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it was just a little computer

Posted on Sat, 23 Feb 2019

it was just a little computer print out - nothing sophisticated - so long as you can check they had routine scans then, I don't think that would be the problem. (nowadays they are 3d and everything and all nicely presented)The radiographer (?) I...

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Posted in Angel 35 (scan)

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... mind you, it depends when

Posted on Sat, 23 Feb 2019

... mind you, it depends when this is set (which I've forgotten again!) Might be worth looking it up. I can tell you what it was like in 1987 and 1992. The first time you could see the screen, but the person doing the scan wouldn't talk at all -...

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Posted in Angel 35 (scan)

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'She banged through the

Posted on Sat, 23 Feb 2019

'She banged through the toilet door and had her knicker down at her ankles as if they were on greased castors'  knickers!

Twins!!! Perhaps that'll make her high risk and she'll be let out?

When you do the rewrite, as far as I...

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Posted in Angel 35 (scan)

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'Just a friend. If it is was

Posted on Fri, 22 Feb 2019

'Just a friend. If it is was a boyfriend I’d be raging.'

if it was

Poor Angel. I think it's good to take the pace down a bit as you have in this part

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Posted in Angel 34 (Jonah)

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Such a sad story

Posted on Sat, 23 Feb 2019

Such a sad story

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Posted in Isle of Bute.

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This is our Story of the Week

Posted on Wed, 20 Feb 2019

This is our Story of the Week - Congratulations!

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Posted in La Femme d'argent

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This is absolutely wonderful!

Posted on Wed, 20 Feb 2019

This is absolutely wonderful! I wish you were more than just an occasional poster - do come back soon with another one

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Posted in La Femme d'argent

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Some delicious description in

Posted on Wed, 20 Feb 2019

Some delicious description in this Rhiannon. Are we still missing our Elms, or did they find a disease resistant variety to replant with?

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Posted in The fruit of the elm

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It's all happening in this

Posted on Sat, 16 Feb 2019

It's all happening in this part! Maybe when you do the next draft - I know you have a lot of information to get out but I'm not completely sure the dilaogue sounds as natural here as it usually does

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Posted in Angel 28 (proposal)

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'I don’t here anything from

Posted on Tue, 12 Feb 2019

'I don’t here anything from him.'  hear

the scene between Karen and Angel is really touching 

Has she had a tooth knocked out?

Keep going!

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Posted in Angel 24 (Corton Vale)

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