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StoryAir on the G String luigi_pagano103 days 4 hours ago
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StoryElemental Forces luigi_pagano66 days 2 hours ago
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A Heavy Load To Bear

Walls have ears. (Flash fiction - 400 words)
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10

Cardinal number or cardinal sin?
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The Octopus and I

Flash fiction (350 words) - A re-post, edited and re-titled.
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206 of my comments have received 213 Great Feedback votes

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Nicely assembled thoughts,

Posted on Thu, 18 Mar 2021

Nicely assembled thoughts, Rhiannon. Keen gardeners would certainly welcome with renewed enthusiasm the sight of flora regeneration after the dreadful weather we've had of late.

Luigi x

PS Is there a line missing by any chance? Line...

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You have made the writing of

Posted on Sun, 06 Sep 2020

You have made the writing of nature and the elements - and related symbolism - your speciality, Rachel, and you do it superbly. This poem is no exception.
I have only a small query; shouldn't this line " the way the sea is always taking...

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No surprise to me, that was

Posted on Fri, 04 Sep 2020

No surprise to me, that was my forecast.smiley

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Very imaginative and original

Posted on Fri, 04 Sep 2020

Very imaginative and original, Mark, loved it a lot.
Was Gavrilo Princip also in the queue waiting to buy that anarchist pamphlet "The Parish News"? 

Pick of the Day for me.

Cheers, Luigi.

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I tried that dear Nicky but

Posted on Sat, 27 Jun 2020

I tried that dear Nicky but somehow, after a wash, some seemed to acquire a different shade of black.
I know how you feel about wearing odd  articles of wear. It can happen with shoes too. I have two black pairs which are almost identical...

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I have ceased to be surprised

Posted on Sun, 26 Apr 2020

I have ceased to be surprised by the quality of your poetry, Rachel, which never disappoints. What fascinates me is the regularity of your input. I'd like to know if you write them spontaneously, on the spot  so to speak, or whether you ponder on...

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As Jenny said, you are

Posted on Thu, 09 May 2019

As Jenny said, you are definitely on a roll. Your description of the fascination that those walks around the Pembrokeshire coast engender clearly reveals your love of nature.
Congratulations on the cherries.

Luigi x

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Posted in Transfixed!

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A dysfunctional family and

Posted on Thu, 23 Oct 2014

A dysfunctional family and calamitous consequences. A blunt and revealing message of an awful situation.

Luigi xxx 

 

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You have drawn an enchanting

Posted on Sun, 13 Jun 2021

You have drawn an enchanting picture of your garden full of the fragrance of honeysuckle. I am really impressed by the lyricism that you inject in your poetry, Jenny. 
You have become quite a bard.

Luigi x

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First of all, congratulations

Posted on Thu, 17 Jun 2021

First of all, congratulations on your anniversary, Penny. Thirty-seven years is a good milestone to reach and there'll be many more happy ones, I'm sure. 
We reminisce with mixed emotions, gladness that we have experienced love and joy; ...

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