Ewan
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Ewan Lawrie
The picture is me signing copies of my novel, Gibbous House at Unbound Books HQ in Islington by the canal.
Both Moffat novels are available here
Excellent beginning.
Posted on Wed, 10 Aug 2022
Loved this
'He smelt like soap and rust'.
You have a typo at 'only to open the wrapping and remembering', you need the same verb form if separating 'open' and 'remember' with...
Read full commentPosted in "Exotic Illnesses" - opening chapter of novel
When my wife
Posted on Wed, 03 Aug 2022
was undergoing her treatment for a different kind of cancer, the chemo gave her what amounted to IBS. We had just returned to the UK from 15 years abroad in Spain. Throughout 2018 and some of 2019 we had many a panicked and fruitless search for a...
Read full commentPosted in chemo 4
Very Good Indeed,
Posted on Thu, 28 Jul 2022
poor old Saltburn By The Sea. Used to travel over with rugby mates in the close season just for something to do. Shows how exciting Darlington was in 1978.
I'm worried that the numerical mismatch between the voyeurs and exhibitionists...
Read full commentPosted in Stick of Rock Part 2
Well done,
Posted on Wed, 27 Jul 2022
remarkable work. Layers, repetition and rhymes all chime to make this fab.
E x
Read full commentPosted in Contour and wave.
I feel like I've
Posted on Fri, 22 Jul 2022
been on the Marrakesh Express...
Read full commentPosted in Bed and Board by The Silk Road
Been thinking about this one...
Posted on Tue, 19 Jul 2022
The Bells and The Muezzin would be interruptions in the relative silence of the pre-industrial era, striking the hour, calling to prayer or as warning if it were the case of a tocsin bell. Interesting, though, about the changing soundscape. I...
Read full commentPosted in The Art of Noises : A Futurist's Manifesto
I confess
Posted on Tue, 19 Jul 2022
I did enjoy the the silence, once it started being filled by wildlife. At the depth of the lock-down a deer was running down Jepson Road - usually a very busy thoroughfare. I hate the noise those buses make really, but when I was young, you might...
Read full commentPosted in The Art of Noises : A Futurist's Manifesto
Welcome back...
Posted on Wed, 13 Jul 2022
Although I fail to see what could be more important than keeping us amused.
E x
Read full commentPosted in Pad Life 18: Them's The Breaks
Most of the classic P.I.s
Posted on Wed, 10 Nov 2021
seem pretty well known by the underworld and the police. I like the fact that Miss G is as nihilistic as Micawber. Femmes Fatales are much more interesting when they're less passive.
Besides, I have absolutely NO idea where this...
Read full commentPosted in The Picture Ranch 55
Scotland
Posted on Thu, 16 Jun 2022
a land of harsh beauty and rugged romance. A bit like your poem.
Read full commentWell done, I enjoyed this.
Posted in Midst Highland Shadows
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