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Notifications Test
test for John, please ignore
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Bee's Journey
This is for the many many people who've been following Bee's Journey, all the way through her diagnosis and her treatment. Bee has asked me to put an...
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Lucky
It’s the best thing for him. You must insist. Intensive neuro rehab. Keep fighting for it. That’s what they all said – what they told me to do, so that’s what I did. Funding is difficult.
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Things that keep me awake at night
scraps - notes - things that keep me awake at night
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Shoelaces
The way he told me, he saw it as a kind of existentialist episode. “It’s like the left side of my brain’s taken over from the right side” he said, “… the sensible side.
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I really like the meticulous
Posted on Sun, 26 Nov 2017
I really like the meticulous detail in this piece - the timetable of the woman's day works well as a frame for the narrative, and the small events come across as very authentic, as does the relationship between the couple.
Suggestions: In...
Read full commentPosted in May you live all the days of your life
Hi - what a fascinating peice
Posted on Mon, 10 Feb 2014
Hi - what a fascinating peice this is! it was really interesting the way you compared the different geographical prejudices. My only criticisim is that we're kind of left hanging .... there's so little about when you're actually there. I was...
Read full commentPosted in 7 days in Tehran
Hello fining - welcome to ABC
Posted on Sat, 04 Jan 2014
Hello fining - welcome to ABC. This has a nice flow to it, but since you've specifically asked, I do have a couple of observations:
firstly, it might have been better to post the prologue and chapter one seperately - easier for...
Read full commentPosted in August Shadow (working title): Prologue
Very pleased to see this has
Posted on Sat, 14 Apr 2018
Very pleased to see this has been made our daily pick - extremely well deserved for its original approach - well done!
Read full commentPosted in Under the hood
Another vote for those last
Posted on Sat, 07 Apr 2018
Another vote for those last two lines from me. Not sure you need the second 'all' here:
We’ve all grown up now.
Read full commentSo it’s all ok.
Posted in Quixote by the Chip Shop Light
You've not had Spring either?
Posted on Wed, 04 Apr 2018
You've not had Spring either? Ours is just beginning, and annoyingly yesterday - the first day I could honestly say that - the minute I went outside my nose started running like a tap, and I cried until I was back indoors. After such a long wait...
Read full commentPosted in Spring Leaves Me Cold (IP)
What a brilliant word! How
Posted on Mon, 02 Apr 2018
What a brilliant word! How can we possibly not have one with the same meaning in english? This poem definitely fits the bill Torscot. You've put it in the IP category though (which this week is 50 words only) - so it needs to be tweaked into...
Read full commentPosted in “Mamihlapinatapai " Poetry Monthly
Some brilliant lines in this
Posted on Sun, 01 Apr 2018
Some brilliant lines in this Kilb
Read full commentPosted in Alternative Prayer of Remembrance, Easter 2018
This is very well done! I can
Posted on Sat, 31 Mar 2018
This is very well done! I can imagine it would make an excellent bedtime story. Do you have illustrations to go with it?
Read full commentPosted in Brick by Brick
This is very good. I like the
Posted on Tue, 20 Mar 2018
This is very good. I like the way you use the arrival of the new student as an introductory passage. There's one small thing that confused me - here:
'But even she, a twenty two year old actress, is an infrequent guest preferring to spend...
Read full commentPosted in Englishman Descending 1-3
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