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Katy, A Ghost Story (IP)
Wrote this one ages ago, and thought I'd have a go at the IP with it Picture Credit: https://tinyurl.com/y2c95x4p
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Notifications Test
test for John, please ignore
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Bee's Journey
This is for the many many people who've been following Bee's Journey, all the way through her diagnosis and her treatment. Bee has asked me to put an...
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Lucky
It’s the best thing for him. You must insist. Intensive neuro rehab. Keep fighting for it. That’s what they all said – what they told me to do, so that’s what I did. Funding is difficult.
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Things that keep me awake at night
scraps - notes - things that keep me awake at night
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reading your comment, there's
Posted on Sat, 14 Dec 2019
reading your comment, there's a real sense of it in the second verse. Suicide is brutal to those it leaves behind
Read full commentPosted in The Worst
I love the full stops - they
Posted on Wed, 27 Nov 2019
I love the full stops - they are as you say very funny. But with commas when I do them I read it in my head and when I would take a breath I like to put a comma. Where I commented on your commas it was generally because without them it broke my...
Read full commentPosted in Seven Nights at the Flamingo Hotel (Friday morning. Glory. Love is in the air.)
I love the layers in this one
Posted on Fri, 01 Nov 2019
I love the layers in this one - some beautiful imagery and again, such a fascinating creature. This has been a wonderful week for nature poems on ABCTales hasn't it!
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coming over here, making all
Posted on Thu, 31 Oct 2019
coming over here, making all that noise...
They are lovely to watch aren...
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You're right - and while, of
Posted on Sat, 10 Aug 2019
You're right - and while, of course, once you've written something it stops being your personal property with your interpretation and becomes whatever the reader reads it as being, I think these readings add a really interesting dimension to the...
Read full commentPosted in In perpetuity
I really like all the detail
Posted on Thu, 07 Feb 2019
I really like all the detail in this and also think the two main characters are shaping up nicely
A couple of suggestions:
The dialogue as they walk around the town - it's a bit block of text followed by block of text and I'm not...
Read full commentPosted in Charlie and Eliza (Pt 1)
nicely written - I prefer
Posted on Wed, 30 Jan 2019
nicely written - I prefer this piece to the one you posted yesterday - perhaps because the writing is a bit more relaxed?
Read full commentPosted in The Tar Pit (1 of 9)
Di, from experience with one
Posted on Sat, 29 Sep 2018
Di, from experience with one of my sons, a diagnosis is really important - and it can take ages to arrange unless you get it done privately which can cost a fortune. A diagnosis of dyspraxia meant my son was given extra time in GCSEs (whatever...
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Hahahaha - thanks for the
Posted on Wed, 11 Jul 2018
Hahahaha - thanks for the translation London/parson - I know it's petty but Tony was very strict about that so I guess we should be too
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No sense in talking about the
Posted on Wed, 20 Jun 2018
No sense in talking about the cracks.
Blokes don’t need help,
just a good night’s sleep
a shower
a shit
a shave and
a shag
my father said
my mates said
my brother said
that makes me so...
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