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Notifications Test
test for John, please ignore
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Bee's Journey
This is for the many many people who've been following Bee's Journey, all the way through her diagnosis and her treatment. Bee has asked me to put an...
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Lucky
It’s the best thing for him. You must insist. Intensive neuro rehab. Keep fighting for it. That’s what they all said – what they told me to do, so that’s what I did. Funding is difficult.
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Things that keep me awake at night
scraps - notes - things that keep me awake at night
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Shoelaces
The way he told me, he saw it as a kind of existentialist episode. “It’s like the left side of my brain’s taken over from the right side” he said, “… the sensible side.
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Hi - what a fascinating peice
Posted on Mon, 10 Feb 2014
Hi - what a fascinating peice this is! it was really interesting the way you compared the different geographical prejudices. My only criticisim is that we're kind of left hanging .... there's so little about when you're actually there. I was...
Read full commentPosted in 7 days in Tehran
Hello fining - welcome to ABC
Posted on Sat, 04 Jan 2014
Hello fining - welcome to ABC. This has a nice flow to it, but since you've specifically asked, I do have a couple of observations:
firstly, it might have been better to post the prologue and chapter one seperately - easier for...
Read full commentPosted in August Shadow (working title): Prologue
Another fine piece of
Posted on Wed, 24 May 2017
Another fine piece of lifewriting (two in one night!) - I'm so glad you've posted more of this Sim. I hope to see another excerpt soon
Read full commentPosted in JEAN (From Ribbentrop's Chair)
You built the atmosphere
Posted on Tue, 23 May 2017
You built the atmosphere really well - all the 'normal stuff' - the slight middle age crisis, the family weekend, the conversation between the girl and the father about the phone's torch. The sudden panic when the girl disappears is convincingly...
Read full commentPosted in The Dark - part 2
Hooray! Lovely to see Larry
Posted on Fri, 12 May 2017
Hooray! Lovely to see Larry and Mick back!
Read full commentPosted in Larry and Mick and the Niftily Deflected Insult
Best IP response I've seen so
Posted on Sun, 07 May 2017
Best IP response I've seen so far this week Luigi - well done
Read full commentPosted in If You Wait Long Enough By the River...
This is our Poem of the Month
Posted on Tue, 25 Apr 2017
This is our Poem of the Month - Congratulations!
Read full commentPosted in Spin Cycle
That last line is
Posted on Mon, 01 May 2017
That last line is heartbreaking. Thank you for postng this Elsie and please pass that cherry onto your dad
Read full commentPosted in Shlamek
I'm enjoying this Parson. It
Posted on Sat, 29 Apr 2017
I'm enjoying this Parson. It got off to quite a slow start (perhaps a bit of an edit needed there) and in this part I'm suggesting you give your reader a bit more about the characters. Just saying the man looked like a guide at the Jorvik Viking...
Read full commentPosted in Boatman's dream 2
You capture the beauty of all
Posted on Fri, 07 Apr 2017
You capture the beauty of all the colour Rhiannon - well done
Read full commentPosted in Early April Flowers
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