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Notifications Test
test for John, please ignore
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Bee's Journey
This is for the many many people who've been following Bee's Journey, all the way through her diagnosis and her treatment. Bee has asked me to put an...
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Lucky
It’s the best thing for him. You must insist. Intensive neuro rehab. Keep fighting for it. That’s what they all said – what they told me to do, so that’s what I did. Funding is difficult.
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Things that keep me awake at night
scraps - notes - things that keep me awake at night
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Shoelaces
The way he told me, he saw it as a kind of existentialist episode. “It’s like the left side of my brain’s taken over from the right side” he said, “… the sensible side.
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Hi - what a fascinating peice
Posted on Mon, 10 Feb 2014
Hi - what a fascinating peice this is! it was really interesting the way you compared the different geographical prejudices. My only criticisim is that we're kind of left hanging .... there's so little about when you're actually there. I was...
Read full commentPosted in 7 days in Tehran
Hello fining - welcome to ABC
Posted on Sat, 04 Jan 2014
Hello fining - welcome to ABC. This has a nice flow to it, but since you've specifically asked, I do have a couple of observations:
firstly, it might have been better to post the prologue and chapter one seperately - easier for...
Read full commentPosted in August Shadow (working title): Prologue
ah - upgrading - I only do it
Posted on Sun, 23 Jul 2017
ah - upgrading - I only do it if the New Thing is going to be better than the Old Thing and/or Apple announce their plans to make the Old Thing redundant, (which is a huge rip-off)
Nice to see you again! To change the font size, I think...
Read full commentPosted in I’m not upgrading
Your narrator has a very
Posted on Wed, 19 Jul 2017
Your narrator has a very convincing voice. I'm enjoying this!
ps in the first para - should be jokey
Read full commentPosted in Restart 2
Yes, definitely! Perhaps it's
Posted on Thu, 13 Jul 2017
Yes, definitely! Perhaps it's the way you copied and pasted? If you continue to have a problem, let me know and I'll have a go
Read full commentPosted in Restart 1
ooh - this sounds
Posted on Thu, 13 Jul 2017
ooh - this sounds interesting. I'm not sure how, but the formatting is a little strange - perhaps you could fix that? Welcome back Ash - nice to see you again!
Read full commentPosted in Restart 1
Perfect in every way, and the
Posted on Thu, 13 Jul 2017
Perfect in every way, and the funniest thing I've read for ages. Please come back soon with more!
Read full commentPosted in What happens near Rome
dripping with the most
Posted on Tue, 11 Jul 2017
dripping with the most wonderfully colourful images - I particularly love the description of the baby seals. You really are on a roll lately Rosa!
Read full commentPosted in Seals in the Currents
Such a sweet story! And the
Posted on Sun, 02 Jul 2017
Such a sweet story! And the sense of place and time is very well done.
'She beams at me, a sight worth missing Parkinson for' I love that line!
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Lots to like in this partial
Posted on Wed, 28 Jun 2017
Lots to like in this partial story - I really hope you let us know what he wishes for! If you're looking for suggestions I'd say it needs quite a bit of cutting down. I'm not sure alot of the preamble is necessary, for instance - and also there's...
Read full commentPosted in Missi - a fairy story
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