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A Missing Link

By luigi_pagano on Thu, 14 Feb 2019

Surreal

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Wind

By luigi_pagano on Mon, 11 Feb 2019

Nothing to worry about.

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Dandelions

By luigi_pagano on Fri, 08 Feb 2019

Reappraisal of a a humble weed.

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A Typical Routine

By luigi_pagano on Sun, 03 Feb 2019

A daily ritual.

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A dysfunctional family and

Posted on Thu, 23 Oct 2014

A dysfunctional family and calamitous consequences. A blunt and revealing message of an awful situation.

Luigi xxx

Posted in Blue with Raspberry Paisley

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Ed this is excellent. The

Posted on Thu, 14 Feb 2019

Ed this is excellent. The third stanza is my favourite but I enjoyed the whole poem.
In my opinion it should be Pick of the Day.

Best, Luigi

Posted in Blowing Up the Street (IP)

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Oddily enough, Di, this poem

Posted on Mon, 11 Feb 2019

Oddly enough, Di, this poem brings to mind the principles of the economic law of diminishing returns: you can invest more and more resources but eventually a saturation point will be reached. It is a meataphor for life itself as your piece...

Posted in driverless

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I thoroughly agree that it

Posted on Fri, 08 Feb 2019

I thoroughly agree that it wouldn't be a wise move!

Luigi x

P.S...

Posted in Dandelions

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A great description of this

Posted on Sat, 02 Feb 2019

A great description of this aristocratic bird, Rhiannon. You always show the environment at its best with style.

Luigi x

Posted in Avocet

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A wish list that will be

Posted on Mon, 17 Dec 2018

A wish list that will be familiar to many. An enjoyable read skillfully written.

Best, Luigi x

P.S. Query: a typo on the second line of the final stanza? ...to the the

Posted in Wish list

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A classy write. I enjoyed

Posted on Mon, 10 Dec 2018

A classy write. I enjoyed the read.

Best, Luigi

Posted in Elsewhere

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Hi Hilary. This tale

Posted on Tue, 20 Nov 2018

Hi Hilary. This tale highlights the hidden dangers awaiting vulnerable women and is redolent of Suzy Lamplugh's fate. She was an estate agent who was going to show a prospective client a property when she disappeared without trace.
It is...

Posted in A Casual Murder

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There are not enough

Posted on Sun, 16 Sep 2018

There are not enough superlatives to describe this fantastic piece of poetry. Bravo!

Best, Luigi

Posted in Tangerine static

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Very original and with many

Posted on Tue, 19 Jun 2018

Very original and with many clever lines, such as "I am the rabbit, and you are the hat" and alliterations as in "will I taste Milanese mozzarella?"
An Italian would probably dispute the Milan provenance of that cheese but as a poetic...