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Cherry

Bee's Journey

This is for the many many people who've been following Bee's Journey, all the way through her diagnosis and her treatment. Bee has asked me to put an...
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Cherry

Lucky

It’s the best thing for him. You must insist. Intensive neuro rehab. Keep fighting for it. That’s what they all said – what they told me to do, so that’s what I did. Funding is difficult.
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Things that keep me awake at night

scraps - notes - things that keep me awake at night
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Shoelaces

The way he told me, he saw it as a kind of existentialist episode. “It’s like the left side of my brain’s taken over from the right side” he said, “… the sensible side.
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283 of my comments have received 283 Great Feedback votes

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Hahahaha - thanks for the

Posted on Wed, 11 Jul 2018

Hahahaha - thanks for the translation London/parson - I know it's petty but Tony was very strict about that so I guess we should be too

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Posted in The meeting - good friends

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No sense in talking about the

Posted on Wed, 20 Jun 2018

No sense in talking about the cracks.
Blokes don’t need help,
just a good night’s sleep
a shower
a shit
a shave and
a shag
my father said
my mates said
my brother said

that makes me so...

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Posted in The Iceberg

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I really like the meticulous

Posted on Sun, 26 Nov 2017

I really like the meticulous detail in this piece - the timetable of the woman's day works well as a frame for the narrative, and the small events come across as very authentic, as does the relationship between the couple.

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Posted in May you live all the days of your life

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Hi - what a fascinating peice

Posted on Mon, 10 Feb 2014

Hi - what a fascinating peice this is! it was really interesting the way you compared the different geographical prejudices. My only criticisim is that we're kind of left hanging .... there's so little about when you're actually there. I was...

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Posted in 7 days in Tehran

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Hello fining - welcome to ABC

Posted on Sat, 04 Jan 2014

Hello fining - welcome to ABC. This has a nice flow to it, but since you've specifically asked, I do have a couple of observations:

 

firstly, it might have been better to post the prologue and chapter one seperately - easier for...

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Posted in August Shadow (working title): Prologue

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I'd never heard the word

Posted on Mon, 10 Sep 2018

I'd never heard the word 'sough' before and had to look it up - can't understand why it's not more widely used! Anyway - this is lovely Di, welcome back!

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Posted in storm cooking

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Such a bleak, sad piece. 

Posted on Mon, 10 Sep 2018

Such a bleak, sad piece. 

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Posted in Not That Kind of Girl

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That final stanza would be

Posted on Thu, 23 Aug 2018

That final stanza would be horrific for someone who didn't pronounce the H smiley

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Posted in Casino Town

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I love those two final lines 

Posted on Tue, 14 Aug 2018

I love those two final lines 

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Posted in highland games 2018 (again)

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I like the voice in this poem

Posted on Thu, 02 Aug 2018

I like the voice in this poem - it's almost like one of those make your own ending books for children too

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Posted in A Puzzle

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