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Cherry

On Cromer Pier

More reminiscences. (Own photo).
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An Unfinished Symphony

One from my archive in response to this week's Inspiration Point.
Cherry

Il Capitano

On terra firma.

Kol Nidrei

I heard a beautiful piece the other day...

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64 of my comments have received 65 Great Feedback votes

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A lovely descriptive poem, Di

Posted on Thu, 28 Mar 2019

A lovely descriptive poem, Di, with the first three lines as an introduction that grabs the readers' attention right away. The verses that follow reveal that something as mundane as a walk to the shops evoke feelings so deep that one can easily...

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Good use of the language,

Posted on Wed, 27 Mar 2019

Good use of the language, Jane. I like 'orbicular shapes' and the crafty suggestion that Barry Gorringe might rhyme with orange as no other rhymes come readily to mind. I seem to have read that 'door hinge' would be suitable. 
I too was...

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Eight-lines stanzas. I am

Posted on Wed, 13 Mar 2019

Eight-lines stanzas. I am impressed, Jane. I thought the poem very amusing, what with the lippety lippety rabbits and the strange fellow with the brillo fuzz, not forgetting the main protagonists, the whippets. Brilliant.

Best, Luigi...

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Posted in He said I was Whippety (Rimus Dissolutas)

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You have stuck to the

Posted on Tue, 12 Mar 2019

You have stuck to the technical brief exceptionally well, Jane. The fact that you were able to cope with the unfortunate situation by composing a little poetic gem is admirable - although small consolation for losing your job.

Best wishes...

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Posted in Last Week I Lost My Job (Rimus Dissolutas)

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Your description of the

Posted on Sun, 17 Feb 2019

Your description of the various feelings that looks can generate is spot on, Graham. They can mean love, passion, jealousy and even hostility. The latter attribute reminds me of the sixties when confrontational Teddy Boys used the expression "wot...

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Ed this is excellent. The

Posted on Thu, 14 Feb 2019

Ed this is excellent. The third stanza is my favourite but I enjoyed the whole poem.
In my opinion it should be Pick of the Day.

Best, Luigi

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Posted in Blowing Up the Street (IP)

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Oddily enough, Di, this poem

Posted on Mon, 11 Feb 2019

Oddly enough, Di, this poem brings to mind the principles of the economic law of diminishing returns: you can invest more and more resources but eventually a saturation point will be reached. It is a meataphor for life itself as your piece...

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I thoroughly agree that it

Posted on Fri, 08 Feb 2019

I thoroughly agree that it wouldn't be a wise move! smiley

Luigi x

P.S...

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Posted in Dandelions

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A great description of this

Posted on Sat, 02 Feb 2019

A great description of this aristocratic bird, Rhiannon. You always show the environment at its best with style.

Luigi x 

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Posted in Avocet

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A wish list that will be

Posted on Mon, 17 Dec 2018

A wish list that will be familiar to many. An enjoyable read skillfully written.

Best, Luigi x

P.S. Query: a typo on the second line of the final stanza? ...to the the

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