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I have 13 stories published in
one collection on the site.
My stories have been read 7510 times
and 15 of my stories have been cherry picked.
7 of my 50 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 7 votes
Nick Austin
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My stories
Ghigau 8
Much as he didn’t want to, Lenny had to go to work. He wanted to talk to Jake face to face. Lydia was upstairs with her grandmother Julia, who had ‘...
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Ghigau 7 part 2
Five minutes later Sam was in DI Conway’s small, but well organised, office, waiting for him to finish a call. On the wall were the hallmarks of a...
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Ghigau 7 part 1
Detective Sergeant Samantha ‘Sam’ Tate woke with a headache. Thumping temples, ringing ears, dry mouth. The ceiling was unfamiliar, until she...
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Ghjigau 6 part 2
Hermione put her phone down and thought for a minute. She was sipping a large gin and tonic whilst reclining on a chaise lounge, in the all-white...
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Ghigau 6 part 1
Lenny took an Uber to Lydia’s school. The car’s air conditioning had stopped working and he opened his window in an effort to cool down. The driver...
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Insights
Posted on Fri, 04 Jul 2025
Others have pointed out a few inconsistencies - nothing that a quick edit wouldn't fix I'm sure - and I take their points, but the tone and the characterization is so good. I think the author is female, which makes the male lead even more...
Read full commentPosted in The Vale - Part 1 (c)
Good ending
Posted on Sat, 05 Jul 2025
I love a twist, nice story.
Read full commentPosted in The lisping god of small things
Nicely paced
Posted on Fri, 04 Jul 2025
I could see them in my minds eye - always the indicator of a good story for me. Nice one.
Read full commentPosted in Born on the 4th of July
Damn those rogue apostrophes
Posted on Fri, 27 Jun 2025
Thank you very much for the cherries and damn those rogue apostrophes!
Read full commentPosted in Ghigau 5
Some really great lines in this
Posted on Fri, 27 Jun 2025
Some great lines in this - I particularly liked 'A flicker of discomfort crossed her face as if my crumbling resolve unsettled her.'
Read full commentPosted in Snake Eyes May Cry
Wow, thank you very much -
Posted on Thu, 26 Jun 2025
Wow, thank you very much - that means a lot.
Read full commentPosted in Ghigau 4
All too familiar
Posted on Thu, 26 Apr 2018
Devastatingly observant. Enjoyed it greatly, although very glad not to be living it.
Read full commentPosted in Something Hard Inside Him (Part 2)