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Oh no - poor Lisa! You've

Posted on Sun, 10 Mar 2019

Oh no - poor Lisa! You've described all the reactions in a very believable way. Glad to see another part - I was getting worried you might be stuck

A few typos:

 'they had burgers and chips for lunch, proper burgers with mince, with...

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Posted in Angel 41 (Lisa's)

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wonderful final paragraph- I

Posted on Thu, 07 Mar 2019

wonderful final paragraph- I hope you submit this somewhere

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Posted in The Tar Pit (9 of 9)

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Whiplash is horrible- I don't

Posted on Thu, 28 Feb 2019

Whiplash is horrible- I don't know when you  had your accident, but I hope you're recovered now

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Posted in Galaxy Part Two.

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very brave of you to drive

Posted on Wed, 27 Feb 2019

very brave of you to drive yourself home. I hope you're ok - what a shock it must have been. If that's the man's real name it might be wiser to change it a bit. Hope he doesn't try to rip you off in any way!

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Posted in Galaxy.

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I can't remember whether she

Posted on Tue, 26 Feb 2019

I can't remember whether she told Pizza face she was pregnant? Anyway, he is lovely and I think she should marry him

A couple of things: 

'Bruno, true to his word, had visited at every opportunity and dragged Tony along. He wanted...

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Posted in Angel 39 (returns)

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Do you mean those little bits

Posted on Sun, 24 Feb 2019

Do you mean those little bits of plastic which have a thing at each end? I had no idea they were called barbs - but I know just what you mean - they are really annoying aren't they!

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Posted in Pet Hate.

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I googled - looks like you

Posted on Sat, 23 Feb 2019

I googled - looks like you can def use it!

Ultrasound was first used for clinical purposes in 1956 in Glasgow. Obstetrician Ian Donald and engineer Tom Brown developed the first prototype systems based on an instrument used to detect...

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Posted in Angel 35 (scan)

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it was just a little computer

Posted on Sat, 23 Feb 2019

it was just a little computer print out - nothing sophisticated - so long as you can check they had routine scans then, I don't think that would be the problem. (nowadays they are 3d and everything and all nicely presented)The radiographer (?) I...

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Posted in Angel 35 (scan)

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... mind you, it depends when

Posted on Sat, 23 Feb 2019

... mind you, it depends when this is set (which I've forgotten again!) Might be worth looking it up. I can tell you what it was like in 1987 and 1992. The first time you could see the screen, but the person doing the scan wouldn't talk at all -...

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Posted in Angel 35 (scan)

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'She banged through the

Posted on Sat, 23 Feb 2019

'She banged through the toilet door and had her knicker down at her ankles as if they were on greased castors'  knickers!

Twins!!! Perhaps that'll make her high risk and she'll be let out?

When you do the rewrite, as far as I...

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Posted in Angel 35 (scan)

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