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Exa Exa decided to walk to the Savoy hotel. After a long battle, she had managed to persuade her sister to wear jeans and a tee shirt instead of her...
26. Monday 17th Sam Tate pulled up outside the Booth residence at 9.25am. Her appointment was for 10am. She should have made this visit days ago but...
42 of my comments have received 53 Great Feedback votes
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Brilliant & Hilarious! Now
Posted on Tue, 31 Mar 2026
Brilliant & hilarious! Now we know Mornington Heights is a 1970s TV show on an obscure channel somewhere in the mid-west. Perfect opportunity for someone to come up with Chapter 9.
I see you also identified Polanski as the hidden enemy Luigi (I promise I didn't read yours before writing mine, so I wouldn't be subconsciously influenced) you tied up every loose end! No mean feat. Nice work
This is so good, but I am horrified to learn that the afterlife is every bit as badly organised and populated with obnoxious people who cheat, as this one.
Brilliant & Hilarious! Now
Posted on Tue, 31 Mar 2026
Brilliant & hilarious! Now we know Mornington Heights is a 1970s TV show on an obscure channel somewhere in the mid-west. Perfect opportunity for someone to come up with Chapter 9.
Read full commentPosted in Penny's Pass The Story - Part 8.
I see you also identified
Posted on Sat, 11 Apr 2026
I see you also identified Polanski as the hidden enemy Luigi (I promise I didn't read yours before writing mine, so I wouldn't be subconsciously influenced) you tied up every loose end! No mean feat. Nice work
Read full commentPosted in Penny Pass the Story - Part 10
There isn't a straight one
Posted on Sun, 12 Apr 2026
There isn't a straight one among them Rhiannonw
Read full commentPosted in Penny's Pass The Story - Part 10.
Thanks Luigi - I enjoyed
Posted on Sun, 12 Apr 2026
Thanks Luigi - I enjoyed yours also - you tied up a mountain of loose ends!
Read full commentPosted in Penny's Pass The Story - Part 10.
Good Plan
Posted on Tue, 31 Mar 2026
That sounds a good plan, looking forward to the penultimate chapter.
Read full commentPosted in Penny's Pass The Story - Part 8.
This is so good, but I am
Posted on Fri, 03 Apr 2026
This is so good, but I am horrified to learn that the afterlife is every bit as badly organised and populated with obnoxious people who cheat, as this one.
Read full commentPosted in Things that he took to the Afterlife
... in their Winnebego en
Posted on Tue, 31 Mar 2026
... in their Winnebego en route to their two week holiday in Key West - you should do the next chapter!
Read full commentPosted in Penny's Pass The Story - Part 8.
Ha! I know what you mean. I
Posted on Tue, 31 Mar 2026
Ha! I know what you mean. I don't envy the writer of chapter ten. Perhaps it's all been a dream like that episode of Dallas?
Read full commentPosted in Penny's Pass The Story - Part 8.
Thanks Penny. Such a mix of
Posted on Tue, 31 Mar 2026
Thanks Penny. Such a mix of styles in the story so far. I am looking forward to the last chapter.
Read full commentPosted in Penny's Pass The Story - Part 8.
Thanks Makis, I'm fascinated
Posted on Tue, 31 Mar 2026
Thanks Makis, I'm fascinated to see where it eventually leads.
Read full commentPosted in Penny's Pass The Story - Part 8.
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