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Bithika, I'm one of the co

Posted on Sat, 16 Jun 2018

Bithika, I'm one of the co-directors of ABCTales. I am so very sorry to hear such sad news. John was an absolute legend on our website - the depth and breadth of his writing was amazing and he has many admirers all of whom will be so sad to hear...

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Posted in Stomach Cancer

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Wow - you've got a lot going

Posted on Sat, 21 Jul 2018

Wow - you've got a lot going on in this short piece! Some well crafted characters (though you've killed most of them by the end) and a good sense of time and place. What is a colonial gait? 

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Posted in Holt: The Andalan Affair Chapter one (wip)

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I'm enjoying it all too - I

Posted on Thu, 19 Jul 2018

I'm enjoying it all too - I love Mad Jim, as well as the account of the note being passed around

Are those the actual initials of real people? If so, I'd change them if I were you - and perhaps full (fake) names might be easier for the...

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Posted in I'm Not Disappointed, I'm Just Angry Chapter 4

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Still really enjoying this.

Posted on Wed, 18 Jul 2018

Still really enjoying this. If you're looking for really picky suggestions for the next draft - here:

'The first thing I learn from my first proper lesson (apart from the fact that Year 9 are shit at being creative) and hastily forget is...

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Posted in I'm Not Disappointed, I'm Just Angry Chapter 3

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Well written and very very

Posted on Mon, 16 Jul 2018

Well written and very very funny. You have one more before you reach your posting limit today - hope to see it soon!

ps: have you thought of switching the title around?...

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Posted in I'm Not Disappointed, I'm Just Angry Chapter 1

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a bit of editing needed at

Posted on Sun, 15 Jul 2018

a bit of editing needed at the start - I think you've copied and pasted a passage twice

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Posted in Suggestion Box Problems

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Nice twist at the end!

Posted on Thu, 12 Jul 2018

Nice twist at the end!

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Posted in The End of Marianne Brownleaf’s Teaching Career

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This would make a great

Posted on Wed, 04 Jul 2018

This would make a great little animation pepsoid

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Posted in Pah

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A poignant and well written

Posted on Tue, 03 Jul 2018

A poignant and well written reflection - thank you

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Posted in Remnants

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I love the way this veers off

Posted on Thu, 28 Jun 2018

I love the way this veers off into the surreal!

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Posted in The End of the Evening

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