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My stories have been read 273256 times and 170 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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Katy, A Ghost Story (IP)

Wrote this one ages ago, and thought I'd have a go at the IP with it Picture Credit: https://tinyurl.com/y2c95x4p
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Notifications Test

test for John, please ignore
Cherry

Bee's Journey

This is for the many many people who've been following Bee's Journey, all the way through her diagnosis and her treatment. Bee has asked me to put an...
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Cherry

Lucky

It’s the best thing for him. You must insist. Intensive neuro rehab. Keep fighting for it. That’s what they all said – what they told me to do, so that’s what I did. Funding is difficult.
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Cherry

Things that keep me awake at night

scraps - notes - things that keep me awake at night
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470 of my comments have received 477 Great Feedback votes

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reading your comment, there's

Posted on Sat, 14 Dec 2019

reading your comment, there's a real sense of it in the second verse. Suicide is brutal to those it leaves behind

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Posted in The Worst

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I love the full stops - they

Posted on Wed, 27 Nov 2019

I love the full stops - they are as you say very funny. But with commas when I do them I read it in my head and when I would take a breath I like to put a comma. Where I commented on your commas it was generally because without them it broke my...

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Posted in Seven Nights at the Flamingo Hotel (Friday morning. Glory. Love is in the air.)

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I love the layers in this one

Posted on Fri, 01 Nov 2019

I love the layers in this one - some beautiful imagery and again, such a fascinating creature. This has been a wonderful week for nature poems on ABCTales hasn't it!

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Posted in Ecstasy

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coming over here, making all

Posted on Thu, 31 Oct 2019

coming over here, making all that noise...smiley

They are lovely to watch aren...

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Posted in Geese

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You're right - and while, of

Posted on Sat, 10 Aug 2019

You're right - and while, of course, once you've written something it stops being your personal property with your interpretation and becomes whatever the reader reads it as being, I think these readings add a really interesting dimension to the...

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Posted in In perpetuity

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I really like all the detail

Posted on Thu, 07 Feb 2019

I really like all the detail in this and also think the two main characters are shaping up nicely

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The dialogue as they walk around the town - it's a bit block of text followed by block of text and I'm not...

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Posted in Charlie and Eliza (Pt 1)

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nicely written - I prefer

Posted on Wed, 30 Jan 2019

nicely written - I prefer this piece to the one you posted yesterday - perhaps because the writing is a bit more relaxed?

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Posted in The Tar Pit (1 of 9)

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Di, from experience with one

Posted on Sat, 29 Sep 2018

Di, from experience with one of my sons, a diagnosis is really important - and it can take ages to arrange unless you get it done privately which can cost a fortune. A diagnosis of dyspraxia meant my son was given extra time in GCSEs (whatever...

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Posted in A Martian in the Closet

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Hahahaha - thanks for the

Posted on Wed, 11 Jul 2018

Hahahaha - thanks for the translation London/parson - I know it's petty but Tony was very strict about that so I guess we should be too

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Posted in The meeting - good friends

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No sense in talking about the

Posted on Wed, 20 Jun 2018

No sense in talking about the cracks.
Blokes don’t need help,
just a good night’s sleep
a shower
a shit
a shave and
a shag
my father said
my mates said
my brother said

that makes me so...

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Posted in The Iceberg

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