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Cherry

Bee's Journey

This is for the many many people who've been following Bee's Journey, all the way through her diagnosis and her treatment. Bee has asked me to put an...
Cherry

Lucky

It’s the best thing for him. You must insist. Intensive neuro rehab. Keep fighting for it. That’s what they all said – what they told me to do, so that’s what I did. Funding is difficult.
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Cherry

Things that keep me awake at night

scraps - notes - things that keep me awake at night
Cherry

Shoelaces

The way he told me, he saw it as a kind of existentialist episode. “It’s like the left side of my brain’s taken over from the right side” he said, “… the sensible side.
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170 of my comments have received 174 Great Feedback votes

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aaargh. that is all.

Posted on Tue, 22 Jul 2014

aaargh. that is all.

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Posted in Daniel 35: The Beginning Of Something

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Hi - what a fascinating peice

Posted on Mon, 10 Feb 2014

Hi - what a fascinating peice this is! it was really interesting the way you compared the different geographical prejudices. My only criticisim is that we're kind of left hanging .... there's so little about when you're actually there. I was...

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Posted in 7 days in Tehran

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This is very good, but please

Posted on Tue, 14 Jan 2014

This is very good, but please hurry up with the next one!

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Posted in Daniel 22: Kind And Brave

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Hello fining - welcome to ABC

Posted on Sat, 04 Jan 2014

Hello fining - welcome to ABC. This has a nice flow to it, but since you've specifically asked, I do have a couple of observations:

 

firstly, it might have been better to post the prologue and chapter one seperately - easier for...

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Posted in August Shadow (working title): Prologue

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Some interesting twists and

Posted on Sat, 25 Mar 2017

Some interesting twists and turns in this opening chapter! I'm intrigued as to how it's going to pan out

I'm not sure about 'meat article' - is that a typo for meaty?

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Posted in "Past or Present" Chapter 1

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 - it's that sudden beauty in

Posted on Thu, 23 Mar 2017

 - it's that sudden beauty in everything after a winter's bleakness isn't it - very well said Rhiannon!

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Posted in Awakening!

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The short sharp works really

Posted on Sun, 19 Mar 2017

The short sharp works really well, and I imagine it sounds very effective too.

When you miss someone and it's all you can write, is something I think many of us can identify with.

This is our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day...

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Posted in Mum's the word

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glad you're on the up now.

Posted on Mon, 13 Mar 2017

glad you're on the up now. Black dogs are always lovely friendly and kind - never met a shit one!

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Posted in Dogged

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Always nice to read something

Posted on Fri, 03 Mar 2017

Always nice to read something with a happy ending! I like the detail in this story, and the narrative flows really well. If you're looking for feedback, there are some auto correct typos, and some places where I think you might have repeated the...

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Posted in The Fairy Ring

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A very thoughtful piece. I

Posted on Sun, 12 Feb 2017

A very thoughtful piece. I hope you get a lot of reads for this!

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Posted in You want to leave a legacy?

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