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My stories have been read 219683 times and 167 of my stories have been cherry picked.
193 of my 7,307 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 195 votes

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Cherry

Bee's Journey

This is for the many many people who've been following Bee's Journey, all the way through her diagnosis and her treatment. Bee has asked me to put an...
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Cherry

Lucky

It’s the best thing for him. You must insist. Intensive neuro rehab. Keep fighting for it. That’s what they all said – what they told me to do, so that’s what I did. Funding is difficult.
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Things that keep me awake at night

scraps - notes - things that keep me awake at night
Cherry

Shoelaces

The way he told me, he saw it as a kind of existentialist episode. “It’s like the left side of my brain’s taken over from the right side” he said, “… the sensible side.
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193 of my comments have received 195 Great Feedback votes

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Hi - what a fascinating peice

Posted on Mon, 10 Feb 2014

Hi - what a fascinating peice this is! it was really interesting the way you compared the different geographical prejudices. My only criticisim is that we're kind of left hanging .... there's so little about when you're actually there. I was...

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Posted in 7 days in Tehran

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Hello fining - welcome to ABC

Posted on Sat, 04 Jan 2014

Hello fining - welcome to ABC. This has a nice flow to it, but since you've specifically asked, I do have a couple of observations:

 

firstly, it might have been better to post the prologue and chapter one seperately - easier for...

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Posted in August Shadow (working title): Prologue

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ah - upgrading - I only do it

Posted on Sun, 23 Jul 2017

ah - upgrading - I only do it if the New Thing is going to be better than the Old Thing and/or Apple announce their plans to make the Old Thing redundant, (which is a huge rip-off)

Nice to see you again! To change the font size, I think...

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Posted in I’m not upgrading

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Your narrator has a very

Posted on Wed, 19 Jul 2017

Your narrator has a very convincing voice. I'm enjoying this!

ps in the first para - should be jokey

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Posted in Restart 2

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Yes, definitely! Perhaps it's

Posted on Thu, 13 Jul 2017

Yes, definitely! Perhaps it's the way you copied and pasted? If you continue to have a problem, let me know and I'll have a go 

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Posted in Restart 1

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ooh  - this sounds

Posted on Thu, 13 Jul 2017

ooh  - this sounds interesting. I'm not sure how, but the formatting is a little strange - perhaps you could fix that? Welcome back Ash - nice to see you again!

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Posted in Restart 1

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Perfect in every way, and the

Posted on Thu, 13 Jul 2017

Perfect in every way, and the funniest thing I've read for ages. Please come back soon with more!

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Posted in What happens near Rome

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dripping with the most

Posted on Tue, 11 Jul 2017

dripping with the most wonderfully colourful images - I particularly love the description of the baby seals. You really are on a roll lately Rosa!

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Posted in Seals in the Currents

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Such a sweet story! And the

Posted on Sun, 02 Jul 2017

Such a sweet story! And the sense of place and time is very well done.

'She beams at me, a sight worth missing Parkinson for' I love that line!

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Posted in The Rendezvous

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Lots to like in this partial

Posted on Wed, 28 Jun 2017

Lots to like in this partial story - I really hope you let us know what he wishes for! If you're looking for suggestions I'd say it needs quite a bit of cutting down. I'm not sure alot of the preamble is necessary, for instance - and also there's...

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Posted in Missi - a fairy story

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