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Goldilocks and the Three Bears (Inspiration Point)

Once upon a time, not so long ago, Goldilocks went for a walk in the woods, but no sooner had she got there than she realized she was wearing six inch heels.
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Las Vegas 3

“So what would happen if we didn’t give it back? If we just kept going?
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Las Vegas 2

It’s half past eight in the evening, but it’s still boiling hot. The temperature gauge says it’s 110, so the first thing we do is put the roof down.
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Las Vegas

We’ve finished laughing at the room. We’ve examined the funny fake ancient Egyptian hieroglyphs that they’ve plastered everywhere.
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372 of my comments have received 374 Great Feedback votes

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I love your nature pieces

Posted on Thu, 11 Apr 2019

I love your nature pieces where you take something seemingly small and insignificant and put it under your imagination's microscope. A very well deseved cherry!

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Posted in Cone Of Enlightenment

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I’ll look forward to reading

Posted on Sat, 06 Apr 2019

I’ll look forward to reading it!

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Posted in The First Night of Spring

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This is a great modern

Posted on Sat, 06 Apr 2019

This is a great modern fairytale. If you decide to do any more work on it, perhaps that last paragraph could be a bit stronger? Lovely as it is though!

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Posted in The First Night of Spring

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I had to read this one or

Posted on Fri, 05 Apr 2019

I had to read this one or twice - it's very imaginative!

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Posted in pondering

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Wonderful first line MJG!

Posted on Tue, 02 Apr 2019

Wonderful first line MJG!

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Posted in Beach

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What a lovely positive

Posted on Sat, 30 Mar 2019

What a lovely positive message in this piece!

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Posted in Perspective

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beautiful description - that

Posted on Thu, 28 Mar 2019

beautiful description - that evening walk sounds like one of those small things that bring a disproportionate joy. I love how we're lucky enough to get little glimpses into where people live!

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Posted in herring gull gallantry

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if you're looking for

Posted on Thu, 28 Mar 2019

if you're looking for suggestions Harry - this is set in the USA right? If so, kettles aren't really a thing there - even more so in the past (am guessing because of the typewriter). Also 'nip, sip' etc - pull instead of nip?

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Posted in Hunting for Duck (5)

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Some vivid description in

Posted on Mon, 25 Mar 2019

Some vivid description in this thought provoking piece. Is it part of something longer? 

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Posted in Jonathan Roven is Lost

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What a lovely idea for the IP

Posted on Sat, 23 Mar 2019

What a lovely idea for the IP Rhiannon! I especially like this one, but the others are great too. This would make a lovely collection to read aloud to very small children. Do you know someone who could illustrate them?

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Posted in Kids' Colours 3)

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