Hades502

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I have 82 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 22194 times and 21 of my stories have been cherry picked.
26 of my 249 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 26 votes

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My stories

Comes Around (3)

Thirteen months later: “Here’s your new cell, shitbird,” said the guard. Turning to the current occupant, he said, “You know the drill, Grizzly.” The...

Comes Around (2)

Thirteen hours later: Aaron was lying on his bed, still wearing the clothes of the previous evening. He was lingering in that vague area between...

Comes Around (1)

Comes Around April 13th “Good that you wore the sweats,” said Jack. “Yeah, I don’t feel comfortable with this at all.” “Relax, it will be fine.”...

Disenchantment 25

***** Perry had lived for weeks in the meadow before she had moved to the throne room, or she thought it was weeks. Time had a way of not making much...

Disenchantment 24

***** Horblende watched from his car as Mark and the female who arrived last exited the house and walked back to her vehicle. He had gotten her...

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26 of my comments have received 26 Great Feedback votes

1 Vote

Great poem

Posted on Wed, 14 Apr 2021

Hey man, my apologies for not having looked at much of your stuff here recently. I've been busy for a couple months and will probably be busy for a couple more. No recent writing on my part. I just popped on here to do a little reading today....

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Posted in Setting Sons

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Interesting

Posted on Thu, 25 Feb 2021

Wow, a rare piece of Jenny prose. I'm assuming autobiographical, but you never really know. I have a habit of reflecting and romaticizing times and people gone by as well. I liked your literary references too. Great writing.

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Posted in Timely Leisure Spent With You

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Good one

Posted on Wed, 24 Feb 2021

Hey Paul, good one, another poem, huh? I really liked this. Nice word usage in every single line. Those who have commented prior to me seem to have pointed that out as well. Very well written.

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Posted in Forgotten Souls

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Good Read

Posted on Tue, 09 Feb 2021

Another good one, Jenny. I always like and seem to appreciate the sad ones, the loss of hope, futility. Good stuff.

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Posted in Silent Lament

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Another good one

Posted on Thu, 11 Feb 2021

This is really good Jenny. Great word choices throught. You have a great way of explaining things: "When stars sing their last song," and "veiled by dawning of day," really stuck out for me. Great job.

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Posted in We Are Stars

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Interesting

Posted on Sun, 14 Feb 2021

I liked it. Nice delve into the scientific aspects, enough to show you know what you are talking about, but not enough to bore the hell out of the reader. I also might be discussing multiple universes in my current novel, but not sure yet if I...

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Posted in Happy Valentines

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Interesting

Posted on Fri, 05 Feb 2021

Interesting read, nice and reflective. In your intro you mentioned that you were worried about being insensitive. I think others, especially in this day and age get offended too easily. I would encourage you to write what you are going to write,...

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Posted in The Theory of Everything (take 2)

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Good one

Posted on Sat, 06 Feb 2021

Hey Jenny, I really liked the personification in this one. I sometimes try to do animals, but as of yet, never a plant. I thought it was very clever to imagine what it is like for the tree.

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Posted in Big Belly Oak

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Great

Posted on Mon, 02 Jan 2006

I really liked this one. I daresay my favorite of yours that I have read thus far. I guess this was a time ago, but surely you can redo this one for cherries, or you could if I were dishing them out. It's my kind of story. 

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Posted in The World's End Motel

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Beautiful and serene

Posted on Sat, 30 Jan 2021

Beautiful and serene, Jenny. Another good one. Perhaps you didn't intend serenity, but I usually get that from your nature descriptions.

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Posted in Drifting On The Muse

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