w.w.j.abercrombie

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I have 13 stories published in one collection on the site.
My stories have been read 7510 times and 15 of my stories have been cherry picked.
7 of my 50 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 7 votes

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Nick Austin

 

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Cherry

Ghigau 8

Much as he didn’t want to, Lenny had to go to work. He wanted to talk to Jake face to face. Lydia was upstairs with her grandmother Julia, who had ‘...
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Gold cherry

Ghigau 7 part 2

Five minutes later Sam was in DI Conway’s small, but well organised, office, waiting for him to finish a call. On the wall were the hallmarks of a...
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Cherry

Ghigau 7 part 1

Detective Sergeant Samantha ‘Sam’ Tate woke with a headache. Thumping temples, ringing ears, dry mouth. The ceiling was unfamiliar, until she...
Cherry

Ghjigau 6 part 2

Hermione put her phone down and thought for a minute. She was sipping a large gin and tonic whilst reclining on a chaise lounge, in the all-white...
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Cherry

Ghigau 6 part 1

Lenny took an Uber to Lydia’s school. The car’s air conditioning had stopped working and he opened his window in an effort to cool down. The driver...

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7 of my comments have received 7 Great Feedback votes

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Insights

Posted on Fri, 04 Jul 2025

Others have pointed out a few inconsistencies - nothing that a quick edit wouldn't fix I'm sure - and I take their points, but the tone and the characterization is so good. I think the author is female, which makes the male lead even more...

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Posted in The Vale - Part 1 (c)

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Good ending

Posted on Sat, 05 Jul 2025

I love a twist, nice story.

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Posted in The lisping god of small things

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Nicely paced

Posted on Fri, 04 Jul 2025

I could see them in my minds eye - always the indicator of a good story for me. Nice one.

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Posted in Born on the 4th of July

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Damn those rogue apostrophes

Posted on Fri, 27 Jun 2025

Thank you very much for the cherries and damn those rogue apostrophes!

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Posted in Ghigau 5

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Some really great lines in this

Posted on Fri, 27 Jun 2025

Some great lines in this - I particularly liked 'A flicker of discomfort crossed her face as if my crumbling resolve unsettled her.'

 

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Posted in Snake Eyes May Cry

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Wow, thank you very much -

Posted on Thu, 26 Jun 2025

Wow, thank you very much - that means a lot.

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Posted in Ghigau 4

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All too familiar

Posted on Thu, 26 Apr 2018

Devastatingly observant. Enjoyed it greatly, although very glad not to be living it. 

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Posted in Something Hard Inside Him (Part 2)