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Cherry

Bee's Journey

This is for the many many people who've been following Bee's Journey, all the way through her diagnosis and her treatment. Bee has asked me to put an...
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Lucky

It’s the best thing for him. You must insist. Intensive neuro rehab. Keep fighting for it. That’s what they all said – what they told me to do, so that’s what I did. Funding is difficult.
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Things that keep me awake at night

scraps - notes - things that keep me awake at night
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Shoelaces

The way he told me, he saw it as a kind of existentialist episode. “It’s like the left side of my brain’s taken over from the right side” he said, “… the sensible side.
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164 of my comments have received 168 Great Feedback votes

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aaargh. that is all.

Posted on Tue, 22 Jul 2014

aaargh. that is all.

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Posted in Daniel 35: The Beginning Of Something

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Hi - what a fascinating peice

Posted on Mon, 10 Feb 2014

Hi - what a fascinating peice this is! it was really interesting the way you compared the different geographical prejudices. My only criticisim is that we're kind of left hanging .... there's so little about when you're actually there. I was...

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Posted in 7 days in Tehran

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This is very good, but please

Posted on Tue, 14 Jan 2014

This is very good, but please hurry up with the next one!

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Posted in Daniel 22: Kind And Brave

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Hello fining - welcome to ABC

Posted on Sat, 04 Jan 2014

Hello fining - welcome to ABC. This has a nice flow to it, but since you've specifically asked, I do have a couple of observations:

 

firstly, it might have been better to post the prologue and chapter one seperately - easier for...

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Posted in August Shadow (working title): Prologue

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A very thoughtful piece. I

Posted on Sun, 12 Feb 2017

A very thoughtful piece. I hope you get a lot of reads for this!

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Posted in You want to leave a legacy?

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this is a really good

Posted on Tue, 07 Feb 2017

this is a really good description - it feels just like that sometimes!

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Posted in On Trying to Write

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Some great imagery in this

Posted on Sat, 04 Feb 2017

Some great imagery in this prose (poem?). Welcome back!

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Posted in Half a Cup

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What a fascinating piece of

Posted on Tue, 10 Jan 2017

What a fascinating piece of life writing! I would love to hear more about those years of wandering. Any plans to write it up?

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Posted in (Not) Counting the Minutes at Falmouth Town Station

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agree with all the above -

Posted on Sat, 07 Jan 2017

agree with all the above - such beautiful and detailed images in this word picture!

One small typo : you have a rogue apostrophe in the first stanza

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Posted in Promises of Spring.

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Where you live sounds

Posted on Fri, 06 Jan 2017

Where you live sounds idlyllic Elsie. If I want to do anything (except possibly buy a copy of the Racing Times) I have to drive to get there. Off to look up Exmouth on Right Move!

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Posted in Rant - My Bus Pass - it's not funny anymore

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