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2717 of my comments have received 2811 Great Feedback votes

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What a splendidly surreal

Posted on Thu, 27 Oct 2016

What a splendidly surreal story!

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Posted in Meeting a wolf

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Hits all five senses at once

Posted on Wed, 31 Aug 2016

Hits all five senses at once - this is a real prize of a poem, and our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day!

Please share/retweet if you like it

 

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Posted in The Grief of Gaziantep.

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I especially like the way you

Posted on Fri, 12 Aug 2016

I especially like the way you insert the really big stuff (the father's voyeurism and abuse) into the more inconsquential storyline. I'm not sure if you're looking for feedback, but if you are I'd suggest perhaps losing or shortening some of the...

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Posted in Des Moines, 1979

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I'm so sorry you still aren't

Posted on Sun, 07 Aug 2016

I'm so sorry you still aren't getting email notifications Alphadog. Lluis the techie is working on it. Is there any other possible reason why they mightn't work for you? Could you check the email address on your account is still current? Have you...

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Posted in The Cobbe House v a hidden revelation and a decision

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This is very well written - I

Posted on Thu, 04 Aug 2016

This is very well written - I'm enjoying it!

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Posted in Ned (2)

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I had to read back at one

Posted on Thu, 21 Jul 2016

I had to read back at one point to work out how many people there were and who was who, but apart from that this is great. The dialogue feels very authentic - really nice to see some prose from you! 

One typo - discrete should be discreet

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Posted in Dogs

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looking forward to finding

Posted on Tue, 12 Jul 2016

looking forward to finding out more - Welcome to ABCTales!

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Posted in Memoirs of a Wanna Be: Intro and Chapter 1

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A very original idea and

Posted on Thu, 07 Jul 2016

A very original idea and elevated by the wealth of period detail. Brilliant!

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Posted in Flowers (Part Two of Two) (IP)

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Hi Deerman, welcome to

Posted on Mon, 04 Jul 2016

Hi Deerman, welcome to ABCTales from me too! Just re-title this as part one, and then post the remaining text as part two. Hope that helps!

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Posted in The Spectator, chapters 1-3

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Very nicely done. Fantasy is

Posted on Mon, 27 Jun 2016

Very nicely done. Fantasy is not my thing but you kept my attention. A good balance of description and action.

A couple of suggestions for you:

Feeling the warmth of his hands she smiled and opened her eyes and looked into his. Her...

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