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I have 67 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 16864 times and 19 of my stories have been cherry picked.
9 of my 186 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 9 votes

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Gawain Gnosta


My stories

Disenchantment 17

***** Hornblende was looking at the actual maps from the county, for the storm drain systems, as he could not find them online. Real paper maps. As...

Disenchantment 16

After getting off the phone with someone he had questioned in another case that seemed to actually be somehow related to a current case, Blake...

Disenchantment 15

Part II January Provocation Problem Planning Persuasion and Preparation As Mark drove along the Interstate 5 freeway in a southbound direction, he...

Disenchantment 14

***** Persephone awoke. She felt a little groggy, like waking up with the effects of drugs wearing off. She looked around, she seemed to be in a...

Disenchantment 13

***** Mark arrived back at his apartment complex in the town of Castaic, inconveniently located outside of Santa Clarita in what Mark liked to refer...


9 of my comments have received 9 Great Feedback votes

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Posted on Sun, 20 Sep 2020

Makes one think.


You do have a typo, as I am sure you are aware, with the word, "Lucky."  Just letting you know in case it has gotten by you. I know, I have many that I don't catch before I post. I usually don't fix them here,...

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Posted in Worlds Apart

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Posted in Peace In The Forest

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Another good one

Posted on Sat, 22 Aug 2020

Hey Jenny, I was wondering if you would be interested in allowing me to read some of your stuff online? I am considering starting a Youtube channel, to kind of promote my stuff a little, but to also examine some other writers and even some...

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Posted in Half-Hidden But Significant

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Great job. Some nice word choices in this one. :)

Posted on Mon, 17 Aug 2020


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Posted in Thinking Out Loud

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Posted on Thu, 06 Aug 2020

Outstanding, Jenny. This one is extraordinarily good. Well deserved cherries.

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Posted in From A Window

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Hello Penny

Posted on Sun, 02 Aug 2020

This could actually be prose if you threw in some punctuation, but it works as poetry too. I like the idea behind it.

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Posted in "Perception"

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Jenny, another great one.

Posted on Sat, 01 Aug 2020

Jenny, another great one. Good job.

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Posted in Time Was