticus page count. I may finally have written a novel under 200 pages by the time I'm finished. Who'd a thunk that ? Original image from rawpixel.com edited in canva.com.

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244 of my comments have received 263 Great Feedback votes

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Sweet,

Posted on Fri, 15 Apr 2022

but not too saccharine, in the tradition of Pam Ayres perhaps.

Very good.

Ewan

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Posted in When One Is One

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"Top

Posted on Thu, 31 Mar 2022

 of the world,Ma!"

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Posted in answering machine

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This is our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day

Posted on Thu, 31 Mar 2022

Atmospheric, beautiful and serious poetry. That's why it's our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day.

Please share and retweet, dear readers, if you like it too.

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Posted in The Wanderer or The Exile’s Lament

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Excellent

Posted on Thu, 31 Mar 2022

and serious poetry.
I wonder if 'god' should be capitalized? Or if you might insert 'any' before the lower-cased god?

Marvellous work.

Ewan
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Posted in The Wanderer or The Exile’s Lament

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I really enjoyed this.

Posted on Thu, 31 Mar 2022

It had nice rhythm and some good internal rhyme.

I wonder if you really need the final stanza? What does it add? It does jerk the/this reader right out of the atmosphere you have so skilfully created. \\\\

best
Ewan

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Posted in Into the Woods (Hansel and Gretel)

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This is our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day

Posted on Thu, 24 Mar 2022

Some may say it feels like Groundhog Day as one of these acerbic satires is POD again. Perhaps it is, but they are very funny, and goodness knows we need some laughter especially in the dark days.

Please share and retweet if you like it...

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Posted in Groundhog Boris

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Outstanding.

Posted on Tue, 22 Mar 2022

I can see, hear, smell and taste it all.
Very well done.
E x

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Posted in Don't Look at the Sheikh

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This is our Story of the Week for March 18th 2022

Posted on Sun, 13 Mar 2022

Congratulations on having written our Story of the Week.

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Posted in Nor There

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Another authentic slice of life

Posted on Wed, 16 Mar 2022

Jack. Para Handy with teeth. I'd like to see more too. I appreciate It can be frustrating when you're shouting into the abyss with not even an echo for an answer.

Don't give up.

Ewan

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Posted in the ten-minute bore

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Um...

Posted on Tue, 15 Mar 2022

In Russian, “Нет войне” is pronounced "nyet voinye": strictly speaking - and also even better - the "voinye" is the dative case of "voina" so it means "no to war"

не за что.

A very...

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Posted in Het Bonhe

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