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When my youngest son was
Posted on Thu, 03 Aug 2023
When my youngest son was little, during a heatwave, I dug a very big hole in the garden and filled it with the hose. he still says The Mud Pit was the best thing ever - I had to hose him down before I let him back into the house though!
Please pass the cherry above onto your daughter - she deserves it! It's not easy speaking up in a hospital, and it doesn't always bring results as I know from bitter experience but I'm pleased she was successful. I hope you don't mind me saying...
A very big well done from me for this series. Your writing has developed in leaps and bounds since your first pieces. I look forward to your next story!
‘I personally don’t like horrors, but it’s the only genre where you get to be free and kill the monstrous bastards from your nightmares in any way imaginable.’
You deserve a medal of some kind for overcoming all those hurdles Rhiannon! Glad you didn't meet any angry farmers along the way! (isn't it illegal to fence in public footways?)
I think Ewan was testing if he could post from his phone (you know, the posting glitch). I expect he's deleted them now which is why you can't access them anymore Di
When my youngest son was
Posted on Thu, 03 Aug 2023
When my youngest son was little, during a heatwave, I dug a very big hole in the garden and filled it with the hose. he still says The Mud Pit was the best thing ever - I had to hose him down before I let him back into the house though!
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Please pass the cherry above
Posted on Fri, 07 Apr 2023
Please pass the cherry above onto your daughter - she deserves it! It's not easy speaking up in a hospital, and it doesn't always bring results as I know from bitter experience but I'm pleased she was successful. I hope you don't mind me saying...
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Happy Valentine's day Gayle!
Posted on Tue, 14 Feb 2023
Happy Valentine's day Gayle!
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A very big well done from me
Posted on Fri, 16 Dec 2022
A very big well done from me for this series. Your writing has developed in leaps and bounds since your first pieces. I look forward to your next story!
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Some nice scene setting in
Posted on Fri, 21 Oct 2022
Some nice scene setting in this first part.
A couple of things:
twelve year’s old.
also, there's quite a lot of repeating of stuff, and it would read much better if you had a good edit. For example:
The first lesson...
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Loved this account and the
Posted on Tue, 18 Oct 2022
Loved this account and the pics. You have such beautiful walks nearby Rhiannon, thank you for sharing them here
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‘I personally don’t like
Posted on Sun, 11 Sep 2022
‘I personally don’t like horrors, but it’s the only genre where you get to be free and kill the monstrous bastards from your nightmares in any way imaginable.’
A killer line! and a well deserved cherry mono
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You deserve a medal of some
Posted on Tue, 05 Jul 2022
You deserve a medal of some kind for overcoming all those hurdles Rhiannon! Glad you didn't meet any angry farmers along the way! (isn't it illegal to fence in public footways?)
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I hope you're going to submit
Posted on Tue, 28 Jun 2022
I hope you're going to submit this somewhere eventually Jane? It's very very good
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I think Ewan was testing if
Posted on Fri, 29 Apr 2022
I think Ewan was testing if he could post from his phone (you know, the posting glitch). I expect he's deleted them now which is why you can't access them anymore Di
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