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2809 of my comments have received 2916 Great Feedback votes

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This one packs a punch London

Posted on Wed, 09 May 2018

This one packs a punch London - some great imagery, it really emphasises the futility of artificial borders. Well done

One thing - are you sure it's calloused to? It's very clear what you're saying, it just sounds a bit odd to me (might...

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Love this little moment in

Posted on Thu, 03 May 2018

Love this little moment in time. It reminds me of that strange glow colour photos used to have in the sixites and seventies. 

One small suggestion - I think it's 'puts paid to'  instead of 'pay'

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echoing airyfairy here, both

Posted on Thu, 26 Apr 2018

echoing airyfairy here, both parts such a good read, perfectly paced with believable characters and dialogue. Quite disappointed to hear you don't have plans to continue this - is there anything we can do to twist your arm? (I want to know what...

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I am hooked! Onto the next

Posted on Thu, 26 Apr 2018

I am hooked! Onto the next part..

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Posted in Something Hard Inside Him (Part 1)

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Very pleased to see this has

Posted on Sat, 14 Apr 2018

Very pleased to see this has been made our daily pick - extremely well deserved for its original approach - well done!

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Posted in Under the hood

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Some brilliant lines in this

Posted on Sun, 01 Apr 2018

Some brilliant lines in this Kilb

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this reads really well Di - I

Posted on Fri, 09 Mar 2018

this reads really well Di - I especially love this line:

Up the hill

seagulls pearl grey wheel wide winged carving time

into slivers of wonder at their grace

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I think you must have got cut

Posted on Tue, 06 Mar 2018

I think you must have got cut off by our word limit TKMaxx. If there's more, perhaps you could split this into two equal shorter parts. I hope you do because people prefer to read shorter pieces on a screen and this is really worth reading. It's...

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I've read all three parts of

Posted on Fri, 02 Mar 2018

I've read all three parts of this and the intricate detail and local colour really shine through. The dialogue is lively and the characters are beginning to emerge as believable people.

If you're looking for suggestions:

- It really...

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I hope your snow will

Posted on Fri, 02 Mar 2018

I hope your snow will disappear soon Camilla. I am also stuck here and it's driving me bananas, but I'm painting the insides of cupboards, and windows which is quite soothing and stops me from thinking about the fact that the heating oil is...

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