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My stories have been read 265320 times
and 170 of my stories have been cherry picked.
431 of my 9,830 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 434 votes
Some nice comedy moments in
Posted on Fri, 24 May 2019
Some nice comedy moments in this. Is there more to come?
Read full commentPosted in Inside the Mind of an Enlightened Master 3: An Unenlightened Master Exposed?
Made me laugh - thank you!
Posted on Sat, 25 May 2019
Made me laugh - thank you!
Read full commentPosted in Nitpickings
This is breathtakingly good.
Posted on Wed, 22 May 2019
This is breathtakingly good. Beautifully drawn characters
Read full commentPosted in Anthony and Cleopatra
Oh how I wish mine had ever
Posted on Tue, 21 May 2019
Oh how I wish mine had ever been quiet enough for me to forget about them
Read full commentPosted in Left Luggage
A very well deserved cherry
Posted on Mon, 13 May 2019
A very well deserved cherry for this passionate appeal - I also really like the juxtaposition. Thank you Di
Read full commentPosted in bluebells
Some great ideas in this but
Posted on Sat, 11 May 2019
Some great ideas in this but like I think I said last time, they deserve a longer piece!
Also, you called the mother a shrew - I'm not sure that was the right word - it usually denotes someone very argumentative (as in the taming of the...
Read full commentPosted in Letters from The Poet
Once again you've brought a
Posted on Thu, 09 May 2019
Once again you've brought a glorious moment alive for us all in words and pictures - thank you!
Read full commentPosted in Transfixed!
You made me feel cold too, so
Posted on Fri, 03 May 2019
You made me feel cold too, so your descriptive powers are working well Penny!
Read full commentPosted in 1944 (12miles south of Spa Belgium)
all power to the gardener!
Posted on Fri, 03 May 2019
all power to the gardener!
Read full commentPosted in I won't leave my Walled Garden
This is great as a plot
Posted on Thu, 02 May 2019
This is great as a plot outline, but to do it justice I really hope you develop it into something longer. It also needs a bit of work on the ending - perhaps you could take it a little further to the trial itself? I hope you do a rewrite - it's...
Read full commentPosted in Fundraising Parties and Other Family Minefields.
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