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Cherry

Bee's Journey

This is for the many many people who've been following Bee's Journey, all the way through her diagnosis and her treatment. Bee has asked me to put an...
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Cherry

Lucky

It’s the best thing for him. You must insist. Intensive neuro rehab. Keep fighting for it. That’s what they all said – what they told me to do, so that’s what I did. Funding is difficult.
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Things that keep me awake at night

scraps - notes - things that keep me awake at night
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Shoelaces

The way he told me, he saw it as a kind of existentialist episode. “It’s like the left side of my brain’s taken over from the right side” he said, “… the sensible side.
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224 of my comments have received 223 Great Feedback votes

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I really like the meticulous

Posted on Sun, 26 Nov 2017

I really like the meticulous detail in this piece - the timetable of the woman's day works well as a frame for the narrative, and the small events come across as very authentic, as does the relationship between the couple.

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Posted in May you live all the days of your life

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Hi - what a fascinating peice

Posted on Mon, 10 Feb 2014

Hi - what a fascinating peice this is! it was really interesting the way you compared the different geographical prejudices. My only criticisim is that we're kind of left hanging .... there's so little about when you're actually there. I was...

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Posted in 7 days in Tehran

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Hello fining - welcome to ABC

Posted on Sat, 04 Jan 2014

Hello fining - welcome to ABC. This has a nice flow to it, but since you've specifically asked, I do have a couple of observations:

 

firstly, it might have been better to post the prologue and chapter one seperately - easier for...

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Posted in August Shadow (working title): Prologue

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This is a little gem of a

Posted on Mon, 22 Jan 2018

This is a little gem of a poem!

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Posted in Breaking The Silence

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I'd like to echo what airy

Posted on Tue, 09 Jan 2018

I'd like to echo what airy says - this is crying out to be a performance piece - speaking of which, we are having a reading night next month!

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Posted in The Dream

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oh dear - perhaps this is the

Posted on Sat, 09 Dec 2017

oh dear - perhaps this is the turning point and it's all going to be kittens and rainbows from now on. I hope it gets better soon xx

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Posted in The agony and the ecstacy

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clever and funny!

Posted on Fri, 05 Jan 2018

clever and funny!

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Posted in Zam and the Sibyl

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Lots of great life writing

Posted on Tue, 02 Jan 2018

Lots of great life writing this morning, and this is one of them. Thank you for posting it!

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Posted in The Journey Back

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Merry Christmas Selim!

Posted on Sat, 23 Dec 2017

Merry Christmas Selim!

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Posted in My pressies this year...

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Well if that doesn't whet

Posted on Mon, 18 Dec 2017

Well if that doesn't whet your readers' appetites for more, I don't know what will! Very nicely done

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Posted in CTMAS - Prologue

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