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Di, from experience with one
Posted on Sat, 29 Sep 2018
Di, from experience with one of my sons, a diagnosis is really important - and it can take ages to arrange unless you get it done privately which can cost a fortune. A diagnosis of dyspraxia meant my son was given extra time in GCSEs (whatever...
Read full commentPosted in A Martian in the Closet
Hahahaha - thanks for the
Posted on Wed, 11 Jul 2018
Hahahaha - thanks for the translation London/parson - I know it's petty but Tony was very strict about that so I guess we should be too
Read full commentPosted in The meeting - good friends
No sense in talking about the
Posted on Wed, 20 Jun 2018
No sense in talking about the cracks.
Blokes don’t need help,
just a good night’s sleep
a shower
a shit
a shave and
a shag
my father said
my mates said
my brother said
that makes me so...
Read full commentPosted in The Iceberg
I really like the meticulous
Posted on Sun, 26 Nov 2017
I really like the meticulous detail in this piece - the timetable of the woman's day works well as a frame for the narrative, and the small events come across as very authentic, as does the relationship between the couple.
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Read full commentPosted in May you live all the days of your life
Hi - what a fascinating peice
Posted on Mon, 10 Feb 2014
Hi - what a fascinating peice this is! it was really interesting the way you compared the different geographical prejudices. My only criticisim is that we're kind of left hanging .... there's so little about when you're actually there. I was...
Read full commentPosted in 7 days in Tehran
Hello fining - welcome to ABC
Posted on Sat, 04 Jan 2014
Hello fining - welcome to ABC. This has a nice flow to it, but since you've specifically asked, I do have a couple of observations:
firstly, it might have been better to post the prologue and chapter one seperately - easier for...
Read full commentPosted in August Shadow (working title): Prologue
I'm reading 'another Dawkins'
Posted on Tue, 02 Dec 2025
I'm reading 'another Dawkins' as another anyone Gloskat?
I really liked the ambiguity in this story - not the above, but the effect of the barn. Nicely done - thank you!
Read full commentPosted in The Tobacco Barn (Part 2)
Seven years ago I fell down
Posted on Wed, 03 Dec 2025
Seven years ago I fell down some icy concrete stairs in a dark car park. In the process of doing so I acquired a variety of cuts and bruises on legs and elbows, and a big hole in the knee of the new trousers I had bought only the day before....
Read full commentPosted in The Strange Case of Dr Gunchev and Crazy Ludo
Fabulous imagery Penny - you
Posted on Tue, 02 Dec 2025
Fabulous imagery Penny - you made me cold just reading it!
Read full commentPosted in "Winter Constitutional"
I like it - It's intriguing!
Posted on Tue, 02 Dec 2025
I like it - It's intriguing!
Read full commentPosted in The Tobacco Barn (Part 1)
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