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Three of a Kind - Part One
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Mornington Heights
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Penny Pass the Story - Part 10
Polanski, the too handsome cop, with a face you wouldn’t forget, stepped into the Sheriff’s office. “You look baffled, Chief. What’s up?
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I cannot Tell a Lie
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A topic very close to my
Posted on Mon, 06 Dec 2021
A topic very close to my heart very well elaborated with skilled writing and fine rhyming, highlighting the concern we all feel, Turlough. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
Best, Luigi
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Learning of the inner secrets
Posted on Mon, 23 Mar 2026
Learning of the inner secrets of some residents of Mornington Heights is a real eye opener. No one could have imagined that a seemingly respectable hamlet could hide such turpitude and moral decay. No doubt the pure-as-the-driven-snow Deputy...
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Old at 65? Get away!. Anyway,
Posted on Tue, 24 Feb 2026
Old at 65? Get away!. Anyway, best wishes on your forthcoming birthday from a 91-year-old fossil.
Cheers, Luigi
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Very imaginative, Jane.
Posted on Wed, 15 Apr 2026
Very imaginative, Jane.
Read full commentWe ought to be wary of sending people into space in search of alien life. Amos Snodgrass and his fellow astronauts were obviously transformed into aliens. They were asking awkward questions like: if men are from Mars...
Posted in Penny's Pass the Story - Part 10
Very interesting and
Posted on Sun, 12 Apr 2026
Very interesting and unexpected developments, W.J. Abercrombie. Polanski, a minor character in the story, was always likely to be revealed as a crook in disguise,, in the classic Agatha Christie tradition. You have written a fluent finale...
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Well done, Penny/ I am
Posted on Thu, 09 Apr 2026
Well done, Penny/ I am inspired. The mouse has begun to twitch.
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First-class writing, Jay. You
Posted on Mon, 30 Mar 2026
First-class writing, Jay. You are joining the dots nicely.
Read full commentPosted in Penny’s Pass the Parcel - Part 7
Turlough, I rember a game
Posted on Mon, 23 Mar 2026
Turlough, I remember a game called Consequences. . It is an old parlour game that involves writing a story or phrase, folding the paper to hide it, and passing it on to create a often hilarious, disjointed tale.
Read full commentI once played a varuation...
Posted in Penny’s Pass the Story - Part Four
Brilliantly funny, Turlough.
Posted on Wed, 05 Jun 2024
Brilliantly funny, Turlough. The Findus attribution is a stroke of genius. As for condoms, it reminded me of a holiday to a resort on Lake Garda, many years ago, where, in a Lidl store, strawberry-flavoured condoms were displayed. I...
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I have just finished reading
Posted on Tue, 31 Oct 2023
I have just finished reading all six parts of your story and found them absolutely fascinating and funny. The writing is brilliant; one can be deceived by the humour and fail to detect the shrewd and deep observations of human emotions.
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