Rachel Down

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My stories have been read 1853 times 2 of my 28 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 2 votes

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Rachel Down

I am a person who writes a bit and it's all poetry on this site.

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Rejection

I lay myself beside you I lay myself bare Nothing I lay my heart open Spirit broken Nothing I weep You sleep Nothing One day you will turn to me...

"Aquarius - My brother"

All the bother I forgive All the love I will always give The tears we've spilt The pain we've shared You are my crutch And I am yours. We've saved...

Cocooning, not spooning

Cocooning,not spooning Impenetrable dark shell, set to repel? My soft white down so easily speared [As my soft heart on my sleeve worn. Pierced not...

Hold On

"HOLD ON" The chair in the kitchen You left me there "Just hold on and listen" I couldn't hear the words. I knew I didn't want to go skiing!! You...

Unravelling

There but for the grace of God go I And to think I nearly had a drink before I came down the Hill. Feel strangely wired but stone cold sober Like...

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2 of my comments have received 2 Great Feedback votes

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craghopping!

Posted on Tue, 10 Jan 2017

I love this! The precarious described so beautifully is how it reads to me.

RD

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Posted in Stepping Stones

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Transported back to the

Posted on Sat, 02 May 2015

Transported back to the hedgerows of my childhood and my now! Wondeful & so evocative

RD

 

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Posted in Measles