Revival Your birthday in May, such happy month, breeding apple blossoms out of the dried brown branches, mixing sleep and awakening, stirring tangled...
When I searched for you If I used the forbidden eye to bring back the old wooden bridge over the slow streaming brook, the gnarled carvings of names...
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I very much enjoyed reading
Posted on Sun, 14 Aug 2022
I very much enjoyed reading this mysterious tale with an ambiguous outcome that is as startling as it is intriguing! Could not stop reading after part 1 and rushed for part 2; which is a sign for immersion into the story and totally forgetting...
You not only are a brilliant poet but an artist too. Are you a painter? Reading your minimalist poem I immediately see a canvas, a beautiful sea landscape With the rising moon, last seagulls and a far pink coast touched by a sinking sun........
I love this well written poem and the great image of a single bee (An insect which I adore!) as one writer within a "swarm" of writers appreciating each others creations. Will the honey be flowing?
Thanks Jenny! Are you familiar with EMOTO, a man who thoroughly tested water and researched prompted water crystals' ability to change with emotions ....fascinating!
I was walking with you through long years of Memory Lane where magic converts all those rays of light and shadows into a beautiful tapestry loved and appreciated throughout the years. What would we do without those memories!
a ray of hope for our deprived earth, dandelions, lions in the plantlife, full of vigour, perseverance and with "lion's teeth", therefore the name, a reference to the tooth-like serrations on their leaves...they will still be there after we are...
The story becomes touchingly alive in your poem. I lived with you, her, through the various stages and felt deep emotion reading about pain, sorrow and lastly forgiveness and coming to terms with life.
As I love Paris I enjoyed every bit of your brilliantly told sto
Posted on Wed, 20 Feb 2019
As I love Paris I enjoyed every bit of your brilliantly told story, you brought Paris alive in detailed and vivid descriptions and enticed with the emotional dimensions of a relationship. I especially loved the ending which pointed towards life’...
I very much enjoyed reading
Posted on Sun, 14 Aug 2022
I very much enjoyed reading this mysterious tale with an ambiguous outcome that is as startling as it is intriguing! Could not stop reading after part 1 and rushed for part 2; which is a sign for immersion into the story and totally forgetting...
Read full commentPosted in Charmed (Part Two of Two)
You not only are a brilliant
Posted on Tue, 28 Nov 2023
You not only are a brilliant poet but an artist too. Are you a painter? Reading your minimalist poem I immediately see a canvas, a beautiful sea landscape With the rising moon, last seagulls and a far pink coast touched by a sinking sun........
Read full commentPosted in at dusk today
I love this well written poem
Posted on Sun, 04 Aug 2024
I love this well written poem and the great image of a single bee (An insect which I adore!) as one writer within a "swarm" of writers appreciating each others creations. Will the honey be flowing?
Hope you are well, my friend,I can cal...
Read full commentPosted in Bee Muse
Thanks Jenny! Are you
Posted on Wed, 31 Jul 2024
Thanks Jenny! Are you familiar with EMOTO, a man who thoroughly tested water and researched prompted water crystals' ability to change with emotions ....fascinating!
Yutka
Read full commentPosted in The power of water
I was walking with you
Posted on Tue, 14 Feb 2023
I was walking with you through long years of Memory Lane where magic converts all those rays of light and shadows into a beautiful tapestry loved and appreciated throughout the years. What would we do without those memories!
from Yutka
Read full commentPosted in For The Love Of Village Life
Stuck? Living in today is the
Posted on Sun, 27 Jan 2013
Stuck? Living in today is the only thing beneficial to us....still like your poem, it speaks some truths...
Read full commentPosted in Changes
thank you for this truly
Posted on Wed, 30 Sep 2020
thank you for this truly outstanding poem, with its many different piuctures to illuminate thought, I very much enjoyed it
Read full commentPosted in Deus Ex Machina
a ray of hope for our
Posted on Tue, 21 Jul 2020
a ray of hope for our deprived earth, dandelions, lions in the plantlife, full of vigour, perseverance and with "lion's teeth", therefore the name, a reference to the tooth-like serrations on their leaves...they will still be there after we are...
Read full commentPosted in remembering dandelions (again)
The story becomes touchingly
Posted on Thu, 04 Apr 2019
The story becomes touchingly alive in your poem. I lived with you, her, through the various stages and felt deep emotion reading about pain, sorrow and lastly forgiveness and coming to terms with life.
love to you from Yutka
Read full commentPosted in The mask melting at 98
As I love Paris I enjoyed every bit of your brilliantly told sto
Posted on Wed, 20 Feb 2019
As I love Paris I enjoyed every bit of your brilliantly told story, you brought Paris alive in detailed and vivid descriptions and enticed with the emotional dimensions of a relationship. I especially loved the ending which pointed towards life’...
Read full commentPosted in La Femme d'argent
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