Jacks is the only guy I know of who hit a lecturer. Jacks is a big strong man they had an argument he punched the guy in the face with the fist. Look...
As far as I am concerned there is Only One Universe. This is in fact what the word means it doesn't make sense for there to be more. Actually we must...
A love letter is written by hand ink on paper. The best is give her the letter yourself but it could take a bit of courage and perhaps a bit risky in...
She admitted me to the hospital that night at reception I believed it was an emergency people get that way with anxiety, like they can't breathe and...
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I got lost twice since a long time
Posted on Wed, 29 Jun 2022
I got lost twice since a long time it was terribly scary. The one time was in bush sea bushes at the sea God spared me nothing else. The first one I can remember was in primary school. Another was weird tunnels behind across the walkway of a...
Sorry Di I honestly did not mean to criticise your work at all and I don't recall that I ever have. It is a great poem. But please keep in mind any good teacher knows one often learns more from your mistakes and by the way I'm also out of a job....
Yes. Beautiful ending, man's best friend. Heartbreaking sometimes we feel a duty for mourning. And indeed, it is much more noble to live for someone than to die for someone, sometimes living takes great courage.
No doubt inspired by Jules Verne's classic scifi novel 20,000 leagues under the sea. Also makes one think of Jacques C. and the research ship the Calypso.
Good work, original too! We are in, looking out, man and fish roles reversed! Who's...
A bird is made to fly. Beautiful story and the boy is very kind I know people that would just chase away any kind of new friend while wallowing in self-pity for years. I've been victim myself. Good riddance and yes thank heavens and goodbye....
Sir Isaac Newton said "the Moon is the only problem that "maketh my head to ache". She dies for two weeks and then lives once more in two in all the splendour of her pale desolate beauty, she is cold and yes, dead.
I got lost twice since a long time
Posted on Wed, 29 Jun 2022
I got lost twice since a long time it was terribly scary. The one time was in bush sea bushes at the sea God spared me nothing else. The first one I can remember was in primary school. Another was weird tunnels behind across the walkway of a...
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Sorry Di I honestly did not mean
Posted on Sun, 06 Feb 2022
Sorry Di I honestly did not mean to criticise your work at all and I don't recall that I ever have. It is a great poem. But please keep in mind any good teacher knows one often learns more from your mistakes and by the way I'm also out of a job....
Read full commentPosted in February Rainbow
Yes
Posted on Tue, 14 Sep 2021
Yes. Beautiful ending, man's best friend. Heartbreaking sometimes we feel a duty for mourning. And indeed, it is much more noble to live for someone than to die for someone, sometimes living takes great courage.
Keep well Paul! Tom
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No doubt inspired
Posted on Mon, 16 Mar 2020
No doubt inspired by Jules Verne's classic scifi novel 20,000 leagues under the sea. Also makes one think of Jacques C. and the research ship the Calypso.
Good work, original too! We are in, looking out, man and fish roles reversed! Who's...
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it's good to be young
Posted on Fri, 14 Mar 2014
It's good to be young and insane.
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Every man wants her to be
Posted on Sun, 03 Jul 2022
Every man wants her to be his first love, a woman is more subtle she wants to be his last.
Practical! Good luck for the last woman! Tom
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A bird is made to fly
Posted on Sun, 26 Jun 2022
A bird is made to fly. Beautiful story and the boy is very kind I know people that would just chase away any kind of new friend while wallowing in self-pity for years. I've been victim myself. Good riddance and yes thank heavens and goodbye....
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Sir Isaac Newton said
Posted on Tue, 10 May 2022
Sir Isaac Newton said "the Moon is the only problem that "maketh my head to ache". She dies for two weeks and then lives once more in two in all the splendour of her pale desolate beauty, she is cold and yes, dead.
I would think a slug is...
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Posted on Thu, 19 May 2022
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Smoke cloud hanging
Posted on Mon, 02 May 2022
Smoke cloud hanging yes we must have that atmosphere but now it's illegal whatever happened to freedom of association?
Good work Jenny I never took you one for Jazz! They always teach Classical music at university and Jazz. Nothing else....
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