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Cherry

Bee's Journey

This is for the many many people who've been following Bee's Journey, all the way through her diagnosis and her treatment. Bee has asked me to put an...
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Cherry

Lucky

It’s the best thing for him. You must insist. Intensive neuro rehab. Keep fighting for it. That’s what they all said – what they told me to do, so that’s what I did. Funding is difficult.
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Things that keep me awake at night

scraps - notes - things that keep me awake at night
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Shoelaces

The way he told me, he saw it as a kind of existentialist episode. “It’s like the left side of my brain’s taken over from the right side” he said, “… the sensible side.
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206 of my comments have received 204 Great Feedback votes

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Hi - what a fascinating peice

Posted on Mon, 10 Feb 2014

Hi - what a fascinating peice this is! it was really interesting the way you compared the different geographical prejudices. My only criticisim is that we're kind of left hanging .... there's so little about when you're actually there. I was...

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Posted in 7 days in Tehran

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Hello fining - welcome to ABC

Posted on Sat, 04 Jan 2014

Hello fining - welcome to ABC. This has a nice flow to it, but since you've specifically asked, I do have a couple of observations:

 

firstly, it might have been better to post the prologue and chapter one seperately - easier for...

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Posted in August Shadow (working title): Prologue

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Everything you've posted

Posted on Tue, 14 Nov 2017

Everything you've posted since your return has been a blinder! This one is a perfect example of how less can be so much more

This is our very well deserved Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day (courtesy of Ewan)

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Posted in Dot

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beautifully done

Posted on Thu, 09 Nov 2017

beautifully done

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Posted in Beautiful Angel

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Edited or not, this is

Posted on Thu, 02 Nov 2017

Edited or not, this is shaping up very well. Lots of detail in this part, but you've managed to present it in a way that keeps this reader's interest!

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Posted in The Eden Sky - 3 - An Auspicious Day

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An interesting think-piece

Posted on Sat, 21 Oct 2017

An interesting think-piece Tom, thank you for posting it

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Posted in A Mustard Seed and the Kingdom of Heaven

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painfully raw 

Posted on Sat, 07 Oct 2017

painfully raw 

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Posted in .12 wet dreams

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This is stunningly beautiful

Posted on Sun, 17 Sep 2017

This is stunningly beautiful Di - it reads like an impressionist painting - so yes, a bit of work needed, but all the better for it. I've been to a few places like this and I know exactly what you mean. A brilliant pick

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Posted in time travelling

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Some really interesting

Posted on Sun, 27 Aug 2017

Some really interesting twists and turns in this piece, and I'd love to read another part of it ( I hope there's more to come?)

If you're looking for suggestions, here's one big thing: Are you saying that the 8yr old thought he could lay...

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Posted in Bringing Charlie Back (Rewrite)

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This is our Facebook and

Posted on Wed, 23 Aug 2017

This is our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day

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Posted in Eliza

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