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It Could Have Been Me
After Pam Ayres's "I Wish I'd Looked After My Teeth". It is a parody I wrote in 2008 that I hope reflects the jocularity and fun of the original piece - Image from Pixabay
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Nothing New Under the Sun
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Advice to future generations
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The Full English
Goodbye to all that.
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A topic very close to my
Posted on Mon, 06 Dec 2021
A topic very close to my heart very well elaborated with skilled writing and fine rhyming, highlighting the concern we all feel, Turlough. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
Best, Luigi
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I have just finished reading
Posted on Tue, 31 Oct 2023
I have just finished reading all six parts of your story and found them absolutely fascinating and funny. The writing is brilliant; one can be deceived by the humour and fail to detect the shrewd and deep observations of human emotions.
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I feel your pain my man
Posted on Sun, 27 Aug 2023
I feel your pain my man
because the buns won't scan;
for me it's even worse:
I cannot scan my verse.
I much enjoyed your heartfelt jeremiad, Turlough.
Cheers, Luigi
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You make writing about nature
Posted on Tue, 25 Jan 2022
You make writing about nature appear so natural that I am tempted to say li is 'second nature to you.
I believe that your descriptions of walks and climbs over the Welsh Hills are unparalleled. This is another fine example.
Luigi x...
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Dear Jenny, this week's I
Posted on Thu, 30 Sep 2021
Dear Jenny, this week's I inspiration Point has proved to be so popular that it has produced three Picks of the Day - one of which is yours - in addition to many other cherries.
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Posted in Stone Loach
A bijou of a poem,, Rhiannon.
Posted on Wed, 22 Sep 2021
A bijou of a poem,, Rhiannon. No one can describe Nature as you do. Well done on the cherries.
Luigi x
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Nicely assembled thoughts,
Posted on Thu, 18 Mar 2021
Nicely assembled thoughts, Rhiannon. Keen gardeners would certainly welcome with renewed enthusiasm the sight of flora regeneration after the dreadful weather we've had of late.
Luigi x
PS Is there a line missing by any chance? Line...
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You have made the writing of
Posted on Sun, 06 Sep 2020
You have made the writing of nature and the elements - and related symbolism - your speciality, Rachel, and you do it superbly. This poem is no exception.
Read full commentI have only a small query; shouldn't this line " the way the sea is always taking...
Posted in The Death of a Star
I tried that dear Nicky but
Posted on Sat, 27 Jun 2020
I tried that dear Nicky but somehow, after a wash, some seemed to acquire a different shade of black.
Read full commentI know how you feel about wearing odd articles of wear. It can happen with shoes too. I have two black pairs which are almost identical...
Posted in The Case Of The Disappearing Sock
I have ceased to be surprised
Posted on Sun, 26 Apr 2020
I have ceased to be surprised by the quality of your poetry, Rachel, which never disappoints. What fascinates me is the regularity of your input. I'd like to know if you write them spontaneously, on the spot so to speak, or whether you ponder on...
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