Strangers (on a train)

By luigi_pagano
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I regularly travel
on the Underground;
in the morning southbound,
in the evening, homebound.
Catch the first train
at Tufnell Park;
it is very early
and still pitch-dark.
I use public transport
to get to my work
where I'm employed
as an accounts clerk.
Traditionally I enter
the last carriage
and I have done that
since my marriage.
I sit, people-watching
and what do I see?
Anonymous strangers
in front of me.
Immediately devising
a devilish plan,
I look around me
for a suitable man
One that, like me,
is capable and willing
to seriously contemplate
a reciprocal killing.
Now I ask myself
about what
made me imagine
that sinister plot.
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Good IP response Luigi, thank
Good IP response Luigi, thank you (did you ever find one?)
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Alfred Hitchcock
This is my second favourite Hitchcock film Luigi, it's actually hard to fault the logic. If the film hadn't been made in the 1950's they might have got away with it.
But of course in the 1950's the censors wouldn't allow anyone in a film to commit a crime and get away with it - look at how they changed the plot and the ending of Rebecca when Hitchcock made it as a film, compared to the book.
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We've all been there Luigi.
We've all been there Luigi. Confession is good for the soul!
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