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My stories have been read 308754 times
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My stories
Katy, A Ghost Story (IP)
Wrote this one ages ago, and thought I'd have a go at the IP with it Picture Credit: https://tinyurl.com/y2c95x4p
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Notifications Test
test for John, please ignore
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Bee's Journey
This is for the many many people who've been following Bee's Journey, all the way through her diagnosis and her treatment. Bee has asked me to put an...
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Lucky
It’s the best thing for him. You must insist. Intensive neuro rehab. Keep fighting for it. That’s what they all said – what they told me to do, so that’s what I did. Funding is difficult.
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Things that keep me awake at night
scraps - notes - things that keep me awake at night
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catching up - I can offer you
Posted on Sun, 14 Feb 2021
catching up - I can offer you a comic moment, after Jane's poor daughter's grim one - a man, coat over what were clearly pyjamas, obviously just jumped out of bed and realised he'd forgotten valentine's day, had tied his overexicted dog to a...
Read full commentPosted in The Opposite of Love
They're so majestic-looking
Posted on Fri, 19 Jun 2020
They're so majestic-looking aren't they? And slightly unexpected somehow. Onemore I know so much more about birds since you returned to ABCTales - thank you!
Read full commentPosted in Grey Heron
Beautifully done, and a
Posted on Wed, 22 Apr 2020
Beautifully done, and a perfect daily pick. Swan stalking obsession eh? I wonder if there's a helpline for that. Seriously though, I once had the privilege of having a swans' nest at the bottom of my garden, and watching them build, then guard...
Read full commentPosted in I Want To Tell You Things
What they all say ^ ^ - a
Posted on Wed, 25 Mar 2020
What they all say ^ ^ - a fine piece of writing, but I hope you go and spend some time with the lemurs and kittens of facebook now. You know it makes sense xx
Read full commentPosted in Just Put Me In The Fridge
This has more twists than a
Posted on Mon, 10 Feb 2020
This has more twists than a whole series of Dallas, Luigi - I am expecting Joan Collins to come swishing through the door any minute now.
Read full commentPosted in Who Do You Think You Are
reading your comment, there's
Posted on Sat, 14 Dec 2019
reading your comment, there's a real sense of it in the second verse. Suicide is brutal to those it leaves behind
Read full commentPosted in The Worst
I love the layers in this one
Posted on Fri, 01 Nov 2019
I love the layers in this one - some beautiful imagery and again, such a fascinating creature. This has been a wonderful week for nature poems on ABCTales hasn't it!
Read full commentPosted in Ecstasy
coming over here, making all
Posted on Thu, 31 Oct 2019
coming over here, making all that noise...
They are lovely to watch aren...
Read full commentPosted in Geese
You're right - and while, of
Posted on Sat, 10 Aug 2019
You're right - and while, of course, once you've written something it stops being your personal property with your interpretation and becomes whatever the reader reads it as being, I think these readings add a really interesting dimension to the...
Read full commentPosted in In perpetuity
I really like all the detail
Posted on Thu, 07 Feb 2019
I really like all the detail in this and also think the two main characters are shaping up nicely
A couple of suggestions:
The dialogue as they walk around the town - it's a bit block of text followed by block of text and I'm not...
Read full commentPosted in Charlie and Eliza (Pt 1)
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