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I have 108 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 66151 times and 26 of my stories have been cherry picked.
83 of my 431 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 83 votes

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Disenchantment 26

Part III February A Fall from Grace It was a gorgeous day. Mark felt alive, truly alive and glad to be. It was the first time in a long time that he...

Comes Around (4)

Thirteen years later Jack pulled up to the bus stop in a vehicle that looked much older than its years, a heavy layer of grease seemed permanently...

Comes Around (3)

Thirteen months later: “Here’s your new cell, shitbird,” said the guard. Turning to the current occupant, he said, “You know the drill, Grizzly.” The...

Comes Around (2)

Thirteen hours later: Aaron was lying on his bed, still wearing the clothes of the previous evening. He was lingering in that vague area between...

Comes Around (1)

Comes Around April 13th “Good that you wore the sweats,” said Jack. “Yeah, I don’t feel comfortable with this at all.” “Relax, it will be fine.”...

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83 of my comments have received 83 Great Feedback votes

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Great work again. I'll try to

Posted on Tue, 15 Jun 2021

Great work again. I'll try to dig back and delve into some of your prose, as it's my preference to read. However, this is beautifully worded. Congrats on your cherry tree getting cherries. 

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Posted in Cherry Tree

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Good one

Posted on Mon, 07 Jun 2021

Jenny, I am guessing this one is from your actual journal and you wrote it some time ago. I'm curious if that's true, or if that initial part about the diary is part of the poem itself. Yeah, I wonder weird stuff. Either way, it's very good....

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Posted in In The Stillness Of Late Years

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Interesting

Posted on Sun, 13 Jun 2021

Hey Jenny, another good nature poem, seems like your strength for sure.

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Posted in Honeysuckle On The Breeze

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Good one

Posted on Mon, 21 Jun 2021

Hey Paul, I liked that. You do have a way with words. Good work.

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Posted in Estival Solstice

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Great poem

Posted on Wed, 14 Apr 2021

Hey man, my apologies for not having looked at much of your stuff here recently. I've been busy for a couple months and will probably be busy for a couple more. No recent writing on my part. I just popped on here to do a little reading today....

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Posted in Setting Sons

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Interesting

Posted on Thu, 25 Feb 2021

Wow, a rare piece of Jenny prose. I'm assuming autobiographical, but you never really know. I have a habit of reflecting and romaticizing times and people gone by as well. I liked your literary references too. Great writing.

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Posted in Timely Leisure Spent With You

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Good one

Posted on Wed, 24 Feb 2021

Hey Paul, good one, another poem, huh? I really liked this. Nice word usage in every single line. Those who have commented prior to me seem to have pointed that out as well. Very well written.

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Posted in Forgotten Souls

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Good Read

Posted on Tue, 09 Feb 2021

Another good one, Jenny. I always like and seem to appreciate the sad ones, the loss of hope, futility. Good stuff.

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Posted in Silent Lament

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Another good one

Posted on Thu, 11 Feb 2021

This is really good Jenny. Great word choices throught. You have a great way of explaining things: "When stars sing their last song," and "veiled by dawning of day," really stuck out for me. Great job.

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Posted in We Are Stars

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Interesting

Posted on Sun, 14 Feb 2021

I liked it. Nice delve into the scientific aspects, enough to show you know what you are talking about, but not enough to bore the hell out of the reader. I also might be discussing multiple universes in my current novel, but not sure yet if I...

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Posted in Happy Valentines

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