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An Ideal Place

By luigi_pagano on Sun, 05 Aug 2018

Revised. (Change of categories)..

Miscellaneous

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A Learning Curve

By luigi_pagano on Wed, 01 Aug 2018

Many fairy tales and nursery rhymes have been with us since the year dot...

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Hansel and Gretel - An Update

By luigi_pagano on Sat, 28 Jul 2018

An updated fairy tale.

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Elegy

By luigi_pagano on Fri, 27 Jul 2018

To the memory of all the fellow writers who have left us.

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A dysfunctional family and

Posted on Thu, 23 Oct 2014

A dysfunctional family and calamitous consequences. A blunt and revealing message of an awful situation.

Luigi xxx

Posted in Blue with Raspberry Paisley

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Very original and with many

Posted on Tue, 19 Jun 2018

Very original and with many clever lines, such as "I am the rabbit, and you are the hat" and alliterations as in "will I taste Milanese mozzarella?"
An Italian would probably dispute the Milan provenance of that cheese but as a poetic...

Posted in I have an imaginary daughter

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Cheers, Claudine, Rejections?

Posted on Tue, 08 May 2018

Cheers, Claudine, Rejections? Bah! They are like water off a duck's back.

Luigi x

Posted in Judgement Day

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True but they never caught

Posted on Wed, 24 Jan 2018

True but they never caught him because he changed his name to Bill Stickers.

Posted in Presumption of Innocence

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"It’s not my hair

Posted on Thu, 09 Nov 2017

"It’s not my hair
that makes me me"
Well said Ae. It is your personality that distinguishes you from those who are more concerned with looks than intellect. As far as I am concerned, I find your new hairstyle very fetching.
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Posted in Rebel Hair - with video

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What we all need is for our

Posted on Mon, 30 Oct 2017

What we all need is for our house to become a Tardis, Linda; small on the outside but with unlimited space within so we can store all our mementos and memories.
Yours is a lovely sentimental journey.

Luigi x

Posted in SENTIMENTAL JOURNEY

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Hi Poppy, I was prompted to

Posted on Sat, 21 Oct 2017

Hi Poppy, I was prompted to look you up by the post you put on the forum.
The first thing I have to say is that your poetry is absolutely fine. It is well crafted and the sentiments beautifully expressed. You have to bear in mind the number...

Posted in Barricades

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Not now that it is out of the

Posted on Sun, 30 Jul 2017

Not now that it is out of the bag.

Posted in Fyodor

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Hello C.

Posted on Thu, 22 Jun 2017

Hello C.
It was way back in 1981 so my memory is a bit hazy but I remember that some of it went towards a small computer for my daughters, an Amstrad or a Sinclair Spectrum I believe.
I wanted to spend the rest on slow horses and fast...

Posted in Meet the Press

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Hello ice rivers, I am

Posted on Tue, 16 May 2017

Hello ice rivers, I am surprised that this hasn't had any comments. I enjoyed reading the amusing ramblings in this piece and the originality of the title derived from the proverb 'Every dog has its day'.

Cheers, Luigi.