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My stories have been read 216403 times and 167 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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Cherry

Bee's Journey

This is for the many many people who've been following Bee's Journey, all the way through her diagnosis and her treatment. Bee has asked me to put an...
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Cherry

Lucky

It’s the best thing for him. You must insist. Intensive neuro rehab. Keep fighting for it. That’s what they all said – what they told me to do, so that’s what I did. Funding is difficult.
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Things that keep me awake at night

scraps - notes - things that keep me awake at night
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Shoelaces

The way he told me, he saw it as a kind of existentialist episode. “It’s like the left side of my brain’s taken over from the right side” he said, “… the sensible side.
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173 of my comments have received 175 Great Feedback votes

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Hi - what a fascinating peice

Posted on Mon, 10 Feb 2014

Hi - what a fascinating peice this is! it was really interesting the way you compared the different geographical prejudices. My only criticisim is that we're kind of left hanging .... there's so little about when you're actually there. I was...

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Posted in 7 days in Tehran

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Hello fining - welcome to ABC

Posted on Sat, 04 Jan 2014

Hello fining - welcome to ABC. This has a nice flow to it, but since you've specifically asked, I do have a couple of observations:

 

firstly, it might have been better to post the prologue and chapter one seperately - easier for...

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Posted in August Shadow (working title): Prologue

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Another fine piece of

Posted on Wed, 24 May 2017

Another fine piece of lifewriting (two in one night!) - I'm so glad you've posted more of this Sim. I hope to see another excerpt soon

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Posted in JEAN (From Ribbentrop's Chair)

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You built the atmosphere

Posted on Tue, 23 May 2017

You built the atmosphere really well - all the 'normal stuff' - the slight middle age crisis, the family weekend, the conversation between the girl and the father about the phone's torch. The sudden panic when the girl disappears is convincingly...

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Posted in The Dark - part 2

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Hooray! Lovely to see Larry

Posted on Fri, 12 May 2017

Hooray! Lovely to see Larry and Mick back!

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Posted in Larry and Mick and the Niftily Deflected Insult

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Best IP response I've seen so

Posted on Sun, 07 May 2017

Best IP response I've seen so far this week Luigi - well done

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Posted in If You Wait Long Enough By the River...

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This is our Poem of the Month

Posted on Tue, 25 Apr 2017

This is our Poem of the Month - Congratulations!

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Posted in Spin Cycle

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That last line is

Posted on Mon, 01 May 2017

That last line is heartbreaking. Thank you for postng this Elsie and please pass that cherry onto your dad

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Posted in Shlamek

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I'm enjoying this Parson. It

Posted on Sat, 29 Apr 2017

I'm enjoying this Parson. It got off to quite a slow start (perhaps a bit of an edit needed there) and in this part I'm suggesting you give your reader a bit more about the characters. Just saying the man looked like a guide at the Jorvik Viking...

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Posted in Boatman's dream 2

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You capture the beauty of all

Posted on Fri, 07 Apr 2017

You capture the beauty of all the colour Rhiannon - well done

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Posted in Early April Flowers

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