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I really enojyed this little
Posted on Wed, 12 Dec 2018
I really enojyed this little slice of life writing but I wanted more!
Read full commentPosted in Results: 1979
I’m very sorry you’re not
Posted on Sat, 01 Dec 2018
I’m very sorry you’re not well Hudson and I hope you improve soon, but to be honest I’m not 100% sorry if it results in a piece of sparkling prose like this. It’s the best thing I’ve seen on ABCTales for a while. Well done!
Read full commentPosted in Another Cock-Eyed Christmas
ok, I've just re-read this
Posted on Mon, 19 Nov 2018
ok, I've just re-read this part - I do realise this might all change if, as you say, she gets more space in the next parts, but so far she seems to me to be just a foil for gillis - someone to whom he speaks and who occasionally relays...
Read full commentPosted in Aura (22)
Fabulous title - and I really
Posted on Thu, 22 Nov 2018
Fabulous title - and I really like the poem. Do you think perhaps that first 'but' might be a bit unnecessary?
Read full commentPosted in Poem Written On A Plane Over The Atlantic Attempting To Justify A Life Of Debauchery
this is developing at just
Posted on Wed, 31 Oct 2018
this is developing at just the right pace - nicely balanced too, between local colour, dialogue and action. So much harder to get right than people think
Read full commentPosted in Aura (4)
A wonderful, reflective piece
Posted on Tue, 13 Nov 2018
A wonderful, reflective piece. I wish you luck finding out about the man in the photograph - please let us know how you get on!
Read full commentPosted in The Bells of Hell (IP)
Like philip says - sometimes
Posted on Mon, 12 Nov 2018
Like philip says - sometimes I find your imagery a bit too cryptic, but this one's spot on. I particularly like the second stanza. Do you definitely mean inferred? (I was just wondering if it mght be an auto correct for infra red which would also...
Read full commentPosted in vicarious trauma
'I added some humour to avoid
Posted on Mon, 12 Nov 2018
'I added some humour to avoid sounding unhinged' hahahahahaha - not much makes me laugh at 7am. This is a brilliant and very very funny piece. I do hope your nom de plume and membership of this site is absolutely watertight Jane ...
Read full commentPosted in Autopsy of a Boss
I really like the way in
Posted on Mon, 12 Nov 2018
I really like the way in which you've gone back and forth in time - it's done very smoothly, also your female is convincing except possibly the tin of beer in the middle of the day (I'm not even sure why tbh, it just sounds a bit male? (I know...
Read full commentPosted in Sass (Part 2)
Ah - the sister in law? I can
Posted on Sat, 10 Nov 2018
Ah - the sister in law? I can see what you mean now!
Read full commentPosted in Gift: A Son's Story (Push)
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