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Story"yinno" Ewan22 hours 58 min ago
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StoryA Hauf an a Hauf Peter Bennett101 day 6 hours ago
StoryPigeon Variations - Ch 12 - The Dove in Vauxhall Park Mark Burrow61 day 17 hours ago
StoryPigeon Variations - Ch 11 - Bring Out the Dead Mark Burrow21 day 18 hours ago
StoryEveryone's a hero Parson Thru71 day 18 hours ago
StoryPigeon Variations - Ch 4 - Hero Grill Chef Mark Burrow132 days 16 hours ago
StoryPigeon Variations - Ch 3 - Temper Mark Burrow82 days 23 hours ago
Story"Dear World..." Ewan23 days 1 hour ago
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StoryRoss and Cromarty Coolhermit65 days 3 hours ago
StoryThe Footballer's Fear of the Whistle Ewan15 days 17 hours ago
StoryHistoriography Ewan56 days 23 hours ago
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My stories

"yinno"

It's about... you know... image source pikrepro.com
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"Dear World..."

George Sanders, the cad's cad. I really tried to work in his "failed sausage investment" into this. It's not a euphemism though, so I gave up. Image source wikipedia in Public Domain as it is so old.
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The Footballer's Fear of the Whistle

Amid the fuss about the death of another, admittedly incredible, footballer from the other side of the world, there's this. It used to be on another site. I wrote it nine years ago the week after his death. I've edited it somewhat. What a terrible waste. Still no explanation of why, although unsubstantiated reports link him to the abuse carried out by boys' coach, Barry Bennell. Anyway, we know the spotlight is hard to give up. Gary Speed (1969-2011).
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Historiography

Ford was right, but he didn't know why. Image is by Tiffany & Co, but out of copyright and in the public domain, source Wikipedia.org
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Phyllida Case

Odd. Because I felt like writing something weird. Image source wikipedia commons licence CCA2.0 photographer Tex Texin on Flicker too.
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115 of my comments have received 121 Great Feedback votes

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I don't know why

Posted on Fri, 30 Oct 2020

but you are getting better and better. No, I do: it's practise making perfect, or as near as anything can get to that. You need to be looking at another collection soon. This is extremely good work.

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I am

Posted on Mon, 09 Nov 2020

speechless. Or at least written-wordless. This bears many more than several readings.

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There will be

Posted on Mon, 10 Feb 2020

...but as you know I'm writing Moffat III at the moment (12,000 words and counting). I always have a vanity project going, whilst I'm writing a novel. It helps to dive off into something else completely unrelated. Usually, The Picture Ranch or...

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Posted in Powerhousing II

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Ah well,

Posted on Wed, 18 Dec 2019

don't we know? "This is John, he...we used to know each other." Joan is about 19, John has been away for 20 years.
Yes, I know people don't like holes, but I do like clues, rather than telling everything.
Anyway, glad you liked it...

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One thing you will

Posted on Thu, 06 Jul 2017

find by doing this, is that your description in any prose you do write will be tighter, more compact, more effective, it's something I was told would happen if I wrote more poetry. I'm not completely sure it has for me, but it will for you....

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It's the mothballs

Posted on Tue, 10 Jan 2017

I remember, and the faint smell of Lion pee and Turkish Delight.... hahaha. I do not know anyone who has never explored their parents' wardrobe. When I was 8, my dad's wardrobe had hundreds of football programmes from the 40's and 50's; Rangers...

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These really are

Posted on Tue, 01 Dec 2020

things of sombre beauty.

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Fantastic

Posted on Tue, 01 Dec 2020

The father son dynamic is well done. I no longer think Pyser's self-awareness is inappropriate. I was wrong!
Good ending in this section.

Keep 'em coming.

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These are going

Posted on Tue, 01 Dec 2020

well. One think struck me on reading this one.
"Behaving like a total knob"

We're in Pyser's head here, is he showing some heretofore (I've always wanted to put that word in somewhere un-Moffat-y) unrealised...

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I do

Posted on Fri, 27 Nov 2020

love a good nihilistic git as a main character! Fabulous atmosphere, I could almost smell Hot Plate Heaven.

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