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Shoelaces

The way he told me, he saw it as a kind of existentialist episode. “It’s like the left side of my brain’s taken over from the right side” he said, “… the sensible side.
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Cherry

Goldilocks and the Three Bears (Inspiration Point)

Once upon a time, not so long ago, Goldilocks went for a walk in the woods, but no sooner had she got there than she realized she was wearing six inch heels.
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Las Vegas 3

“So what would happen if we didn’t give it back? If we just kept going?
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Las Vegas 2

It’s half past eight in the evening, but it’s still boiling hot. The temperature gauge says it’s 110, so the first thing we do is put the roof down.
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Las Vegas

We’ve finished laughing at the room. We’ve examined the funny fake ancient Egyptian hieroglyphs that they’ve plastered everywhere.
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2715 of my comments have received 2809 Great Feedback votes

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also please do consider

Posted on Tue, 21 Jul 2026

also please do consider telling us more about Shirley

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Posted in The Way We Heard: Three Coins In The Fountain (1954) (Pt.1)

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This is our very well

Posted on Tue, 21 Jul 2026

This is our very well deserved social media Pick of the Day

Please read both parts and then share far and wide

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Posted in The Way We Heard: Three Coins In The Fountain (1954) (Pt.1)

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I've actually seen a few news

Posted on Thu, 09 Jul 2026

I've actually seen a few news items about scaffolders, farmers etc in the heat, poor things - and poor you Jane too. I think whenever possible people should adjust working hours to what they do in eg mediterranean countries - early starts, long...

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Posted in On Sizzling Days (repost from 2013)

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That last stanza is

Posted on Thu, 09 Jul 2026

That last stanza is particularly powerful. Nice IP response turlough. Was there ever a word quite so weaponised as migrant?

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Posted in Misplaced Person Seeks Pomegranates

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This wonderful poem is our

Posted on Fri, 03 Jul 2026

This wonderful poem is our social media Pick of the Day

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Posted in When a dog knows too much

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This brilliant story is our

Posted on Wed, 24 Jun 2026

This brilliant story is our social media Pick of the Day

Please share if you enjoyed it as much as I did

Picture Credit:
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Posted in The sort of day....

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I'm so sorry about the bad

Posted on Sat, 20 Jun 2026

I'm so sorry about the bad news Jenny - I can totally understand how it's all very overwhelming at the moment. I think trying to stay strong is the perfect thing to aim for right now and perhaps you can break things down into steps so they don't...

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Posted in Diagnosis Of My Appointment

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Hi Eric - you have some

Posted on Fri, 12 Jun 2026

Hi Eric - you have some repetition carried across from the previous part which needs sorting out:

This is from part 11 below. On the bright side the weather's picked up a bit, and also a brilliant happy ending to this excellent story -...

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Posted in Amanderella and the Ppockingstull Treasure Chapter 12

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I'm very glad you managed to

Posted on Mon, 08 Jun 2026

I'm very glad you managed to share your poem in the end Jenny. We are all here for you xx

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Posted in Torment

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I don't remember this one

Posted on Tue, 02 Jun 2026

I don't remember this one Harry. That woman was a sadistic bully who shouldn't have been allowed anywhere near a classroom!

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Posted in Tom All Alone 17 (i)

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