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Shoelaces

The way he told me, he saw it as a kind of existentialist episode. “It’s like the left side of my brain’s taken over from the right side” he said, “… the sensible side.
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Cherry

Goldilocks and the Three Bears (Inspiration Point)

Once upon a time, not so long ago, Goldilocks went for a walk in the woods, but no sooner had she got there than she realized she was wearing six inch heels.
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Cherry

Las Vegas 3

“So what would happen if we didn’t give it back? If we just kept going?
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Las Vegas 2

It’s half past eight in the evening, but it’s still boiling hot. The temperature gauge says it’s 110, so the first thing we do is put the roof down.
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Las Vegas

We’ve finished laughing at the room. We’ve examined the funny fake ancient Egyptian hieroglyphs that they’ve plastered everywhere.
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449 of my comments have received 454 Great Feedback votes

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Hello fining - welcome to ABC

Posted on Sat, 04 Jan 2014

Hello fining - welcome to ABC. This has a nice flow to it, but since you've specifically asked, I do have a couple of observations:

 

firstly, it might have been better to post the prologue and chapter one seperately - easier for...

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Posted in August Shadow (working title): Prologue

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I remember you reading this

Posted on Thu, 21 Nov 2019

I remember you reading this the other day - a wonderful piece, thank you lavadis

ps: have you ever thought of doing a soundcloud (or similar) audio link when you post your poems? We have  our own account if you want to email a link for us...

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Posted in Mars

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I really like this D. small

Posted on Sun, 17 Nov 2019

I really like this D. small typo - should be thieves.

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Posted in Light Thieves

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Well - the last two lines

Posted on Thu, 14 Nov 2019

Well - the last two lines really jar - but in a very good way. Please keep them in!

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Posted in layers

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so much in this short piece

Posted on Thu, 14 Nov 2019

so much in this short piece Di - I love the painterly layers building up one after another - and then those final two lines took me by surprise

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Posted in layers

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A wonderful piece of life

Posted on Thu, 14 Nov 2019

A wonderful piece of life writing - Thank you!

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Posted in Rockefeller Center Babysitting Service

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This is lovely Richard

Posted on Thu, 07 Nov 2019

This is lovely Richard

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Posted in I exist

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Also catching up - the pinata

Posted on Mon, 04 Nov 2019

Also catching up - the pinata is a thing of wonder. Well done

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Posted in Seven Nights At The Hotel Flamingo (Tuesday Morning, the Deadeye Dave, Deer and Ballerina Problem)

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You got lucky! Why did they

Posted on Wed, 06 Nov 2019

You got lucky! Why did they decide the demolish the first church?

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Posted in The Sweets.

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I'll miss all these people

Posted on Tue, 05 Nov 2019

I'll miss all these people when you've finished Sean - I feel I know them quite well!

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Posted in The Bloody Gorgon

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