Yutka

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I have 267 stories published in 2 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 217495 times and 71 of my stories have been cherry picked.
7 of my 197 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 7 votes

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Gold cherry

In the moonlight

When I gazed at the stars seeking answers in their radiance moonlight poured out over your face your sad eyes your trembling lips Compassion springs...
Cherry

Timeless

Listen to the wind when it chases through cities and open land with unheard messages wander unhindered, let your hair flutter like the migrating...
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Cherry

Descend

A t first , I was only half, the other half as in a mirror’s reflection , which always remains inside a groping, a secret, Yes, once I was half...
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Cherry

Moths

This is the night the moths wake up and flutter stunned around the porch light trembling with silence only there is no silence, only a grasping of...
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Gold cherry

Flesh in the juices of autumn

Forgive the apples for sweetness when you wait for fire but I come as the wind. We both take to forbidden fruit, quarter our kisses, we share the...

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7 of my comments have received 7 Great Feedback votes

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thank you for this truly

Posted on Wed, 30 Sep 2020

thank you for this truly outstanding poem, with its many different piuctures to illuminate thought, I very  much enjoyed it

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Posted in Deus Ex Machina

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Absolutrly loved your poem,

Posted on Fri, 14 Aug 2020

Absolutrly loved your poem, intriguing powerful language, that leads to many layers of a mysterious night hunter

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Posted in The Departure of Nightjars

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a ray of hope for our

Posted on Tue, 21 Jul 2020

a ray of hope for our deprived earth, dandelions, lions in the plantlife, full of vigour, perseverance and with "lion's teeth", therefore the name, a reference to the tooth-like serrations on their leaves...they will still be there after we are...

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Posted in remembering dandelions (again)

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The story becomes touchingly

Posted on Thu, 04 Apr 2019

The story becomes touchingly alive in your poem. I lived with you, her, through the various stages and felt deep emotion reading about pain, sorrow and lastly forgiveness and coming to terms with life.

love to you from Yutka

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Posted in The mask melting at 98

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As I love Paris I enjoyed every bit of your brilliantly told sto

Posted on Wed, 20 Feb 2019

As I love Paris I enjoyed every bit of your brilliantly told story, you brought Paris alive in detailed and vivid descriptions and enticed with the emotional dimensions of a relationship. I especially loved the  ending which pointed towards life’...

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Posted in La Femme d'argent

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Thank you, you just got what

Posted on Mon, 12 Nov 2018

Thank you, you just got what I meant....not many will do...I just bought vol 2 of her letters published this year, 1025 pages...and read them all.

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Posted in Weeping Willow

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It is an art

Posted on Sat, 08 Aug 2015

It is an art to make rubbish look exquisite and beautiful! You certainly have mastered it.

yutka :)

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Posted in Dummy (Poetry monthly)