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46 of my 832 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 47 votes
South Africa and a PhD at the University of Pretoria but people mostly know
46 of my comments have received 47 Great Feedback votes
that good night
Posted on Wed, 28 Feb 2018
Do not go gentle into that good night. Rage, rage against the dying of the light.
I like your peaceful quiet approach much more. Sounds much more pleasant. One thinks also of Bob Dylan and some Van Morrison. However...Read full comment
Posted in gently into the Dream
Mary-Anne I was very pleased to discover these
Posted on Sun, 28 Jan 2018
Mary-Anne I was very pleased to discover these new poems. Your poetry is really excellent and you always treat the subject matter with sensitivity. These are mostly happy themes often with children and then more serious and sometimes heart-ache...Read full comment
Posted in Naked
Beautiful verse! Reminds me of Narnia!
Posted on Sat, 12 Aug 2017
Beautiful verse! Reminds me of Narnia! The language is pure and has a clarity and happiness. It is interresting that you start with autumn and end with spring and summer.
You must be a born optimist! TomRead full comment
Posted in Seasons
He started out hedonist
Posted on Fri, 03 Nov 2017
He started out hedonist sonething like Dorian Gray but ended up like Job in the Old Testament. Wisdon is sold in the desolate market where none can to buy, and in the withered field where the farmer ploughs for bread in vain. According then to...Read full comment
Posted in Into the Light
Yes it's clear now, your poem
Posted on Sat, 16 Sep 2017
Yes it's clear now, your poem describes a birth, a baby, the beginnings of life and later the same, born again and to salvation. Do you have children? I don't, sometimes I think it must be nice they melt your heart. Just being themselves people...Read full comment
Posted in First Love