insertponceyfrenchnamehere

Primary tabs

TypeTitleAuthorRepliesLast updated
StoryMapleville Chapter 1 melissa_girsch16 years 10 months ago
StorySensual World skinner_jennifer106 years 10 months ago
Blog entryStory and Poem of the Week and Inspiration Point insertponceyfre...26 years 10 months ago
Blog entryCalling All Poets! insertponceyfre...06 years 10 months ago
StoryCocooning, not spooning Rachel Down66 years 10 months ago
StoryYanker and Me - A Dog's Tale hudsonmoon36 years 10 months ago
StoryA Suspicious Demise hudsonmoon56 years 10 months ago
StoryEchoes Of Town skinner_jennifer126 years 10 months ago
StoryPagliaccio luigi_pagano66 years 10 months ago
StoryElevation Worship B.C.D.O. Tauren Wells Rend Collective Hilsong Y & F Pat Barrett LZ7 Tye Tribbett I Am They Sinach We Are Messengers Andy Mineo Part Six. Maxine Jasmin-Green26 years 10 months ago
StoryPoking a Snake Amavisti56 years 10 months ago
Forum topicLoss of comments. luigi_pagano206 years 10 months ago
StoryAngel 67 (night calls) celticman106 years 10 months ago
StorySo To Drift skinner_jennifer176 years 10 months ago
StoryElevation Worship B.C.D.O. Tauren Wells Rend Collective Hilsong Y & F Pat Barrett Tye Tribbett I Am They Sinach We Are Messengers Andy Mineo Part Five. Maxine Jasmin-Green26 years 10 months ago
StorySummer's Song Penny4athought46 years 10 months ago
StorySmoke Free - Part III randy-johnson16 years 10 months ago
Blog entryStory and Poem of the Week and Inspiration Point insertponceyfre...06 years 10 months ago
StoryReminiscing part 2 Tony12326 years 10 months ago
StoryEt tu, soror? pearsonj12346 years 10 months ago
StoryAngel 63 (going home) celticman66 years 10 months ago
StoryChange of Scene Rhiannonw86 years 10 months ago
StoryHappy Anniversary jeand66 years 10 months ago
StoryThe aunt Margaret problem The Other Terre...36 years 10 months ago
Story5 Day Riptide (Working Title) Day 1 Hades50236 years 10 months ago

Pages

2666 of my comments have received 2751 Great Feedback votes

1 Vote

Hello - this was very

Posted on Tue, 18 Mar 2014

Hello - this was very readable, it has a nice easy flow to it. It is quite slow moving though, and i think it could be improved with a good edit - maybe cut it down by a third or so? Welcome to ABC!

Read full comment

Posted in All my creation - chapter 1

1 Vote

This is very well done. I

Posted on Mon, 17 Mar 2014

This is very well done. I like the use of repetition, and I think the ending is a good one. It would definitely be worth going through this again with your spellcheck: your English is fantastic, but there are some adjustments needed

Read full comment

Posted in Lucky Number Seven

1 Vote

Albert, why don't you put a

Posted on Fri, 14 Mar 2014

Albert, why don't you put a clickable link to your novel on here - and also in the forum? I'm sure you'll get more of an audience that way. good luck!

Read full comment

Posted in ONE GOOD TURN

1 Vote

"As far as the adjective use,

Posted on Sat, 04 Jan 2014

"As far as the adjective use, all of my writing tends to be heavy on the imagery, and the idea of taking it out makes me feel like the story/writing won't be 'mine' anymore, if that makes sense. Do you think the "prose" detracts from the story to...

Read full comment

Posted in August Shadow (working title): Prologue

1 Vote

Welcome to ABC Venegas. I

Posted on Sun, 15 Dec 2013

Welcome to ABC Venegas. I enjoyed reading this - you have an easy writing style. I hope you'll post more soon. As you mention specific people and places quite often, you might want to change their names, given the nature of your writing.

Read full comment

Posted in Our Meeting

1 Vote

Hello Enemy - welcome to ABC.

Posted on Fri, 06 Dec 2013

Hello Enemy - welcome to ABC. I'm not a fantasy fan, so you should take it as a compliment when I say I found this very readable. You write with an easy fluency, although it would be a good idea to have another edit to remove some typos. I will...

Read full comment

Posted in Last Words...

1 Vote

..... a very nicely paced,

Posted on Wed, 16 Oct 2013

..... a nicely paced, well-rounded peice. I enjoyed it very much.

One tiny suggestion: for authenticity, I think they would have used the word "wireless" instead of radio then. 

Read full comment

Posted in The Appointment

1 Vote

Hi Maddi - you said all

Posted on Sun, 13 Jan 2013

Hi Maddi - you said all comments welcome so .... first "Fred woke with a finish" ... not quite sure finish is the right word here More generally .... I enjoyed reading this, but I think it needs some rearranging. It's quite odd that you don't...Read full comment

Posted in Just Starting: Part 1

1 Vote

there's something different

Posted on Wed, 02 Nov 2011

there's something different about the style of this, compared to your usual - what do you think fatboy? It's very good, and I really like it - it just seems unlike you (not in a bad way)Read full comment

Posted in I Can't Help Wishing Christopher

1 Vote

I like this very much

Posted on Thu, 09 Sep 2010

I like this very muchRead full comment

Posted in The approach of winter

Pages