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Shoelaces
The way he told me, he saw it as a kind of existentialist episode. “It’s like the left side of my brain’s taken over from the right side” he said, “… the sensible side.
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Goldilocks and the Three Bears (Inspiration Point)
Once upon a time, not so long ago, Goldilocks went for a walk in the woods, but no sooner had she got there than she realized she was wearing six inch heels.
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Las Vegas 3
“So what would happen if we didn’t give it back? If we just kept going?
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Las Vegas 2
It’s half past eight in the evening, but it’s still boiling hot. The temperature gauge says it’s 110, so the first thing we do is put the roof down.
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Las Vegas
We’ve finished laughing at the room. We’ve examined the funny fake ancient Egyptian hieroglyphs that they’ve plastered everywhere.
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Lovely to see some more of
Posted on Thu, 23 Apr 2026
Lovely to see some more of this Harry. I remember on my first day at school there was one poor boy who just couldn't stop crying and trying to run away. It was so sad. None of the gentle settling in they do now.
Read full commentPosted in Tom All Alone 14 (i)
You would have been an
Posted on Sun, 12 Apr 2026
You would have been an excellent participant Jane! We have another challenge coming up once this has finished and I'll send you an email when it's up if you like.
Read full commentPosted in Penny's Pass The Story - Part 10.
Always good to see some
Posted on Wed, 08 Apr 2026
Always good to see some expert advice from a professional nutritionalist.
Very funny Turlough, thank you
Read full commentPosted in What a Waist
Jenny I'm so sorry to hear
Posted on Fri, 06 Mar 2026
Jenny I'm so sorry to hear your news - as you can see there are plenty of us thinking of you and hoping you make a swift recovery once they work out what the problem is. I hope your partner is looking after you well and that you manage to keep an...
Read full commentPosted in My Time In A & E ( PT 2 )
Heartbreaking. Forget blood
Posted on Thu, 02 Apr 2026
Heartbreaking. Forget blood and gore and people jumping out at you - this really is proper horror
Read full commentPosted in V. The Dependents - Part Two
A wonderful IP response
Posted on Mon, 30 Mar 2026
A wonderful IP response Turlough, and as true now as it was when the mine in your photo was a working one. Have you ever read Germinal by Zola?
Read full commentPosted in A Hungry Bear Doesn’t Dance
A brilliant contribution -
Posted on Mon, 30 Mar 2026
A brilliant contribution - thank you very much Soulfire!
Read full commentPosted in Penny’s Pass the Parcel - Part 7
Brilliant, thank you Turlough
Posted on Mon, 23 Mar 2026
Brilliant, thank you Turlough. I think you've quite comprehensively fleshed out the characters for us now!
Read full commentPosted in Penny’s Pass the Story - Part Four
This is what Google tells me,
Posted on Thu, 19 Feb 2026
This is what Google tells me, and I'm not 100% sure your suggestion fits into it because it couldn't be described as giving the 'general' idea - it seems more specific - sorry!:
How to Indirectly Quote Lyrics (The "Safe" Way)
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I've never seen Falling Down
Posted on Thu, 19 Feb 2026
I've never seen Falling Down and had to google a couple of US specific things (fire lanes, blotter item), but I also liked the voice here with its forensic level of attention to detail.
One question: in the first part you mention that he...
Read full commentPosted in Courtesy Calls: The Fire Lane (2)
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