In a world spun tight with worries, where shadows hint "impossible," we search for ways to slip through the cracks, to dance around the edges of fate...
The wild impalas leap ten foot in the air and cover ten yards in one jump, their graceful shadows tell the sun of an unchained spirit Yet in the zoo...
There is an oh so silent process, nobody knows when human soul grows out of the dust in space, when spirit comes to life... A mother knows when belly...
They are giving Corinne a new drip, I have to go, they don’t want me to watch. My child! Each time she gets poked, I’m sent away, a rabbit caught in...
Listen, can you hear it? A symphony formed, each note a soft breath from the shadows of lost lives, the myriad of worlds that have come, then slipped...
Losing friends in our times is a well known thing now. (I think I never lost as many as in the years from 2020 onwards...) As you say in your poem, the loss of God does not help, for there are eternal values, such as forgiveness and love and also...
"assured they are always first in line", this is a great discription of crows, the kind of birds I am fascinated with (wrote once a poem about crows...) we have a huge walnut tree opposite with many, many of them, I love it when they leave for...
I very much enjoyed reading this mysterious tale with an ambiguous outcome that is as startling as it is intriguing! Could not stop reading after part 1 and rushed for part 2; which is a sign for immersion into the story and totally forgetting...
You not only are a brilliant poet but an artist too. Are you a painter? Reading your minimalist poem I immediately see a canvas, a beautiful sea landscape With the rising moon, last seagulls and a far pink coast touched by a sinking sun........
I love this well written poem and the great image of a single bee (An insect which I adore!) as one writer within a "swarm" of writers appreciating each others creations. Will the honey be flowing?
Thanks Jenny! Are you familiar with EMOTO, a man who thoroughly tested water and researched prompted water crystals' ability to change with emotions ....fascinating!
I was walking with you through long years of Memory Lane where magic converts all those rays of light and shadows into a beautiful tapestry loved and appreciated throughout the years. What would we do without those memories!
It's called "poetic liberty".
Posted on Thu, 28 Nov 2024
It's called "poetic liberty".....thanks for your comment...
Yutka
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I could not stop reading this
Posted on Wed, 30 Oct 2024
I could not stop reading this thrilling story! Well deserved golden Cherry!
Yutka
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Losing friends in our times
Posted on Tue, 10 Sep 2024
Losing friends in our times is a well known thing now. (I think I never lost as many as in the years from 2020 onwards...) As you say in your poem, the loss of God does not help, for there are eternal values, such as forgiveness and love and also...
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"assured they are always
Posted on Thu, 05 Sep 2024
"assured they are always first in line", this is a great discription of crows, the kind of birds I am fascinated with (wrote once a poem about crows...) we have a huge walnut tree opposite with many, many of them, I love it when they leave for...
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What a lovely comment! Thank
Posted on Fri, 23 Aug 2024
What a lovely comment! Thank you very much. This is a true story, Peter amazes us all. You see, patience is needed, it is never too late...
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I very much enjoyed reading
Posted on Sun, 14 Aug 2022
I very much enjoyed reading this mysterious tale with an ambiguous outcome that is as startling as it is intriguing! Could not stop reading after part 1 and rushed for part 2; which is a sign for immersion into the story and totally forgetting...
Read full commentPosted in Charmed (Part Two of Two)
You not only are a brilliant
Posted on Tue, 28 Nov 2023
You not only are a brilliant poet but an artist too. Are you a painter? Reading your minimalist poem I immediately see a canvas, a beautiful sea landscape With the rising moon, last seagulls and a far pink coast touched by a sinking sun........
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I love this well written poem
Posted on Sun, 04 Aug 2024
I love this well written poem and the great image of a single bee (An insect which I adore!) as one writer within a "swarm" of writers appreciating each others creations. Will the honey be flowing?
Hope you are well, my friend,I can cal...
Read full commentPosted in Bee Muse
Thanks Jenny! Are you
Posted on Wed, 31 Jul 2024
Thanks Jenny! Are you familiar with EMOTO, a man who thoroughly tested water and researched prompted water crystals' ability to change with emotions ....fascinating!
Yutka
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I was walking with you
Posted on Tue, 14 Feb 2023
I was walking with you through long years of Memory Lane where magic converts all those rays of light and shadows into a beautiful tapestry loved and appreciated throughout the years. What would we do without those memories!
from Yutka
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