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Bithika, I'm one of the co
Posted on Sat, 16 Jun 2018
Bithika, I'm one of the co-directors of ABCTales. I am so very sorry to hear such sad news. John was an absolute legend on our website - the depth and breadth of his writing was amazing and he has many admirers all of whom will be so sad to hear...
Read full commentPosted in Stomach Cancer
Wow - you've got a lot going
Posted on Sat, 21 Jul 2018
Wow - you've got a lot going on in this short piece! Some well crafted characters (though you've killed most of them by the end) and a good sense of time and place. What is a colonial gait?
Read full commentPosted in Holt: The Andalan Affair Chapter one (wip)
I'm enjoying it all too - I
Posted on Thu, 19 Jul 2018
I'm enjoying it all too - I love Mad Jim, as well as the account of the note being passed around
Are those the actual initials of real people? If so, I'd change them if I were you - and perhaps full (fake) names might be easier for the...
Read full commentPosted in I'm Not Disappointed, I'm Just Angry Chapter 4
Still really enjoying this.
Posted on Wed, 18 Jul 2018
Still really enjoying this. If you're looking for really picky suggestions for the next draft - here:
'The first thing I learn from my first proper lesson (apart from the fact that Year 9 are shit at being creative) and hastily forget is...
Read full commentPosted in I'm Not Disappointed, I'm Just Angry Chapter 3
Well written and very very
Posted on Mon, 16 Jul 2018
Well written and very very funny. You have one more before you reach your posting limit today - hope to see it soon!
ps: have you thought of switching the title around?...
Read full commentPosted in I'm Not Disappointed, I'm Just Angry Chapter 1
a bit of editing needed at
Posted on Sun, 15 Jul 2018
a bit of editing needed at the start - I think you've copied and pasted a passage twice
Read full commentPosted in Suggestion Box Problems
Nice twist at the end!
Posted on Thu, 12 Jul 2018
Nice twist at the end!
Read full commentPosted in The End of Marianne Brownleaf’s Teaching Career
This would make a great
Posted on Wed, 04 Jul 2018
This would make a great little animation pepsoid
Read full commentPosted in Pah
A poignant and well written
Posted on Tue, 03 Jul 2018
A poignant and well written reflection - thank you
Read full commentPosted in Remnants
I love the way this veers off
Posted on Thu, 28 Jun 2018
I love the way this veers off into the surreal!
Read full commentPosted in The End of the Evening
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