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it was just a little computer
Posted on Sat, 23 Feb 2019
it was just a little computer print out - nothing sophisticated - so long as you can check they had routine scans then, I don't think that would be the problem. (nowadays they are 3d and everything and all nicely presented)The radiographer (?) I...
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... mind you, it depends when
Posted on Sat, 23 Feb 2019
... mind you, it depends when this is set (which I've forgotten again!) Might be worth looking it up. I can tell you what it was like in 1987 and 1992. The first time you could see the screen, but the person doing the scan wouldn't talk at all -...
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'She banged through the
Posted on Sat, 23 Feb 2019
'She banged through the toilet door and had her knicker down at her ankles as if they were on greased castors' knickers!
Twins!!! Perhaps that'll make her high risk and she'll be let out?
When you do the rewrite, as far as I...
Read full commentPosted in Angel 35 (scan)
'Just a friend. If it is was
Posted on Fri, 22 Feb 2019
'Just a friend. If it is was a boyfriend I’d be raging.'
if it was
Poor Angel. I think it's good to take the pace down a bit as you have in this part
Read full commentPosted in Angel 34 (Jonah)
Such a sad story
Posted on Sat, 23 Feb 2019
Such a sad story
Read full commentPosted in Isle of Bute.
This is our Story of the Week
Posted on Wed, 20 Feb 2019
This is our Story of the Week - Congratulations!
Read full commentPosted in La Femme d'argent
This is absolutely wonderful!
Posted on Wed, 20 Feb 2019
This is absolutely wonderful! I wish you were more than just an occasional poster - do come back soon with another one
Read full commentPosted in La Femme d'argent
Some delicious description in
Posted on Wed, 20 Feb 2019
Some delicious description in this Rhiannon. Are we still missing our Elms, or did they find a disease resistant variety to replant with?
Read full commentPosted in The fruit of the elm
It's all happening in this
Posted on Sat, 16 Feb 2019
It's all happening in this part! Maybe when you do the next draft - I know you have a lot of information to get out but I'm not completely sure the dilaogue sounds as natural here as it usually does
Read full commentPosted in Angel 28 (proposal)
'I don’t here anything from
Posted on Tue, 12 Feb 2019
'I don’t here anything from him.' hear
the scene between Karen and Angel is really touching
Has she had a tooth knocked out?
Keep going!
Read full commentPosted in Angel 24 (Corton Vale)
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