Hades502

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I have 108 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 67825 times and 26 of my stories have been cherry picked.
83 of my 431 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 83 votes

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Disenchantment 31

***** “So the post office closed the day after you got fired?” “Yeah,” said Mark. “So, maybe you won’t get in any trouble?” “Afraid that’s not going...

Disenchantment 30

He turned back to the older woman. “Mrs. Higgins. She is a postmaster, and you should talk to her about your ideas for changing the post office. She...

Disenchantment 29

***** Truck drivers sure keep odd hours, Mark thought, as he heard their diesel engines roar throughout the night at different times. He had been...

Disenchantment 28

***** She was driving on the freeway from UCLA to Castaic. It was slow-going through the San Fernando Valley, but when she hit Santa Clarita, traffic...

Disenchantment 27

***** “You’re not going to worry about any of your missing persons’ cases anymore for the foreseeable future. If you were at roll call yesterday, or...

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83 of my comments have received 83 Great Feedback votes

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Another great one Jenny. I

Posted on Thu, 13 May 2021

Another great one Jenny. I have to keep going back through your slightly older poems to comment on your writing these days. Congrats on the cherries.

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Posted in Capturing Garden Memories

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Some good writing, as usual.

Posted on Tue, 06 Jul 2021

Some good writing, as usual. I really liked the feel of this one, could almost picture it all quite vividly. Congratulations on the cherries.

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Posted in Where The Streets Have No Blame

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Another good one

Posted on Wed, 07 Jul 2021

Hey Jenny, congrats on the golden cherries. Another good one. Well deserved.

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Posted in Daydreamer

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Good writing

Posted on Mon, 24 May 2021

Good writing, Jenny. Any good writing about childhood, reminds me of my own, even though it was a different time and place. Congrats on the cherries.

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Posted in When We Were Young

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Wow

Posted on Tue, 27 Apr 2021

Wow, another great one. I'm going back through lots of poems of yours, as it seems that is what you have mostly been doing lately. Some more really good writing here. Congratulations on the cherries.

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Posted in Footsteps on Mars

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Another good one

Posted on Thu, 01 Jul 2021

I should say another, another great one, better than good. I really enjoy reading your stuff, Jenny. My apologies that I usually only get to one of them every time I get on the site. Congratulations on the cherries.

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Posted in Timeless Wonder

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Really well done.

Posted on Wed, 12 May 2021

That was done really well, quite moving. You definitely have a way with words. I am going back and reading some of your older stuff. I haven't seen much new stuff from you recently. This is really good, Paul.

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Posted in The Last Elephant

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Nice poem

Posted on Tue, 01 Jun 2021

Yeah, Bladerunner is also one of my favorite films. And the Roy character is just so well-written and acted. I prefer the movie to Dick's book, actually. I love that last dialogue between Roy and Decker at the end, so powerful and poetic...

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Posted in Roy Batty (Tears in Rain)

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Cool

Posted on Sat, 26 Jun 2021

Wow, what an experience. I'm a bit traveled myself, but haven't made it to a volcano yet. Cool that you were able to see that. As far as the writing goes, outstanding. My favorite line: "Beneath land lurks and underworld," but you probably could...

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Posted in Timanfaya Volcanic National Park

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Yeah, great character actor,

Posted on Wed, 23 Jun 2021

Yeah, great character actor, Ned Beatty. He was in a bunch of older stuff. I hadn't seen him around in quite a bit. Cool tribute. It was probably rough, as he wasn't even considered a dramatic character actor, a minor comedic character actor. Yet...

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Posted in Ned Is Dead

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